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Sep 21, 2014 05:41PM
Both of the boys fought to get out of the train first somehow they both managed to get off of the train at the same time.
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"What? This isn't..." They said in unison of confusion.
Percy slams his sword in the ground shouting at the sky.
Harry starts pacing, twirling his wand between his fingers.
with a sudden motion percy pulles out riptide and slices harrys wand in half.
(I'm sorry, but I can't really have you do that. :-/ It kinda just ends the story super quick, with Harry defenseless. So if you could figure out a different way to add a twist, that would be great. :-))
Percy unleashes riptide, "Why?" (sorry that's kinda laim)
(Um: message 37: by bookwormsoph '"A sword. That's different." { Just realized Harry was muggle raised so he would know what a sword is... } '
*wizards have used swords.. Think griffindor's sword in the chamber of secrets...)
"Avada Kedavra!" Harry shrieked, and the life was immediately taken out of Percy."Sorry about that, man. It's just, you were kind of getting annoying."
JK, JK.
(Is this OK?) "Sorry about that, everybody. I accidentally pulled brake! We will get going in five minutes." says a voice.
Harry and Percy both turn around to see the train conductor.
(Sorry, that was more than one sentence.)
Totally ok. :-)
The conductor gave Percy a werid look, observing his sword. He shrugged and walked back, tipping his hat to Harry.
The conductor gave Percy a werid look, observing his sword. He shrugged and walked back, tipping his hat to Harry.
"That's enough. Let's have some FUN!" said Percy, and raised his sword.
Harry raised his wand at the same time, and the two glared at each other. Just then, both Ginny and Annabeth walked up giggling...
Ginny noticed them first and stopped abruptly.
she stared at the handsome sea green eyed boy wondering who on earth he is
Annabeth then stopped to notice how ugly both of them were, but then she realized that she was looking at her boyfriend, so she grabbed Ginny (that's what she said) and left to find someone else to admire.
( ITS ANNABETH!! AND PERCY IS SUPPOSED TO BE REALLY HANDSOME!!)
But weren't they all supposed to be in Hogwarts and Camp Half- Blood, respectively ???
THIS IS CONFUSING!!!!!
"Wait, wait." Percy said hastily. "You can't just erase my memory!"
"And Why Not?" Harry asked - not really getting the boy who smelled of salt and seaweed. Harry turned his face away from the smell.
"Because" yells percy "Want me to cut you in half!?!?!"
Queenjuicy wrote: "THIS IS CONFUSING!!!!!"I screwed up, sorry. Check my post now.
But still, why would Annabeth and Ginny randomly spring out into the scene? Let's start from message 111.
"That's enough. Let's have some FUN!" said Percy, and raised his sword.
Harry said"Crucify!"
(What does Crucify do?? I thought it was Crucio.)
"AHHH!! wait why am I fine?" Percy questioned, confused
Khyati wrote: "(What does Crucify do?? I thought it was Crucio.)"(it does. read my comment.)
For a split second, Percy thought he saw a glowing trident over his head, then it disappeared with a whisper. "I'll try to help, Percy." whisper the sea mist in the voice of his father. Harry flicked his wand, yelling something like "Stupidfy!" but Riptide jumped up and blocked the flash of light.
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