If You could re-write the book, how would you do it?

[Booklover456]

Sort of like fan fic but changing the parts you didn't like! Write book four!

[Dramapuppy]

I liked the series except for Crossed. I would remove Crossed entirely and just summarize it at the end of Matched and beginning of Reached.

[Ilana]

Dramapuppy wrote: "I liked the series except for Crossed. I would remove Crossed entirely and just summarize it at the end of Matched and beginning of Reached."

the first time that i read Crossed i didn't like it but the 2nd time around i was a bigger fan. i think that i set aside my thoughts and just read the story for what it was, the journey across the mountain, and not about whether she was choosing one of the guys or another - and what it would mean.

i don't know what i would re-write - since i think that the story had it's integrity. i feel like we could def get novellas though since we learned that there were more connections between characters than were initially talked about.

[Dramapuppy]

Maybe so. I just found "the journey across the mountain," boring. It's not what I was looking for in the series.

[Stephanie]

Crossed was really boring and snail-paced. The rest of the series is also kind of slow-paced. If i did anything, I'd just shorten all three books into two or maybe even 1 longer book. I really did enjoy this series though, it just could of been a LOT SHORTER.

[✿ K.B]

Well I am reading the Matched and half way through but I guess I'm having second thoughts of reading the whole series because it is just not setting the mood like any other Dystopian series.It is not like Shatter Me series, Divergent, Hunger Games etc. etc. they really set the mood in the beginning, but Matched MmmMMmm nope!
Sorry for saying that but I would give it a 3 maybe.

[Ms.]

I would only write Matched, and make the ending more detailed and through.