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message 1: by I'amber, I'll forget this world. (new)

I'amber (xiamberx) | 376 comments Mod
Post your writing here, [:

Post the list of your wirting, it's so much easier than pisting all your writing at once :D

http://www.goodreads.com/story/list/2...


message 2: by Indi (new)

Indi (indie_indigo) http://www.goodreads.com/story/list/1...

Here's my list. Not very long, I know. Hehe. =)


message 3: by [deleted user] (new)

Hi, um here is my list.
http://www.goodreads.com/story/list/2...

Its pretty long, =D


message 4: by I'amber, I'll forget this world. (new)

I'amber (xiamberx) | 376 comments Mod
I started a new one you guys, called my fallen angel, I think I'll be working on that, alone in lands of forever and maybe hard to breathe the most [;


message 5: by Indi (new)

Indi (indie_indigo) Yay!


message 6: by Indi (new)

Indi (indie_indigo) You mean a message? Okay.


message 7: by Indi (new)

Indi (indie_indigo) I'll try, anyway.


message 8: by Indi (new)

Indi (indie_indigo) Wait, how? How do I send everyone a message at once?


message 9: by I'amber, I'll forget this world. (new)

I'amber (xiamberx) | 376 comments Mod
Go to members and at bottm of page it says cast message to all members in group...


message 10: by I'amber, I'll forget this world. (new)

I'amber (xiamberx) | 376 comments Mod
NEW short story! Not done yet...
I'd LOVE feedback!http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/4...


message 11: by Renaynaynay! (new)

Renaynaynay! | 2 comments http://www.goodreads.com/story/list/2...
my stories.
i wouldnt read the last story.i havent done anything with it really


message 12: by [deleted user] (new)

http://www.goodreads.com/story/list/2...

I'm writing eight stories right now, so yeah. They're all romances, but some of them have other twists. Woohoo!


message 13: by Emily (new)

Emily um, here's my list: http://www.goodreads.com/story/list/2...
Yeah, it's pretty short


message 16: by I'amber, I'll forget this world. (new)

I'amber (xiamberx) | 376 comments Mod
Love yours, Madsion!


message 17: by madison (new)

madison (HBmadison) | 105 comments Thank you! =D


message 18: by I'amber, I'll forget this world. (new)

I'amber (xiamberx) | 376 comments Mod
Welcome, welcome!


message 19: by Kriss (new)

Kriss (krisslee) | 124 comments Heres a list of my writing that I'd love critism for, but I'd mostly like it for The Seventh Dimension and Shadows of Light at the moment :)
http://www.goodreads.com/story/list/2...


message 20: by Shalee (new)

Shalee | 12 comments http://www.goodreads.com/story/list/2...
shorrrrrrrrt, just started this morning. :(


message 21: by I'amber, I'll forget this world. (last edited Aug 22, 2009 10:29PM) (new)

I'amber (xiamberx) | 376 comments Mod
I truly LOVE Kriss's writing!

Ah!

& Shaleee yours is so great [:, isn't the second one with Adica in it the one I red in your notebook?

Puts my writing to shame.


message 22: by Kriss (new)

Kriss (krisslee) | 124 comments I'amber wrote: "I truly LOVE Kriss's writing to death!

Ah!

& Shaleee yours is great [:, isn't the second one with Adica in it the one I red in your notebook?"


Thankies :D I'm working on the next chapter for Shadows of Light at this very moment.


message 23: by Indi (new)

Indi (indie_indigo) Uh... gotta catch up on ppl's writing, I really do...


message 24: by Kriss (new)

Kriss (krisslee) | 124 comments ♥Jessica♥ wrote: "Uh... gotta catch up on ppl's writing, I really do..."

Lol, ^^ I know how that is.


message 25: by Indi (new)

Indi (indie_indigo) Yeah... I answered over 150 emails yesterday. All from goodreads.


message 26: by Indi (new)

Indi (indie_indigo) Cuz as I answer them, you know, ppl respond so I get more emails.


message 27: by I'amber, I'll forget this world. (new)

I'amber (xiamberx) | 376 comments Mod
;D

Ah, let me know when you post it.

http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/4...

Not so sure about this?

Idk if I should keep going and if I do should I make it long or a short story?


message 28: by Kriss (new)

Kriss (krisslee) | 124 comments I like it... But idk... you could try making it a short story first and if it needs room to grow, make it longer.


message 29: by I'amber, I'll forget this world. (new)

I'amber (xiamberx) | 376 comments Mod
Mk thank you. [:



message 30: by Kriss (new)

Kriss (krisslee) | 124 comments np ^^


message 31: by Kriss (new)

Kriss (krisslee) | 124 comments Can I ask you a question real quick about a quote from Shadows of Light?


message 32: by I'amber, I'll forget this world. (last edited Aug 22, 2009 10:49PM) (new)

I'amber (xiamberx) | 376 comments Mod
Mhm.:D


message 33: by Kriss (last edited Aug 22, 2009 10:50PM) (new)

Kriss (krisslee) | 124 comments :D Alright... Does this sound good, or does it sound corny?
Like a bird, you can never keep hold of a bird, no matter how much they love you, no matter how much you love them, if you let them free from their cage, they will always fly away.

But I’m not in love with you yet, he thought, I’m not ready to let go.



message 34: by I'amber, I'll forget this world. (new)

I'amber (xiamberx) | 376 comments Mod
No, no I like it.

It has to fit in the story in order to sound right, get what I'm saying and from the way you put it, explain it, and then wha the thought it fits.

Leave it.


message 35: by Kriss (new)

Kriss (krisslee) | 124 comments I'amber wrote: "No, no I like it.

It has to fit in the story in order to sound right, get what I'm saying and from the way you put it, explain it, and then wha the thought it fits.

Leave it."


Okay, thanks ^^


message 36: by I'amber, I'll forget this world. (new)

I'amber (xiamberx) | 376 comments Mod
But now I'mma go to bed, maybe...

I might be back on later but its 148am here and Ive been sleeping off and on ALL day so I;mma try to sleep, night!


message 37: by Kriss (new)

Kriss (krisslee) | 124 comments Goodnight, sleep well ^^


message 38: by Indi (new)

Indi (indie_indigo) That sounded really good! I really gotta read it now!


message 39: by Kriss (new)

Kriss (krisslee) | 124 comments lol


message 40: by Shalee (new)

Shalee | 12 comments Yes Amber, it's the one where the girls name was Gillian and she had a brother named Caleb. But this time her names Kadie and she doesn't have a brother. Plus Aiden wasn't introduced this early into it.


message 41: by I'amber, I'll forget this world. (new)

I'amber (xiamberx) | 376 comments Mod
Thought so.


message 42: by Kriss (new)

Kriss (krisslee) | 124 comments I'amber wrote: "Thought so."

I decided that The Seventh Dimension is going to be my NaNoWriMo novel :)


message 43: by I'amber, I'll forget this world. (new)

I'amber (xiamberx) | 376 comments Mod
Explain what Nanp WirMo novel is again.

So I just woke up not to long ago8.


message 44: by Kriss (new)

Kriss (krisslee) | 124 comments I'amber wrote: "Explain what Nanp WirMo novel is again.

So I just woke up not to long ago8."


I don't exactly know how to explain it but here's the link:
http://www.nanowrimo.org/eng/whatisnano


message 45: by I'amber, I'll forget this world. (new)

I'amber (xiamberx) | 376 comments Mod
Oh okay, hm, so r u putting Shadow of light on hold?

I think their both amazing.


message 46: by Kriss (new)

Kriss (krisslee) | 124 comments I'amber wrote: "Oh okay, hm, so r u putting Shadow of light on hold?

I think their both amazing."


Not and till Novermber, I'm still writing Shadows of Light :)


message 47: by I'amber, I'll forget this world. (new)

I'amber (xiamberx) | 376 comments Mod
[:

Yay :D


message 48: by Kriss (new)

Kriss (krisslee) | 124 comments lol


message 49: by I'amber, I'll forget this world. (new)

I'amber (xiamberx) | 376 comments Mod
:D

Mmm, I need to write more, but I just don't feel liek it \:


message 50: by Kriss (new)

Kriss (krisslee) | 124 comments I'amber wrote: ":D

Mmm, I need to write more, but I just don't feel liek it \:"


I probably need to write more too, lol, but I dont feel like it... o.o I see lightning out my window...


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