Need your comments/thoughts on my short story

[Umagowri]

Hi
Please read and share your thoughts on my first short story
https://www.goodreads.com/story/show/...

[ANTONY]

Hi Umagowri
A mesmerizing pshoclogical Thriller full of twists and turns that keep you guessing till the climax . Your imaginative talent is highly appreciable.Best wishes

[Umagowri]

thanks a lot.

[Sujit]

The plot seems to be nice and hold a thrilling experience to the reader. Carry on the good work

[Umagowri]

thanks