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Feb 2019 group read- Let the Right One In
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Feb 12, 2019 09:31AM

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I like the notes, Graeme.
I totally agree on note 1.
On note 3, (view spoiler)
On note 5, (view spoiler)

That’s the part I’m at as well. [spoilers removed]"
I think (view spoiler)

That’s the part I’m at as well. [spoilers removed]"..."
True!

I don't feel any sympathy - I was suggesting a 'permanent,' action for Hakan to take to solve all his problems in one 'hit.'

Just a thought, the core of the story is the relationship between Oskar and Eli. Time spent off that relationship could operate as a distraction, breaking the narrative flow, etc.
I found the sections on Tomas, and his mother and Staffan as filler. That subplot could have been downplayed and tightened the focus of the story.


It's a classic error.
Un-necessary subplots result in loss of focus on the core thrust of the narrative, and break engagement with the reader.

Totally agree with you on this point Graeme!

Also was a little frustrating the way that a lot of characters had the same or similar names. Tomas is Johnny's bully friend. Tommy is the neighbor who has the subplot with the police man Stefan. Of which I'm sure there were at least 3 people in the novel named Stefan.


Seems they would always be chaos around her!

Hi Amanda.
The Ending.
(view spoiler)


I also drew a parallel with (view spoiler)

Late to the party!

Holy smokes, that was a crazy part in the book! Agreed Terry.

I also drew a parallel with [spoilers removed]"
Both great points! I can see that in both classics.

I feel though that the pacing, similar names and unneeded chapters of Tommy and the druken crew weren't really needed.
So for that, it lost a bit of rating for me.
But the overall plot of Eli (view spoiler)
One last thing, I was a bit confused with the chapter in where (view spoiler)
Some one help me untangle this part out in my brain!



Terry wrote: "I wish I could help untangle that part Ginger, but I was just as confused! It was certainly brutal. I had a hard time with it actually."
Glad I'm not the only one that had issues with that scene! It was hard to read but also hard to understand what the heck was going on.

I'm not sure what happened to Eli to make him a vamp, but at some point the vampire must have bitten him, and made him one. (Off scene?)

I'm not sure what happened to Eli to..."
It just seemed a bit mumbo jumbo to me too! Glad I'm not the only one. hahaha





(Chortle). Science! Indeed.

I loved that part of the book as well! What an interesting concept!

I'm in civil engineering and surveying Terry! We're both always looking for the science in most stuff. hahaha!
And throw in some math & history for me and now I'm cooking. My brain is in overdrive.

Don't feel guilty Terry! You just got me 10 more likes on my review with your dissertation with Graeme. *chuckling* hahaha!

I'm in civil engineering and surveying Terry! We're both always looking for the science in most stuff...."
Yes, that 'great minds thinking alike thing', haha!

Don't feel gui..."
Yes, perfect!



I'm finally getting started, and I'm really looking forward to understanding what you're talking about. About 15% in.

I'm finally getting started, and I'm really looking forward to understanding what you're talking about. About 15% in."
Enjoy Katy!!

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