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Ryan location 2325 : iut wasn't - it wasn't
location 2333 : rear on into- rear one into
location 2338 : myself throbe inside- throb
location 2338 : coming imediately - coming immediately
location 2339 : just all to much - just all too much
location 2341 : breath heavy on top - breath heavily on top
location 2320 : sweet necter - sweet nectar
location 2318 : savoring her maons and shy - savoring her moans and shy
location 1961 : neck, but where these his? - neck, but were these his?
location 1016 : Blondie and breather out some of - Blondie and breathe out some of
location 241 : my armor had experiment worked - my armor experiment had worked


Ryan location 2988 : The leaves where still - The leaves were still
location 3061 : small hole in the far there. - small hole in the far wall there.
location 3584 : one of me men to bring - one of my men to bring
location 3590 : I won't touch a harm a single innocent - I won't touch or harm a single innocent
location 3637 : he screamed and faught then - he screamed and fought, then
location 3641 : his bidding where now - his bidding were now
location 3662 : brought the spear in from of them - brought the spear in front of them
location 3686 : shot them a glare and then quieted down - shot them a glare and they quieted down


message 3: by John (new)

John Cruo Thanks, I will fix those.


message 4: by John (new)

John Cruo The changes have been applied. It will take up to 72 hours to be approved again and post with the changes. After that time you can delete your copy and redownload. All future copies will no longer have these typos.


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