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♥~♥Geri is Mrs. Charlie Hunnam ♥~♥ wrote: "Lady Vigilante (Feifei) wrote: "Aside from that I have no clue LOL!"Aside from that, what does this dude do? I thought based on that first chapter that he left and wasn't doing his dad's dirty wo..."
No clue lol! Well at the 65% mark he says he's the King of the Underground so I'm assuming he's been in this line of work for all his life
Hello friends.....feeling a bit better this morning! Are y'all done? Hahaha! Busy day for me so not sure how much reading I'll get done! Going to go back and read through all of the comments! :)
Hey J! Morning! I'm at 80% but stopping for a few hours to run errands :D
Lady Vigilante (Feifei) wrote: "Hey J! Morning! I'm at 80% but stopping for a few hours to run errands :D"Are you still liking it?
I was wondering if the "look" was going to be overdone.....lol!
Yeah I am :D I love both MCs but the CAPS and the writing gets on my nerves.
Lady Vigilante (Feifei) wrote: "Yeah I am :D I love both MCs but the CAPS and the writing gets on my nerves."Yeah....I can see that! At least both MCs are likable.....can't wait to read some more. I'll update later. Have a great day Feifei!
J *I did it all for the nookie.The book nookie* wrote: "Lady Vigilante (Feifei) wrote: "Yeah I am :D I love both MCs but the CAPS and the writing gets on my nerves."Yeah....I can see that! At least both MCs are likable.....can't wait to read some mor..."
You too! :D
You guys are cracking me up!!!!
:D :D :DBtw, never thanked you for your review because it's the one that got me interested in this book. I really like it! :)
I'm definitely bringing up the rear then. I'm still at 38%.
Towards the middle I ended up skimming some of the sex scenes...they were kinda boring. Maybe you should skip those LOL! :D
Greyson keep saying he HAS NO NAME. But he has a name, Greyson. It pops up in weird places too. Lol!
Hahaha! One of many weird writing quirks from KE :P
Does Katy Evans have anything against periods? :/
Possibly ;) Comma splices & run-on sentences seem to be her favorite :D
Did she ditch the wedding to have sex with Greyson? I mean, maybe I missed the part where they went to the reception or something. :PAnd I'm waiting for her to make the connection. So far there are clues to his identity but she doesn't recognize it.
The chit's an airhead. I'm so used to reading about kickass, tough heroines Melanie and her bubbly self was really a breath of fresh air :DI think they had sex after the wedding...I remember Greyson catching up to her after the vows were done and asked if she was ignoring him.
Lady Vigilante (Feifei) wrote: "The chit's an airhead. I'm so used to reading about kickass, tough heroines Melanie and her bubbly self was really a breath of fresh air :DI think they had sex after the wedding...I remember Grey..."
So no reception then? Hmm...I'm still liking it but I can't help but feel like all of it is existing in a vacuum. Greyson, the Underground, Mel's debts. It's there and we get a bit of explanation but it doesn't delve really deep. This could have been a lot darker and more intriguing. So far, it's just about Mel and finding her twu wuv and how hot he is. Teehee.
♥~♥Geri is Mrs. Charlie Hunnam ♥~♥ wrote: "Lady Vigilante (Feifei) wrote: "The chit's an airhead. I'm so used to reading about kickass, tough heroines Melanie and her bubbly self was really a breath of fresh air :DI think they had sex aft..."
Honestly, I think if KE made it more dark and more edgy, it'd be somewhat of a fail lol. Her strongest writing point is to create sexual tension :P
It picks up in the last 30% LOL! :D
Lady Vigilante (Feifei) wrote: "♥~♥Geri is Mrs. Charlie Hunnam ♥~♥ wrote: "Lady Vigilante (Feifei) wrote: "The chit's an airhead. I'm so used to reading about kickass, tough heroines Melanie and her bubbly self was really a breat..."Lol! It would probably end up being funny. I have to say it's not as repetitive as Real and Mine, so that's definitely a plus!
♥~♥Geri is Mrs. Charlie Hunnam ♥~♥ wrote: "Lady Vigilante (Feifei) wrote: "♥~♥Geri is Mrs. Charlie Hunnam ♥~♥ wrote: "Lady Vigilante (Feifei) wrote: "The chit's an airhead. I'm so used to reading about kickass, tough heroines Melanie and he..."Definitely a plus! Another plus in my book is that there's an actual plot (despite nothing being super developed). Gotta give points for that :D
The editing and her writing style, however, is another story.
Lady Vigilante (Feifei) wrote: "♥~♥Geri is Mrs. Charlie Hunnam ♥~♥ wrote: "Lady Vigilante (Feifei) wrote: "♥~♥Geri is Mrs. Charlie Hunnam ♥~♥ wrote: "Lady Vigilante (Feifei) wrote: "The chit's an airhead. I'm so used to reading a..."Yes to the plot. Even with the huge plot holes in it, I still appreciate it. And Greyson's POV made this a lot more well rounded than Real.
♥~♥Geri is Mrs. Charlie Hunnam ♥~♥ wrote: "Lady Vigilante (Feifei) wrote: "♥~♥Geri is Mrs. Charlie Hunnam ♥~♥ wrote: "Lady Vigilante (Feifei) wrote: "♥~♥Geri is Mrs. Charlie Hunnam ♥~♥ wrote: "Lady Vigilante (Feifei) wrote: "The chit's an a..."Definitely!
44%<-- "I cannot oxygenate." --> LMAO! I cannot breathe would work too, KE. But whatever. LOL!
Hahahahaha highlighted that too! Good entertainment :D
Hahahaha! Jesus! This woman needs to reel it in. Step away from the Thesaurus, Katy Evans. Step.AWAY!
LMFAO! Tell me when you're done and maybe we can compare notes hahaha! :D
"His breathing begins to deepen and . . . oh, wow. He’s asleep." LMAO! I dunno why this made me laugh but it did. I thought he was gonna be something profound or epic but oh, wow. He fell asleep. Lol!
I'm trying to read fast but Katy Evans keeps stopping me. LoL!
Asleep sounds a lot better than say, passed out LOL!
"For the first time in my life, I want to lie in bed next to a guy and listen to him breathe, slow and deep, like he’s breathing." OMG! Laughing so hard.
I thought he was going to say something and I think Mel thought he was going to say something too. But oh, wow, he's asleep. I'm disappointed in you, Greyson. lol!
Ahahahahahaha!!! Terrible editor I say
I'm not far....still at 34%....but here's my contribution to the lack of editing and terrible grammar."Suddenly nothing feels righter than this."
I'm terrible at grammar myself but correct me if I'm wrong.....more right would have been much better? Yes? No?
LOL yes you're right! :D
J *I did it all for the nookie.The book nookie* wrote: "I'm not far....still at 34%....but here's my contribution to the lack of editing and terrible grammar."Suddenly nothing feels righter than this."
I'm terrible at grammar myself but correct me if..."
Yes! Lol! I'm willing to overlook some of her grammar because she did have a plot this time. But sometimes, her writing throws me off.
OMG! Why is she capitalizing THE LOOK every single time? LOL!
♥~♥Geri is Mrs. Charlie Hunnam ♥~♥ wrote: "OMG! Why is she capitalizing THE LOOK every single time? LOL!"Right?! EVERY.SINGLE.TIME.
Is this THE LOOK?
O___O
Morning guys!! I'm stuck at 60%. I'm hoping to finish this one today. :D
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♥~♥Geri is Mrs. Charlie Hunnam ♥~♥ wrote: "Morning guys!! I'm stuck at 60%. I'm hoping to finish this one today. :D"I just finished.....overall not too shabby! I'd give it 3.5/4 stars! THE LOOK was definitely overdone and some of the dialogue.....both said and thought made me roll my eyes but I thought it was a decent read. Plenty hot that's for sure. :):)
J *I did it all for the nookie.The book nookie* wrote: "♥~♥Geri is Mrs. Charlie Hunnam ♥~♥ wrote: "Morning guys!! I'm stuck at 60%. I'm hoping to finish this one today. :D"I just finished.....overall not too shabby! I'd give it 3.5/4 stars!"
Ahahahaha!! I'm the last one then. Can't wait to read your review, J!!
♥~♥Geri is Mrs. Charlie Hunnam ♥~♥ wrote: "J *I did it all for the nookie.The book nookie* wrote: "♥~♥Geri is Mrs. Charlie Hunnam ♥~♥ wrote: "Morning guys!! I'm stuck at 60%. I'm hoping to finish this one today. :D"I just finished.....ove..."
May have to use that THE LOOK gif or something similar....it will definitely be making my review! LMAO!
J *I did it all for the nookie.The book nookie* wrote: "♥~♥Geri is Mrs. Charlie Hunnam ♥~♥ wrote: "J *I did it all for the nookie.The book nookie* wrote: "♥~♥Geri is Mrs. Charlie Hunnam ♥~♥ wrote: "Morning guys!! I'm stuck at 60%. I'm hoping to finish t..."Hahahaha!! Use away.
J *I did it all for the nookie.The book nookie* wrote: "♥~♥Geri is Mrs. Charlie Hunnam ♥~♥ wrote: "J *I did it all for the nookie.The book nookie* wrote: "♥~♥Geri is Mrs. Charlie Hunnam ♥~♥ wrote: "Morning guys!! I'm stuck at 60%. I'm hoping to finish t..."LOL!! Looking forward to your review J! :D :D
♥~♥Geri is Mrs. Charlie Hunnam ♥~♥ wrote: "Morning guys!! I'm stuck at 60%. I'm hoping to finish this one today. :D":D :D :D
Aside from that, what does this dude do? I thought based on that first chapter that he left and wasn't doing his dad's dirty work anymore until they made a deal, right? Or maybe I am reading this wrong. Lol!