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October 2017 Group Read: Mortal Showdown #BOM-oct-2017

It should be available on multiple platforms through Smash and Kindle, priced at 1 usd or its equivalent in other currencies. Not sure whether it's possible to pay in Ruble, Hryvna or North Korean won though.
Any comments, thought, critique and praise are equally welcome and I'm here to answer any question, if author's angle is required..



I wish it could cost less. Createspace (Amazon's arm, offering Print on Demand option) dictates quite high minimums to price a paperback..


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My first question relates to misinformation - should that be there, and if so, why? To show that a character is ignorant might be one purpose, but this presupposes the reader can tell the difference. (I am not referring to things that could yet be possible, but things in the past.) Examples: Korablyov brutally put down Prague spring. Actually, this was probably one of the least brutal military invasions ever. Similarly, Einstein kicked out of school. Actually, Einstein was a very good student, and got scores of 6 in a lot of subjects regularly. one source of confusion might be that both Switzerland and Germany rated student on a scale of 1 to 6, but Switzerland has 6 the best, while Germany had 1 the best. Einstein did not negate Newtonian mechanics, although this is a bit more difficult to explain. However, look at it this way - NASA sends probes to Mars and lands them within a few kilometres solely based on Newtonian mechanics.
Then there is "I didn't know how I became public enemy number 1" No idea at all? Really?
What does everyone think of the time spent in Thailand? Did it help the story?
I had trouble with Sasha abducted in broad daylight, with his heavily armed security "Neutralised in broad daylight". The implication is that Korablyov ordered this, and the Ukrainian government was totally useless, but if i get it right, this was still while the Ukrainian government was pro-Moscow. Why wouldn't someone as smart as Korablyov be a little smarter here? This goes to the question of whether the story is self-consistent.


I also questioned the Thailand part. It seemed too long for its purpose. We know Misha is a philanderer...no need to remind us of that. :)

Examples: Korablyov brutally put down Prague spring. Actually, this was probably one of the least brutal military invasions ever. Similarly, Einstein kicked out of school. Actually, Einstein was a very good student.....
Einstein did not negate Newtonian mechanics"
Not sure, my response is expected here, but just in case it is, my concise comments -:) :
First, thanks a lot for all the points and critique so far. Really helpful and tells me what doesn't work well.
Specifically, re misinformation, I'm not sure there is any.
'Brutality' isn't something clearly defined. In my view, sending tanks into a friendly country to suppress a policy change is quite brutal. I believe many Czechs might've thought so too. Surely, opinions may differ and I respect yours.
Re: Einstein, unfortunately, I didn't have the honor to study with him, but his dropping out of school is regarded a well-established myth, which at least partially isn't inaccurate, so Misha could've relied on it to make a point - of bowing to no authority, of chutzpah, of doubting everything. Wikipedia, history.com (I consider them reputed, but I cannot judge their accuracy) mention approximately this:
" IS IT TRUE THAT EINSTEIN WAS A LOUSY STUDENT?
In some ways, yes. When he was very young, Einstein’s parents worried that he had a learning disability because he was very slow to learn to talk. (He also avoided other children and had extraordinary temper tantrums.) When he started school, he did very well-he was a creative and persistent problem-solver-but he hated the rote, disciplined style of the teachers at his Munich school, and he dropped out when he was 15. Then, when he took the entrance examination for a polytechnic school in Zurich, he flunked. (He passed the math part, but failed the botany, zoology and language sections.) Einstein kept studying and was admitted to the polytechnic institute the following year, but even then he continued to struggle: His professors thought that he was smart but much too pleased with himself, and some doubted that he would graduate. He did, but not by much-which is how the young physicist found himself working in the Swiss Patent Office instead of at a school or university."
The quote is taken from here: http://www.history.com/topics/einstei...
Showing limits of thitherto unshakable Newtonian mechanics is undermining them, in my book -:)
Whoever proves (and I read this may be true) that light speed isn't the max, might equally undermine Einstein's relativity -:)

Got you, guys -:)
Thailand was designed to show that just simple fooling around is treasurable even for someone of Misha's caliber.. He could've lost this or that amount of millions, but a danger of losing a brother is a totally different issue. Besides, discovering that he was robbed off of much of his assets in the midst of the wildest party, seemed grotesque enough to go for it -:)

As for Thailand, yes, I suppose it goes to Misha's character, but that raises an issue that I think should be left until the final washup, but to summarise the question, Is Misha's character reasonably consistent with what we have to account for? Is he fit for purpose? Something for the others to discuss eventually.


The next thing I found unusual was that Koroblyov never even denied he had Sasha. I would have expected him to do that, then tell Misha that yes, this was something bad, and yes, if he put the word out, there would be a very good chance his men could find Sasha, but there would be a price, and Misha would have to do more than go to Thailand. He would expect Misha to do something that would help Russia retain its influence in Ukraine, and something better than just promise not to do anything.
On my reading, Koroblyov was responsible for taking Sasha, and he wanted something from Misha. Koroblyov was not interested in money, and he had no real interest in Sasha, and probably he could not care less about Misha except for Misha's public views on Ukraine. Therefore Koroblyov should have (a) demanded some course of action, and (b) offered some sort of carrot for compliance (and stick for non-compliance) more than just returning Sasha.
On point I found difficult - there were not a lot of clues as to who Koroblyov was. The implication was that he was very high up in Moscow, but presumably not the Director of the FSB. Outlining what he was would have made his actions in the first half of the book more credible for me.

Thanks for the vote of confidence -:)


If I may offer some perspective -:)
He agreed because of Oleg. Obviously (at least, I thought so) he had very close business ties with Oleg, so why wouldn't he want to try to help? The horse is nothing - just a tribute of respect, but he gained a powerful, well-connected friend in Ukraine and these guys might want to have 'lobbies' in the countries they have interests in...
Ian wrote: "The next thing I found unusual was that Koroblyov never even denied he had Sasha....."
Yes, he neither denied nor confirmed.. This wasn't important, as the assumption was that whoever holds him, Korablyov would be able to sort it out, if he wanted..
Ian wrote: "On my reading, Koroblyov was responsible for taking Sasha, and he wanted something from Misha....."
He wanted Misha neutralized (physically or otherwise) and he gained it. He didn't do anything for Misha, but for Aqsaqal (out of pretended respect) and having the latter owing a favor was of value for Korablyov.
Thought these undertones were there, but if they aren't, I guess I wasn't sufficiently diligent in providing insight into the motives of the (anti)heroes -:)


My feeling, Alex, in answer to your last question is yes. If Misha is supposed to be trying to get on the top of the Forbes list (why anyone would want to do that eludes me, but nevertheless . . .) I think his characterization should have him more focused on corporate matters. It is his major aim in life, but he largely ignores it all the way through the book.
This goes towards my washup question to come, but to get an idea, the issue is, are the characters fit for purpose? That is, given the way the characters behave, and on what they fail to do, could they reasonably be what they are stated to be? Something to think about for later.



It makes sense to me that the corporate matters are glossed over. Misha is not a corporate details guy, he's a "biznes" man. He surrounds himself with people who handle all of the actual business stuff while he cultivates relationships and uses his charisma for various means.
What did you all think of the initial meeting between Aqsaqal, Oleg, Misha and Koroblyov? I though it a quite believable interchange amongst oligarchs and politicians in general.
I agree with Nik on this one. What is intended and what actually happens at these meetings are often different. Face is important, especially in front of a figure such as the President of Kazakhstan. "Pretend respect" is a good way to describe it. Just because a character should do something, doesn't mean that he is going to do so at such a meeting.
Since Misha is the MC, what does everyone think about his character? Does he fall solidly into one of the noir crime thriller tropes? Do you like or care even a little about him? Does he seem real enough to you? Does he have character depth?
My issue with Misha is that he doesn't have a consistent voice. Sometimes he sounds like a frat boy, other times like a 1950s economics professor. My experience with people like Misha (not to say the billionaires, but the type) is that they speak the same way regardless of the situation. It's part of their inflated ego. They make lewd jokes at business meetings because they can, because people have no choice but to respect them.
I don't think he falls into any specific trope. Former Soviet oligarch isn't a character that's been done a lot, at least to my knowledge.
He seems real enough, if exaggerated at times. It's hard for me to care about him simply because he espouses so many things I disagree with. As for the depth, you really need to read the first book in the series to understand Misha. I found that everything that happens in the 2nd and 3rd books make a lot more sense once you get the full story of how Misha became the oligarch we know.

The lurching off into philosophy, economics, and one or two later lurchings about Ukraine were, I thought, more Nik speaking.
More on the Kazakh meeting - I would have thought Misha, if in character, would make some attempt to do some sort of deal with Koroblyov. Nick could make the case that the fact he didn't try would lead Koroblyov to think he would not keep his word, but that should occur to Misha as well. Misha seems to have no feel for strategy, which begs the question, how could he succeed in getting to where he is without learning something of it? In this way, I feel Misha's character was substandard. There was too much emphasis on his cavorting around, on philosophy etc, and nowhere near enough mention of business.

By using force and coercion to assert his legitimacy, his ego ballooned out of control. Not only did he know he was rich, but he needed to show it as well. He thinks he can solve any problem, bed any woman, or charm any person just by virtue of being who he is. His business acumen has very little to do with it.
My sense is that Misha wouldn't have made it in a competitive economy. He's an arbitrage chaser and a monopolist who takes advantage of lawless societies where influential people can be bought and sold. Even in that environment, he needed detail-oriented people around him to make sure things got done, while he reaped the rewards bestowed to any rich person.
You're right about the "Nik-isms." :)

I kind of agree with this.
Side note: Although his cavorting around might be used to show his hedonistic character, once or twice is probably sufficient in a thriller.
Kent wrote: "It makes sense to me that the corporate matters are glossed over. Misha is not a corporate details guy, he's a "biznes" man. He surrounds himself with people who handle all of the actual business stuff while he cultivates relationships and uses his charisma for various means."
But I also kind of agree with this.
So, Misha was consistent in these ways, but perhaps stretched the bounds of believability and hence suspension of disbelief.

Ah, a mafioso-type. That is good insight that makes more sense out of his character! I think that it's possible to garner that from the book, but perhaps reading the first one would have made it clear from the outset. Still, you can see the mafia honor system at work in family matters (view spoiler) .

Kent wrote: "I also questioned the Thailand part. It seemed too long for its purpose. We know Misha is a philanderer...no need to remind us of that. :)"
Going back to the Thailand series of scenes (on which Ian first opined), I thought that it was a much-needed moment of reflection, fraternal camaraderie, and philosophizing. However, with regard to that last purpose, up to this point in the book, I don't think Misha's philosophical bent, which is given full reign in this section, is provided sufficient motivation.

I agree with Alex that there is a strong case for a moment of reflection, but I rather fancy any really oriented oligarch would be reflecting on wealth and opportunities. That does not prevent the bout of hedonism, but chasing women, etc, should be a side event for "relaxation". He can't be doing that all day, so there should be some business oriented action. Again, I can't go further without spoiling, but I shall expand on this later.

Some of my insight, if you may find it interesting as a sort of 'behind the scenes':
Not sure I like Misha either -:) He has (in my imagination at least) - a conflicting personality rotating somewhere between survival, success and moneymaking in any possible way and something more noble, more lofty things in life, like family, patriotism, something meaningful. Sometimes the former come with the upper hand and the other time - the latter.
The concept of Misha - is not to show a successful businessman. He isn't. Kent grasped it quite well - he's a mafia type, macho, opportunist, taking what's easy and accessible to think what to do with it later or to hire someone to think how to make money of what he grabbed. When speaking about billionaires the emphasis is usually on their success story - how they made it and so on. This isn't the point here. I wanted to show that all those billionaires are regular people and not demi-gods: farting, acting silly, having other interests as well, being desperate, etc... Yes, they usually have wits, guts, killer instinct and so on, but stressing only these would be a little one-dimensional for me.
The 'accumulation' period of Misha's life is indeed in the first book.
Also, I don't know whether you've noticed, but a big percent (maybe up to 25-30) of the uber-rich go 'nuts' in the biz sense, once they made it very big. There is this 'giving pledge' among over 100 billionaires. Yeah, maybe it's not entirely sincere for some of them, but it's anti-business. Many become 'eccentric', although the majority probably still keeps steady.
When you struggle, compete, rush to the top, you are fully concentrated on moneymaking, but once you reach the top, some switch to something else - because they'd made it and look for other things, values, seeking to leave a legacy.
Doing biz in former USSR is much more demanding than in the developed world and connections-dependent. It's for a reason, many Russian, Ukrainian and other oligarchs retire or semi-retire quietly at 30 or 40 into more comfortable locations, be they London, Monaco or elsewhere..
Misha's voice inconsistency may result from combining somewhat irreconcilable features of being well-educated, intelligent, a little sensitive dude with the need to be ruthless, assertive, very cynical and crude gangster-type businessman/mafioso -:)
But Misha is now yours as much as mine, so every angle is certainly a valid opinion!

Ian wrote: "Kent makes an interesting point - we are reading these books the wrong way around."
We read the third book in this series, Be First or Be Dead, in a previous BoM and now Mortal Showdown, which is #2, but I was under the impression that the series was sequence-independent, no? Be First or Be Dead addressed an independent problem different from the one now in at issue in Mortal Showdown--even though Be First or Be Dead did make reference to the Puppet Master.
I suppose maintaining consistency and motivation in character development are common difficulties when writing a sequence-independent series. As opposed to a sequence-dependent series, in which it's expected that the reader would have already encountered the character development in the previous books and it wouldn't have to be repeated.

I appreciate Nik's comment about such rich people becoming eccentric, but do they do it this quickly? And while Gates has given away a huge amount of money, he still has about $83 billion, so he is hardly impoverished 😀
I guess my point is that the very rich and powerful are not exactly regular people. Regular people can't get there. These guys have something that puts them apart from all and sundry, and I think it is focus on the task. But I may be wrong, as you may have noticed I am not exactly ultra rich.

I was under the same impression, but then I read the first book and it explained so much about Misha's actions in the 3rd (and 2nd, as I found out after reading it) book.
Nik's comments
Totally agree about business in the former Soviet Union. It's not for the faint of heart. And there is a limit to what a person can endure. Plus, as we saw in Russia over the last 15 years, even the richest can get on the wrong side of the true power structure. Better to make your money and get out while you can.
But I may be wrong, as you may have noticed I am not exactly ultra rich.
What you may lack in finances, you more than make up for in knowledge. :)

On a second point, is it reasonable to think a Russian sub would be hanging around outside a French port just in case Misha went to sea? And then devote a torpedo to this yacht? How would a submerged sub know it was Misha's? The Russians surely would not want to be sinking the wrong yacht? How would the Russians know NO evidence whatsoever would be left? That, to me also did not seem realistic/plausible.


“The fictionalized memoir of a Ukrainian Oligarch”
And then add a preface and change the blurb to something like:
Although the exact persons and events are completely fictional they are based on real events as personally observed or experienced by the author.Adding some personal and nonfiction relevance to the series would really make for a unique piece in the thriller marketplace in that it sits in-between fiction and nonfiction about a time and place that is not generally well-covered in the thriller genre—and arguably even in nonfiction.

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