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message 51: by I'amber, I'll forget this world. (new)

I'amber (xiamberx) | 376 comments Mod
Ah really, it's like 322am here, and its sunny.. to sunny >.<


message 52: by Krys (new)

Krys (krisslee) | 124 comments I'amber wrote: "Ah really, it's like 322am here, and its sunny.. to sunny >.<"

Its kind of rainy here... Its thundering on and off...


message 53: by Indi (new)

Indi (indie_indigo) I feel like it, and I don't have writer's block, just... whenever I finish a chapter, I always hate starting the next one because i FEEL LIKE i'M STARTING OVER. =(


message 54: by Indi (new)

Indi (indie_indigo) Oops. Stupid capslock. Sorry, I thought I was pressing the shift button.... oops.


message 55: by Krys (new)

Krys (krisslee) | 124 comments ♥Jessica♥ wrote: "I feel like it, and I don't have writer's block, just... whenever I finish a chapter, I always hate starting the next one because i FEEL LIKE i'M STARTING OVER. =("

Lol... Sometimes I'm like that and other times I'm really excited about starting a new chapter.


message 56: by I'amber, I'll forget this world. (new)

I'amber (xiamberx) | 376 comments Mod
I second that, Kriss.

I just don't know if I'mma keep with any of my writings anymore \:


message 57: by Krys (new)

Krys (krisslee) | 124 comments I'amber wrote: "I second that, Kriss.

I just don't know if I'mma keep with any of my writings anymore \:"


Why? >.< You better keep writing...


message 58: by Indi (new)

Indi (indie_indigo) Yeah, I know how that feels, Kriss.

WHAT!? YOU HAVE TO WRITE UR STORIES, AMBER!!!!!! =0


message 59: by I'amber, I'll forget this world. (new)

I'amber (xiamberx) | 376 comments Mod
Its just like I'll write then read someone else and then it puts mine to shame \:

I LOVE LOVE LOVE it, don't get me wrong, it's my dream, but Idk.

I'm thinking of deteleing them all and just working on one for the time giving but I dout it, or just put all of them on hold and work on one till it's done, but I don't which one?


message 60: by Krys (new)

Krys (krisslee) | 124 comments I'amber wrote: "Its just like I'll write then read someone else and then it puts mine to shame \:

I LOVE LOVE LOVE it, don't get me wrong, it's my dream, but Idk.

I'm thinking of deteleing them all and just ..."


I like My Fallen Angel a lot :P


message 61: by Indi (new)

Indi (indie_indigo) Don't look at me, I luv them ALL!!!


message 62: by I'amber, I'll forget this world. (new)

I'amber (xiamberx) | 376 comments Mod
Thanks.


message 63: by Indi (new)

Indi (indie_indigo) It's true! I luv them all!!!


message 64: by I'amber, I'll forget this world. (new)

I'amber (xiamberx) | 376 comments Mod
[[[:


message 65: by Indi (new)

Indi (indie_indigo) =) They're awesome. I luv em. =)


message 66: by Krys (new)

Krys (krisslee) | 124 comments ♥Jessica♥ wrote: "=) They're awesome. I luv em. =)"

I agree.


message 67: by Indi (new)

Indi (indie_indigo) yup yup yup!!!!


message 68: by Krys (new)

Krys (krisslee) | 124 comments Can I ask a question for a synopses I've writen?


message 69: by Indi (new)

Indi (indie_indigo) um... still haven't read your writing yet. sorry! I was reading Guinea Pigs last night and then my mom made me go to bed so I didn't have time! Sorry!


message 70: by Krys (new)

Krys (krisslee) | 124 comments ♥Jessica♥ wrote: "um... still haven't read your writing yet. sorry! I was reading Guinea Pigs last night and then my mom made me go to bed so I didn't have time! Sorry!"

Lol, don't worry about it :) The Synopses is for my NaNoWriMo novel, no chapters are posted for it here, just a prolong :) I just need to kow whether or not the synopses makes senses, and whether it captures your attention, here it is if you want to read it :)
"In a flash he was gone, having disappeared in a flare of emerald-tone lighting."

There are Seven Dimensions in the universe; each is a shadow, a reflection of earth, showing different choices and decisions, different realities in the form of dreams. The Dreamers more often known as the Somnium are people on earth who can travel between the folds and rifts in reality to go into one of these other Dimensions, they can change the present within the blink of the eye, and they can alter the future. The only downside is if they meet there counter in one of these other dimensions, they die, and are lost for eternity drifting in a form of nothingness, alone, having lost their bodies they can’t return to the Seventh Dimension, the reality.
A girl-- untrained shows up with the power of the Somnium, born from a mortal and abandoned, brandishing blue fire, baring a mark like no others. She's the newest of the Somnium, first born in the form of a mortal as they all where. Jeremiah dreams about her repeatedly, he's the one whose supposed to find her, and when he does, will she listen?

Its a world of life and death. Of colored fire and immorality. With bends and twists in reality, folds and ripples in dreams. Dimensions, all mirroring a single counter, different versions of earth, different emotions represented in each, different realities coming in the form of dreams. A life of war and killing, eternal sacrifice and lies, filled with hidden truth and danger, with forgotten pasts and love ripped in two. A story of blue fire.






message 71: by I'amber, I'll forget this world. (new)

I'amber (xiamberx) | 376 comments Mod
It does bring me in, no dout and yes it makes since [:

And thanks guys.


message 72: by Krys (new)

Krys (krisslee) | 124 comments I'amber wrote: "It does bring me in, no dout and yes it makes since [:

And thanks guys."


Okay. And No Probelm ^^


message 73: by Indi (new)

Indi (indie_indigo) OH MY GOD, that is AWESOME!!! I HAVE to read it now!!!


message 74: by Krys (new)

Krys (krisslee) | 124 comments ♥Jessica♥ wrote: "OH MY GOD, that is AWESOME!!! I HAVE to read it now!!!"

Thanks :) But I don't have anything other than the prolong posted on here, I havent even writen anything other than the prolong.


message 75: by I'amber, I'll forget this world. (new)

I'amber (xiamberx) | 376 comments Mod
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I'm awefully jelly-ous of your amazing writing skills, kriss :D

Haha.

Okay so I've got it between Wrong one, and My fallen angel...??

-I'll be rewrting the first half of Wrong one.


message 76: by Krys (new)

Krys (krisslee) | 124 comments I'amber wrote: "[:

I'm awefully jelly-ous of your amazing writing skills, kriss :D

Haha.

Okay so I've got it between Wrong one, and My fallen angel...??

-I'll be rewrting the first half of Wrong one."


I'm horrible at writing >.< You're better than I am... And I like both those stories.


message 77: by I'amber, I'll forget this world. (new)

I'amber (xiamberx) | 376 comments Mod
Haha, your a funny one [;

Uhm, I'm not sure yet.

Okay you guys; evertying it says after the cobra strikes should I keep or take off and leave what I have?


I can't bare to let that face, those eyes go. To let my love, my heart go. I can't bare it because I'am weak, but I'm in love, is my excuse each time. Each time the cobra strikes.
--->
They always say its better to walk slowy away when coming in contact with a cobra, to never run or it shall strike.

Maybe thats my mistake, for each time I run only to get striked again, and again, never fully getting away, only getting stucked back in.
----> Keep?


message 78: by Indi (new)

Indi (indie_indigo) Yeah, that's really good!


message 79: by Krys (new)

Krys (krisslee) | 124 comments :D I finally finished the book cover for TSD:

http://s726.photobucket.com/albums/ww...


message 80: by I'amber, I'll forget this world. (new)

I'amber (xiamberx) | 376 comments Mod
Ooooh, I like it ^^


message 81: by Krys (new)

Krys (krisslee) | 124 comments I'amber wrote: "Ooooh, I like it ^^"

I think I'm going to add something to it ^^


message 82: by Krys (new)

Krys (krisslee) | 124 comments I added green lightning, but I think i like the first one better:
http://fotos.fotoflexer.com/d89e5c1db...


message 83: by I'amber, I'll forget this world. (new)

I'amber (xiamberx) | 376 comments Mod
NO, keep the green.

Gawd, I wann make one for Alone in the lands of forever, and My fallen angel, but IDK how \:


message 84: by Krys (new)

Krys (krisslee) | 124 comments I can give you the names of some sites ^^


message 85: by I'amber, I'll forget this world. (new)

I'amber (xiamberx) | 376 comments Mod
Please, I'll be forever grateful [:


message 86: by Krys (new)


message 87: by I'amber, I'll forget this world. (new)

I'amber (xiamberx) | 376 comments Mod
I use picnik, it makes me so mad at times ;p


message 88: by I'amber, I'll forget this world. (new)

I'amber (xiamberx) | 376 comments Mod
Thank u!


message 89: by Krys (new)

Krys (krisslee) | 124 comments np ^^


message 90: by I'amber, I'll forget this world. (new)

I'amber (xiamberx) | 376 comments Mod
I needa find a oicture now :D

Hmm, photobucket calls ^^


message 91: by Krys (new)

Krys (krisslee) | 124 comments I'amber wrote: "I needa find a oicture now :D

Hmm, photobucket calls ^^"


lol


message 92: by I'amber, I'll forget this world. (new)

I'amber (xiamberx) | 376 comments Mod
I gotta find someone who looks like either Ethan, or Lily.

\:

or for wrong one maybe just black wings on the cover, hell idk yet >.<


message 94: by Krys (new)

Krys (krisslee) | 124 comments I'amber wrote: "I gotta find someone who looks like either Ethan, or Lily.

\:

or for wrong one maybe just black wings on the cover, hell idk yet >.<"


Its hard making covers, lol.




message 95: by I'amber, I'll forget this world. (new)

I'amber (xiamberx) | 376 comments Mod
Yes, it is [:


message 96: by Krys (last edited Aug 23, 2009 03:54PM) (new)

Krys (krisslee) | 124 comments it took me forever to make the one for TSD... oh and then Bridgid made me one for Shadows of Light, i think I can post it here if you want ^^


message 97: by I'amber, I'll forget this world. (new)

I'amber (xiamberx) | 376 comments Mod
Oh yes, I wann see it [:


message 98: by Krys (new)

Krys (krisslee) | 124 comments okay.. I'm going to post a line to where its at, just scroll down the list :)


message 99: by Krys (new)

Krys (krisslee) | 124 comments Its the last picture in the list :)

http://www.goodreads.com/topic/show/1...


message 100: by I'amber, I'll forget this world. (new)

I'amber (xiamberx) | 376 comments Mod
Ohhh, she did a wonderful job, I love it.




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