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High Voltage Spoiler Thread

And yes, the Dani we all know doesn't go around making idle threats and promises. She comes thru and this will be reflected in our fic hohohoho.

lmao... omg yeah I had forgot..."
I felt like I was getting bashed over the head with all the MEANT TO BE! WRITTEN IN THE LITERAL STARS thing. lmao maybe I'm just an unromantic hater but I HATE when authors pull that predestined crap. I wasn't real attached to Mac and Barrons so their mural thing was whatever I was like "ok just don't do that to Ryodan and Dani if they get together". I just feel like it's so damn cheap. What was the point of the whole love affair if one of the person's all knowing, knows their epic lady love has arrived. How boring. Like I find it way more fun to go on the journey see the damn twists and turns. But I guess all the men in this series just know everything at this point and don't need to evolve as characters and along in the relationship like the stupid women do hohoho
I know some people loved that part, think it's sweet though so maybe it's just my demonic unromantic ass showing idk.

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Its takes the reallity away from the whole thing and makes it a bit on a disney level of a love story imo :) maybe thats why u dont like it. Maybe thats why othets do ;-P

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So this was one of my biggest issues. She still loves dancer- which is fine- she been talks about when they meet again. Like his and her red thread will meet again. So...is ryodan just a place holder until then? I know its more than reasonable to love more than one person but when you are contemplating having cray sex for like entirety with your beast dude but then nostalgically talk about when i meet dancer again within pages of each other- it kind of cheapens both great supposed love affairs. apparently Dancer knew Dani was going to be all that and bag a chips- ryodan only needed a falling star thing to point him in the right direction. Ry you are a tool.

exactly- a contradiction of ideas for sure. I almost- and hesitate to say this- but i think danis last story would have been better played if we saw her and ryodan together at the beginning, then dancer was reintroduced, i don't know how he survived- DOnt ask me. lol but then the conflict would have been does dani stay with ryodan or get with dancer again. just a thought
In reality for me it seemed as though if dancer would have lived for eternity, ryodan never had a shot, to me at least. And then i think to myself i kind of felt dancer was a pity f- in fever whatever when they got together now after the red thread thing i feel like Ryodan is the pity f......chew on that!!

I felt like Dancer would have told the thing from the letter to Dani eventually if he'd stayed alive. Which is kinda sucky... dont know what genius, open-minded teen you need to be to realize the girl you love loves somebody else too and be willing to left her go .. or be part-time with her or whatever. For sure it would hurt him. And it would be super angsty melodrama... melodrama that is so unfitting for the crazy dynamic characters we got introduced to in ICED.

I think Dancer originally was just intended to be the young love Dani loses her virginity to because it would be inappropriate to make it Ryodan. I remember the author mentioning she loved Dancer and it was hard to let him go. I think this has something to do with those mixed signals in the book tbh. Dancer was so great so refreshing for a male character in this series. I don't think it was ever the intention for Dani/Dancer to have a full fledged relationship. They got what, 3 days to be together? Before the author kills him off to make way for Ryodan's allegedly true epic love. The way Dancer was taken out makes you wonder what could have been since we didn't even see that relationship in the first place. I think it was also used to show Ryodan Killian SAINT James is such a good guy, so benevolent that he lets Dani have sex with someone other than him. Don't get me wrong I'm glad that Dani did get to experience Dancer's relationship it was one of my favorite parts of FS.
In the end I think Dancer and Dani's love affair was more epic than Ryodan and Dani's lol. Like you said June he knew from the jump Dani was special and he understood her in ways Ryodan didn't even understand her, like with Jada. Ryodan was so rude to call him a damn short timer (the disrespect to my poor geek boi!) but Dancer's ass lit up those few pages with everything he had- eat that Ryodan! lmao Like Dancer was out there making pizzas for his girl AWC. You realize the work behind that? Wasn't like there was delivery or Digiorno! I bet he even hand tossed that pizza. What did Ryodan feed her? artificial snacks from the trunk of his ferrari? that lazy fool. I'll take Dancer any day of the week, a man who makes you pizza is one worth keeping around. He literally put everything he had into their lovemaking, he devoted his literal life to it. He worked on his fitness to look good for Dani even knowing he could die!
I will not let his memory be tarnished!!! Y'rill messed up with that red thread, she snipped the wrong one!

this isn't epic-- this is a painful thing called--she's just not that into you right now. Seriously if you need to be chained up so your girl can go find herself by sleeping around dublin because you know you would kill every dude she does the nasty with says to me maybe this isn't going to work out.
maybe just you know-- do paperwork until she's ready to commit to another serious relationship? dumb storyline
and i might as well say it- the lor watching over her while he was away....holy crap. I love you so much i would never leave you unprotected....just that i would leave you with obviously my least brilliant enforcer because dani you almost died and got raped within pages of each incident. WTG Lor!!! Ryodan ripped Lors heart out for sleeping with Jo----you telling me protecting Dani the way Lor did---didn't deserve a little talking down to at least???? a throat ripping???maybe??

The nine were reduced to some weird ass uncontrollably horny men. They can't see a naked women without raping them? Um is this for real?? Did I read that right?? I'm sorry I just don't see Dani thinking him willingly caging himself as some sort of alleged heroic act considering her childhood. She hates cages, values people making the most of their time. The cool calculating man who excels at the long game can't go without murdering guys that Dani chooses to sleep with? Like I get he's a beast but like this is wild! lmao How is any facet of this healthy or desirable? I feel like I'm missing something.
June you're right he should still get to working on that paperwork, particularly divorce papers because Dani Killian St James seems like she'll grow tired of all this foolery.

RIGHTTTTTTT!!!! every naked woman out there BEWARE.
And Lor was so busy not really doing his job to bring him a fresh corpse? lol Dani would have hated that cage stuff. so melodramatic. I thought he was doing something cool too. What a waste of potential cool storyline. I mean if she called and he was in the middle of a war yet he choose to go to her would have been much more epic. And she just kind of thought about him for wish time-- so that means she might never have called him. No wonder BArrons thought you were an idiot.

Dani should've ripped his heart out personally the moment he said that. You can't smooth everything over with a "honey" Lor! you walking embodiment of the dumb blonde bimbo stereotype!! how come no one ever calls him out on his foolery, he's a total flop. Can't even protect Dani for shit. Dani's always getting shit on in these books lmao
I know such wasted potential, Ryodan and Dani in Iced were so epic and connected together in battle and they never again had one of those moments since. I don't think that whack ass battle at that knock off chester's or that one page take out of Balor showed them working as a team the same way.
I hated how all the blame got shifted onto Dani for not calling him-Dani even buys into it! Even though he left her and made it very clear she wasn't wanted to tag along. Stupid Dani didn't even take that as an invitation to ring him up what the hell was her problem! And all this drama over a damn phone call! lmao this was more like a storyline you'd see on the real housewives than a fever series plot. only nowhere near as fun :(

Im beginning to have the feeling KMo didn't want to write Dani anymore after Iced. It came out of her spontaneously, because she didn't want to write Mac/Barrons again after SF (good gut feeling, wish she had followed it!), and then it caused bunch of mess, purely driven by the demographics of her fanbase. Which she let affect her since she is way too involved with her fans. And so she found herself unable to pick the Dani story back again.
And as a result she wrote the whole Dani story weirdly, from POVs of anybody but Dani's, postponing the actually Ryo/Dani showdown till the very last pages of the very last book.. and even then it came out weirdly and unwillingly and also (importantly) - finite. So that she doesn't have to go back to Dani's POV and story-telling again.
Now there are plans for the ever-going Fever world and good for her and all her remaining fans... but that doesn't erase the fact that she let down a great portion of her fans through Dani's story. I just wished she'd commit to the story she was telling and wasn't experimenting with her writings on us...

Probably KMO's whole "It could have be this, and it could be that! The possibilities are endless" thing. Just done very badly. That chapter where she was imagining having married Dancer and having kids with her was so frustrating for me because it was so disingenuous to pretend Dancer had a chance or that possibility ever existed.


That part was so unbelievable. Like no way! One, those ideas are so outdated and insulting to men and women and beasts everywhere. And two, Mac stripped naked in front of the nine in Shadowfever and there was no indication of them not being able to resist her. So what the hell?

Yea, all the blame is shifted on the women in this series. Dani is too stubborn and didn't call Ryodan. Mac is too stubborn and caused all the fights between her and Barrons. The woman are always talked down to in this series and told how to feel and what they need to accept. And the men are saints who are waiting and waiting for them to make up their minds. And they know everything! UGHHHH!

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We hope it makes you laugh as much as the first one ho ho ho.


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You two are a fucking RIOT
To future readers I highly recommend reading while the mentioned songs are playing in the background. It heightens the experience

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These fanfics are a motherfucking.gift. Thank you.
The Dani/Ryo/Shazzy twerk off is the best thing to happen since Iced.
My only mistake was reading this while having a cup of tea, I almost inhaled some if it.


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Omg, but indeed this is perfect!!
The dick-pic and the cracked ebony floors and the geothermal power beneath LOOL
And I finally LOVED Rainbow Girl

No pretense there xD Pink and proud!
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Best line tho:
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omg thankyou so much Carol lmao! we love writing these fics, it's like a weird balm for our hurt fangirl souls.
@Emily best thing since iced
dude that's the highest compliment ever lmao! I feel at this point the only place where ryodani r as close to actual cannon as they will ever be is in our heads lmao. Get hyped for the finale ladies its gonna be wild! One last chapter is coming to wrap up this whack ass crack fic trilogy lmao. (our tribute to the trilogy that dani was promised but never ended up getting)
@Anomis
lmaoooo yesssss kween
watching you're guys reaction to our fic is almost as good as writing the damn thing. keep the reaction gifs coming lmao!

@Emily what a compliment omg ahahahha you're too kind lmao
ahaha Anomis!!! lmao did the impossible and made ya love Mac eh? Honestly writing out these weird wild ass scenarios has been so strangely therapeutic ahaha.


dude that's the highest compliment ever lmao! I feel at this point the only place where ryodani r as close to actual cannon as they will ever be is in our heads lmao. Get hyped for the finale ladies its gonna be wild! One last chapter is coming to wrap up this whack ass crack fic trilogy lmao. (our tribute to the trilogy that dani was promised but never ended up getting)"
YASSSSSSS!! I'm so hyped for the finale you don't even know!! I'd be posting all kinds of reaction gifs right about now if I could figure out how to do it (never seems to work when I try).
This has been a truly worthy tribute!
About part 2, weird as it sounds, I too was happy to see Mac in all her pink-iness. Favourite quote: (view spoiler) lolol!!

Anyways, thanks again for delivering and embracing the quirks of each character in a way I haven't seen for a while!

@Emily that line was all Fresiako and it finished me lmao. She really knows how to channel Mac ahahah.
Honestly I never really cared too much for Mac but good or bad she was such a distinct character, in a world of the kind of tomboy badass heroine in urban fantasy, Mac's unabashed femininity really set her apart. Now she's more like grey mac instead of rainbow girl lmao. Honestly I feel like all the female characters are kind of merging in to one in this series. They all even have the same style, leather pants, leather jackets, combat boots lmao can u imagine all the squeaking every time these people move around? like that one snl skit with britney spears trying on all leather outfits (man this took some digging to find lmao http://www.nbc.com/saturday-night-liv... )

But mainly, you go to the gif you want to use (there's a lot of popular gif sites like giphy or tenor lol) right click on it and select "copy image address"
type this into the comment/review box:
<*img src = " PASTE URL HERE " *>
remove *'s and all spaces except for the one between "img src" and paste the image address in between the quotes lol and you should be good!
(make sure the url ends in .gif or else it won't work lol)
select preview to make sure it works first (it sometimes takes a bit to load here on goodreads idk why, flop formatting I guess) and boom! u too can be a gif assassin. This is also how you post gifs pretty much anywhere on the internet too, not just goodreads! I hope this is helpful for anyone out there lmao.

But mainly, you go to..."

This has been bugging me forever. Yay!!! TY, Shookitha!

Honestly I never really cared too much for Mac but good or bad she was such a distinct character, in a world of the kind of tomboy badass heroine in urban fantasy, Mac's unabashed femininity really set her apart. Now she's more like grey mac instead of rainbow girl lmao. Honestly I feel like all the female characters are kind of merging in to one in this series. They all even have the same style, leather pants, leather jackets, combat boots lmao can u imagine all the squeaking every time these people move around? like that one snl skit with britney spears trying on all leather outfits (man this took some digging to find lmao http://www.nbc.com/saturday-night-liv... )"
I hear you, girl!! I still don't get why Dani needed to lose all her distict personality traits in the process of 'growing up'. She sounded like Mac in HiVo. Makes sense now why we didn't get any teasers before the book launch, obsessive people like us would probably have noticed the change in tone lol. Would be kinda interesting to see if KMM takes in any critique about this for the next book...
@Carol, I agree that name was a total misdirection, this book was not electric at all. To be fair, she did say this book had a different feel than the rest, but it never occurred to me that it was a fancy way of saying Dani has become a dud.

Actually... it's the paddle fans that get me every time! lol
@ SHOOKITHA JONES
I know the whole locked up thing was so strange and a total wtf moment. I thought he was doing something epic in faery maybe fighting the tribunal. then we find out he locked himself in a cage and starved himself. Like what? Lor couldn't bring him some fresh corpses?
Yes!!! A total WTF moment. I was thinking he was doing something important off world and the big bad had trapped him so that he couldn't be with her-so I was totally gobsmacked when he revealed where he had been. I think I was more shocked than Dani!!!! LOL
and then to top it off we find out Lor was just chillin watching on debating whether or not to help Dani from getting raped but figured "nah, she's got this she's my lil honey
Further proof that Lor is a waste of space. So much for being a protective alpha male. Although, in fairness to KMM and her consistency as an author, I always thought the bit where Ryo claimed that he had 'been' there to 'look after her' when Jayne stole Dani's sword and left her lying injured in the street was always a little bit suspicious too. I mean, in Christian's PoV he never mentions that Ryo did anything to direct him find Dani and help her-how could he have done that anyway? And then he has the cheek to make Dani her change her clothes afterwards because he didn't like the smell of Christian on her. I mean, get real. You either want someone else to rescue your girl for you or not and you accept the consequences. If he was so possessive that he could not stand the smell of Christian on Dani, why on earth did he allow Christian to rescue her if he was already there and could have rescued her himself?

You just won the interent!
And this!!
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Pretty much sums up Barrons and Mac relationship

yaaaaaas Emily I knew you could do it! already coming out the gate with killer gif choices! I'm so proud lmao Anomis you better watch out Emily's coming for your weirdly fitting, eerily accurate gif choices crown hohohoh. jk jk we can all break that crown into pieces and share it like in mean girls lmao


@Emily yes! I missed Dani's ferocious confidence in her abilities, even as Jada she had that. And I missed Dani's unshakeable belief that being in Dublin saving people in her city was her place, where she was 100% supposed to be. I think this is why the ending didn't work for me, Dani only getting to be in Dublin half of the time? Not only did it feel like her even getting this option was a total cop out so she can screw Ryodan part time, I don't believe Dani would be happy committing to Dublin half way. I think K Mo wanted to make her epic and legendary, but the whole point of Dani was the she already WAS epic and legendary and not for just for her superpowers. The worst most offensive and frankly unforgivable (dramatic I know, I'm wounded lmfao) part of this whole mess is that she made Dani boring without Ryodan . That's just straight up blasphemy.
@Mellifluous yes there's a lot of those moments like you mentioned, especially in Burned where she tried to backtrack and make Ryodan's actions seem better in retrospect. It ended up making no sense. Like how Ryodan supposedly heard Dani's bibliophile joke as she went into the white mansion with christian. But in Iced Dancer and Jo tell Dani Ryodan went all wild trying to find her and he's so mad when she returns he bashes her damn face into a column. Do these sound like the actions of a man who knew where she was all along? If they do, Ryodan's got even bigger issues than we knew about lmao.
@Anna glad you joined us!! lmao I'm happy you liked our crackfic. hahaha we may or may not harbor some resentment towards Barrons for not feeding that poor damn lemur

I used to be annoyed by Mac and Dani for things that would irritate me real life (I get Mac, you're from the south. And yes Dani, I understand. You're Mega). While irritating, they were at least quirky and made them stand apart as their own characters. However, I agree with you guys that they're now a bland mix of "badass". Everyone takes themselves too damn seriously and I miss fun.
Also I fucking love that SNL skit. One of my favorites

@Anomis, the gif game is on, lololol!!
@Shookitha, yeah, what was that 50/50 crap anyway, pretty convenient if you ask me... I kept thinking why not make it 40/60 or 30/70 while you're at it, as the way it was resolved just felt so contrived. The whole Hunter thing was too OTT for me, both for Dani and Shazam. They were epic enough the way they were!!

@Carol, in the next book we'll probably get Mac rambling on about magnolias and her daddy, Dani rambling on about cleaning and shoes, and that Enyo chick rambling on about guns and war.


@June I liked Fallon in the book from what I remember. idk it did seem like Fallon was coming for Dani's speed demon crown. maybe it's difficult coming up with new powers idk, chameleon thing was like the nine's power and the speed thing was like Dani's. I think when you have all these people with epic powers things get to be less immediate, threats less serious because everyone's immortal or souped up with enough power they might as well be. So the villains have to get bigger and bigger to keep up. There are no real stakes because nearly none of the big characters die/stay dead. Except my poor geek boi :(

@Emily I think our characterization for mac was pretty on point ho ho ho glad u liked our iconic mac lines.
@Ryodan being a hoe: that's always pissed me off! Like it still makes no sense. Getting angry at Dani for wearing Christian's clothes when he knew her clothes were in tatters and he got Christian to help her. lmao like bi-polar much old dude?
@Leatherpants lol SHOOKITHA that skit is too funny also for real they probs all do sound like that hahaha. Maybe that's why the fae keeps winning they can freaking hear team Dublin coming for them squeaking around in leather.
@Top or Bottom
ho ho ho maybe kmm knows that meaning and that was her intended read lmao. we know that ryodan offered up his sugar lumps to dani did he not?


ahahhaah it's a good theory tbh you should expand upon it. As for top or bottom and alleged buns offerings; I guess that's the beauty of interpretational freedom hohoho


And @meltem,
I just lo..."
yes jade thats the right word haha (at least i think lol).
Aww thanks gurl! we love hearing feedback about our fic. It's so much fun to write. And since kmm's fangirls all said instead of complaining we should just write our own fanfic if we wanted to see something entertaining we thought we might as well hahaha.
Are KMM's fangirls still out for blood? hahaha, that spoilers group is whack. Melissa already posted this but its so true their group signature should include this gif lol. It perfectly sums up their group philosophy.

I don't even post there no more just lurk in the shadows like a creep ho ho ho.

lmao stay in the shadows Fresiako u r too wild for that group. Everyone's welcome. Except Fresiako, that freak hohoho


peeking out at the fb group post drama like


looool I am there, lurking and waiting for KMM to drop another bomb
I don't know French and I used the translate option for it, it translates really well, I hope KMM read your comments too.
@Sookitha and Fresiako
I finally could read your story and what.was.that. lmao

you guys messed my makeup, I had to come back to office looking like a mess. You owe me BIG one lol


yessss anomis get hyped. >:D
Shookitha really released her inner pervert for this one. She literally made me so shook!
lmao i'm glad u guys enjoyed our little exercise in ryodani insanity. the impending twerk off is coming ho ho ho don't u worry.