Dan & Raevyn (Realistic RP)

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((This is my character, of course.))

Name: Mariska Hetten
Age: 17
History: She wrote all her secrets in a diary for many years, but her friend found it and read it to everyone just before Mr. and Mrs. Hetten decided to divorce; she made a vow with herself not to trust people.
Appearance: Blond hair; tall; wears striped shirts quite a lot.
Likes: Old-fashioned sitcoms, though she won’t admit it; her mother; drawing
Dislikes: Trust; her father; her ex-friend Janine.

[Dan]

So what should my character be? Should he be another outcast as well?

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((Eh, whatever you want. I'm not experienced with this.))

[Dan]

My characters aren't that detailed.

Name: Kyle Williams
Age: 18
Looks: Short, brown hair, blue eyes
Is extremely shy

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Would you prefer first person or third person writing for this? :)

[Dan]

Third person. Can you start?

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OK.

She was working on her latest project, a landscape sketch of a boat.
"That's awesome," said Antigone.
Mariska almost smiled, but an image of Janine's sneering face floated into her mind, and she continued drawing, trying to be oblivious to the compliment.
Iggy's the kind of person who's nice to EVERYONE, she reminded herself. She doesn't really like it.

[Dan]

((Are they at school?))

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((Yes. I'm not great with descriptions, tbh))

[Dan]

((Should he already have a crush on her?))

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((Up to you. :))

[Dan]

((He will.))

Kyle looked over Mariska's shoulder. He had always thought she was an amazing drawer. In fact, he had liked everything about her for as long as he could remember. She was the most beautiful girl he had ever seen. If only she would notice him.

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When the drawing was finished, Mariska put it in her portfolio (all the students had one, but hers was, not surprisingly, the thickest).
She turned around and locked eyes with the boy who was staring at her, opened her mouth to say something, then thought better of it.

[Dan]

Kyle blushed when she turned around to look at him. He looked down to avoid her gaze. He had given up on doing homework because he had been staring at her all hour. He couldn't focus with her in front of him. Hopefully she wouldn't get mad at him.

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She turned and walked away, pretending to be casual, but really, she was alarmed. Kyle gave her feelings she'd blocked out months ago. Feelings like trust.

Hours later, Janine tripped Mariska as she was heading for algebra. Her books flew out of her hands as mean Mr. Edwardson passed.

"Next time be more careful," he snapped. "Or mark my words, I'll expel you without looking back."

[Dan]

Kyle sighed as she walked away. He had expected that, She always ignored him. Why did she do that? It hurt him a lot but he tried not to show it. He should be used to her ignoring him but he couldn't get over it. He would need to find a way to make her like him. It would be hard but he would try.

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The next day was the same as usual: She got to school, ignored Janine, went to classes, and ignored Janine some more.
But today it was harder, because Janine was making her pathetic "Forgive me" face every time Mariska looked at her. No way would that jerk ever be close to her again!, Mariska decided.
At least the weekend was coming as she stepped out the front doors for the high school.

[Dan]

Kyle walked into school the next day trying not to think about Mariska. He knew she would just ignore him like she always did but he couldn't help himself from looking over at her as he walked into school. He hoped she didn't notice because she would probably freak out at him again.