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Jan 18, 2018 08:19PM
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"Thank you Erza. How about I treat you on some dinner though. As a token of my graditude for the training you gave to me?", Jenares asked, bowing his head a little, putting his sword away. He didnt hope that his offer was nor too kind or too much but it did mean much for him that she starts training him.
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Altough it did seemed like that infaturation happend, it wasnt actually happening at all. The thing is that it is payment of fashion only cause although it looks like Jenares has a crush on her, he doenst have a crush on her at all. No, he doesnt know love. Atleast not anymore. That has all been destroyed during his horrible time in Bosco.
"I know a nice place in the south where you can get some delicious food. Follow me.", Jenares said nodding, walking back with her to Magnolia Town and once they arrived, they entered a small restaurant and there Jenares said: "Here you go. You can choose anything you like from the menu."
"I know a nice place in the south where you can get some delicious food. Follow me.", Jenares said nodding, walking back with her to Magnolia Town and once they arrived, they entered a small restaurant and there Jenares said: "Here you go. You can choose anything you like from the menu."
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((Sorry! I just noticed that my last post got somehow deleted :O))
"Thanks Erza. I've got this restaurant from a lady though where I stayed after I esca....,, ehh, I mean after Í've couldnt found no place to stay during my travels. ", Jenares said, thinking what he was going to take himsel altough he had to admit himself that he didnt knew either what all the items were.
"Thanks Erza. I've got this restaurant from a lady though where I stayed after I esca....,, ehh, I mean after Í've couldnt found no place to stay during my travels. ", Jenares said, thinking what he was going to take himsel altough he had to admit himself that he didnt knew either what all the items were.
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Erza was mostly judging the meals off the pictures. She pointed to a set of long, dripping skewers. "Have you tried this before?" she wondered. There was more than enough protein...
((Thanks!))
“No I havent. It looks delicious though.”, Jenares said, being interested while still checking if he could find something as well. It was all so difficult to choose from!
“No I havent. It looks delicious though.”, Jenares said, being interested while still checking if he could find something as well. It was all so difficult to choose from!
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"Then I shall order it for you then. I think I take that I try the small roasted beaf though.", Jenares said nodding, thinking it will do well as he couldnt choose something else.
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Well the thing is that Jenares couldnt afford it to get some cultural food himself and taking a seat, Jenares ordered himself some water.
Annabel walked into the restaurant looking forward to meet her half brother for the first time. She had hair as white as snow and dark red eyes and of course pale white skin. Some say that she is albino but she isn't. She is half celestial spirit. Always floating between this world and the next. After seeing her somewhat boyfriend die then get claimed as a celestial spirit, forgetting about his past including her, and then turning bad by the person who claimed him and then back to being dead because they banished him from the celestial world, she needed a new outtake on life. Oh she also forgot to mention that her mother used her as a freak show as well to earn income and then tried to marry her off. Her life sucked and she couldn't be any happier to be far away from her past as possible. She sat herself at one of those booths next to the window just gazing out when she noticed Ezra sitting. not to far from her and she couldn't believe her eyes, someone from the fairy tail guild. She quickly looked away hoping that she hadn't noticed her gaking at her.
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Erza looked over at Jenares and cleared her throat slightly. "Would you like me to get you something... a little more sustaining?" she checked politely.
((I couldnt really find a profile yet of her. Perhaps she should create her character first? As for your activity. Its really okay!))
"T-thanks for the offer Erza, but I'm really satisfied though.", Jenares said, his face a bit red as he knew that it could be a bit ashaming if he is the only one with cheap food, but still there was no lie in what he said cause where he came from, he could be happy already if he got himself some dry bread.
Not wanting to turn her offer down so easily though he said: "But if you insist on it then I'm really honored."
"T-thanks for the offer Erza, but I'm really satisfied though.", Jenares said, his face a bit red as he knew that it could be a bit ashaming if he is the only one with cheap food, but still there was no lie in what he said cause where he came from, he could be happy already if he got himself some dry bread.
Not wanting to turn her offer down so easily though he said: "But if you insist on it then I'm really honored."
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A guy had walked up to the table and asked Anabelle, "Hey are you Anabelle?" She looked up at him in surprised, "Yes I am....are you Leo?" He nods and awkwardly sits down. He has long orange spiked hair, he was about average height, and he has ears on the top of his head as if he were truly a lion. She smiles at him. "Its good to finally meet you..." Leo smiles back at her. He then notices Erza and Jenares from Fairy Tail and waves at them and turns his attention back to Anabelle and they continued their conversation as they learn to get to know each other.
((I edited my last post.))
The thing was actually that this wasnt really his code of honor. It was actually more an strange urge to make sure that everone he meets will be satisfied or not fallen short . Even it means that he has to take with less himself in a result. He does have his honor of course, but what is the reason for this? It wasnt like that he was evil once who now thinks it is time to pay for his crimes by doing deeds in return. No, the reason for this is much more complicated.
Really appricating though that she cares for him as well he said: "I dont wish to starve and because I really appricate your concern of me, I shall accept your offer.", wishing her a good meal before he then noticed that a woman seemed to wave at them and not being sure to wave back as he didnt knew her he asked: "Erza. Do you know that woman?"
The thing was actually that this wasnt really his code of honor. It was actually more an strange urge to make sure that everone he meets will be satisfied or not fallen short . Even it means that he has to take with less himself in a result. He does have his honor of course, but what is the reason for this? It wasnt like that he was evil once who now thinks it is time to pay for his crimes by doing deeds in return. No, the reason for this is much more complicated.
Really appricating though that she cares for him as well he said: "I dont wish to starve and because I really appricate your concern of me, I shall accept your offer.", wishing her a good meal before he then noticed that a woman seemed to wave at them and not being sure to wave back as he didnt knew her he asked: "Erza. Do you know that woman?"
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“I havent see her before either. It looks she is meeting Leo right there though”, Jenares said, not wanting to pay too much attention to it as he doesnt want to interupt Leo’s and the girls conversation and as Erza flagged the waiter, he was curious what she would get for him, but as she ordered him a great meal Jenares felt kinda suprised, not knowing how he could thank her for such a luxurious meal.
(Anabelle is already created and with Leo I only plan on using him this once for this scene it was the only thing I can think of to get everyone to meet and it was Leo who was waving at y'all not her.)
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Erza glanced once more at the woman. “I wasn’t aware Leo still visited Fairy Tail often. I believed he spent most of his time in the Celestial Realm.”
"Well I havent seen Leo much often around yet.", Jenares said, trying out one of the foods which she had ordered for him and as it tastes delicious he replied with a smile: "The food is amazing. Thank you so much Erza. If you want, you can try one of these things yourself."
Anabelle and Leo continued on their chit chat and it finally truly dawned on her that Leo had waved at Erza. "Wait a second... Did you wave at Erza a little while ago?" He looks up from his food at her and replied nonchalantly, "Yes I did. I used to be a member of the Fairy Tale guild before this girl Lucy had saved me and got me back into the Celestial World. Its a long story on all that but I do know her from the guild. This is my first time being out of the Celestial World without Lucy summoning me and its kinda relaxing without having to fight someone." At that little comment he busts out laughing.
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Erza politely accepted, sampling a small portion of everything. She ignored Leo and the girl, whom she assumed was a random fling, alone, trusting that they'd do the same to her.
((Well I'm a bit confused by this.)
Taking a bite of each food which Erza ordered him, he really enjoyed it and paying no attention to Leo and the girl anymore he said: "I've never been to a cultural restaurant before. The food tastes really good though.
Taking a bite of each food which Erza ordered him, he really enjoyed it and paying no attention to Leo and the girl anymore he said: "I've never been to a cultural restaurant before. The food tastes really good though.
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As she told him he recommended the place, Jenares blushed a bit and after he took a sip of his drink he said: “Yes I did as I heard it is a very populair restaurant. I just never been to it before though.”
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She nodded her head, pursing her lips. "Well, that's fine."
Anabelle and Leo's food came to their table finally and they started eating not saying much since they said almost everything they could think of before the food arrived. After they were finished eating they decided to leave and say their goodbyes. Anabelle shook Leo's hand, "Well its nice to finally meet you and I hope to see you again soon." He chuckled a bit and said, "I don't know, it might be a while...Lucy likes to keep me busy." Anabelle smiles at him, "Yeah she does seem like a big hand full but none the less...." He just nods and awkwardly hugs her, "Later lil sis." Anabelle says quietly as he disappears into the celestial world, "Bye."
Giving a soft smile, Jenares then continued to try out their lovely foods, but then he noticed that a man in a black shadow was watching him and before he could ask Erza who that man was, the man stood up and dissapeared quickly.
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Erza had not noticed, which was odd for her. She seemed to be rather enraptured with a specific strawberry shake that had been placed in front of her. She had ordered it casually, almost without him noticing. It was like... a strawberry cheesecake shake. Which made it all the more impressive in her opinion.
(How does it not work? I don't remember seeing anything on this thread about celestial spirits and on the show itself it never mentions how the spirits are made. If you mean it doesn't make sense its an RPG it doesn't exactly have to make sense as long as it goes with story and seeing that that would be the last post about Leo at least for a long while it shouldn't matter? If you want me to hop off just say so and I will be more than glad to do so but until then I'm going to keep doing what I'm doing.)Anabelle starts walking home enjoying the quiet night air, humming to herself. She decides to stop for a little bit to enjoy the view of the moon reflecting in the river.
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I would not have approved this character. I like that you wrote out a backstory -so many neglect this, but the fact that your character can turn into a phoenix (VERY Overpowered), is immediately related to a canon character -we do not allow this usually, is half-celestial spirit -this borders on ridiculous; human and celestial spirits have never procreated. The Celestial King doesn't seem to have any love interest in any human, and any relations would probably not work genetically. Also, he would go for an abusive human and allow his offspring to be abused? Very unlikely. Her friend also being a celestial spirit and having a key is dubious. From what is shown, humanoids aren't spirits unless they're part of the nobility or the 12 zodiacs. And why can she turn into a literal phoenix, a bird of immense magical, immortal, and physical power?
Added onto this fact, you hijacked someone else's roleplay. It's etiquette to post ((Hey guys, do you mind if I join in and interact with your characters?)) before jumping into someone else's pre-planned plot and trying to get ingrained. People see it as rude and generally avoid or don't respond to someone who interrupts. Another option is, ((I'm looking for a partner. I see that you guys are still active; would one of you like to roleplay with my character in another thread?))
So, maybe I'm coming off as rude, but frankly, you're going to have to learn a couple things if you really want to thrive and have fun with other players, here are tips:
1. Canon characters are off limits for assumed family/relationships. If someone comes and claims the person, they have to exit the canonical personality of said character to cater to what you wrote up in your sheet. It usually leads to canon characters being avoided in play, because they just become a support for someone else's idea, and that is their sole role. It's as if you burst into the RP and claimed to be Erza's sister; it doesn't work well.
2. Thread etiquette. Ask before joining a RP. Any comments that aren't part of the story go in double-parenthesis. ((Hi, do you guys want to RP?))
3. Always listen to the mods and treat them with respect. If you refuse to do so, mods can always ban you from the group and prevent you from re-joining. Some people have come on to groups and trolled or been absolutely awful and required a ban. I don't actually see you being a problem. It's good to respect those who helped put the group together.
Now, if you actually want to RP with somebody instead of hinting that you want in, but not really approaching, we can try something with one of my other characters. I'd be happy to kind of show you the ropes and get you ingrained in the group.))
(Ok I see where are your coming from with Leo and its not really over powering when she can't even stay in this form for very long and again she is more focused as a healer instead of a fighter and seeing as you have to approve membership into this group and this being the only RP that you have in this group I didn't think you need to ask. And honestly I thought I was being respectful as possible. I just don't appreciate it when being talked down too, if I don't take it from work or any of my friends or family I'm not going to let a complete stranger doing so. I'll be more than happy to leave if you think I'm being disrespectful I have other groups as well that I RP in and also I've been doing this for years since I was 12 to be exact (Now 20) not on here but with IMVU, skype, some other people from school that I honestly didn't know very well, and with my sister and her friends not once have they ever told me about not using my imagination and that I have to follow exactly what the shows that we RP'd went by. If you want me to change my character to something weaker, fine, not like I was going to use her "celestial form" much. But saying that the Celestial King will most likely not let his offspring be "abused" or that it seemed like he didn't have any love interests, that's just assuming and not using much imagination. Which btw that's what RP is all about. For all you know he doesn't have any love interests but maybe her mother used him for sex because she couldn't find a guy to get laid and was really sexually frustrated or maybe she wanted to have someone to control without a contract where she has to follow rules and maybe the Celestial King just want to uphold his own rules wether if his kids got hurt in the process or not? Maybe they didn't even have any real "feelings" as most people would put it. They never did say how they were formed just that they come from another world to help people with some magic ability. Now the whole creation of half human half celestial why couldn't that be possible? Because it doesn't make sense? Name one anime show that makes sense. Now the whole phoenix thing is a thing that I made when I was doing a fairy tale rp with my sister a few years ago with the same back story btw but since we are always busy in different states I thought I could try goodreads since I heard they do RP as well and join a fairy tale rp since I thought it was a lot of fun when I did it with my sister but instead I got this group where I'm talked down to and it seems like y'all are stuck since there isn't much going on. Yes I should've created my character first before jumping in that's my fault right there but its already been approved by another mod. So am I in or not? If not let me know now so I can stop wasting my time.)
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Now, if you feel you are being disrespected, you have every right to leave. Respect should not be based solely on age, and if it was, I'd have seniority. I'm 22, and I've been on Goodreads for 7 years.
I've simply pointed out how Goodreads' roleplay settings are maintained and established, and the basic etiquette and civility that most groups hold their members to upon joining. You simply are asking if you are "In?" That's easy. Ask to roleplay with any one of the active members. We have threads galore. Or, specifically ask to join this RP here. Without knowing exactly what you're doing or what you want out of a roleplay, it's hard to incorporate you, meaning that you'll likely end up roleplaying by yourself, hoping someone interacts.
For instance, when you first joined, you exclusively interacted with Leo, which puts yourself away from our characters. We're unlikely to interact with your characters if you've interrupted our RP and don't even really volunteer to speak with them beyond a casual 'hi'. If you want player with player interaction, it's always best to ask to join in advance. Butting in usually doesn't yield satisfying results.
So, what exactly are you asking? Do you want to join here? Move your character to another RP topic and set something up with other characters? What plot do you want to occur with your character?))
((As founder of the group I first of course want to tell that I'm happy you joined our group and if you like, you certainly can join here. However, Ilsa is right. If you want to join a rp then you first need to create a character and let him approved him/her by any of the mods. And once thats done, you go to either Romance Request or Team/Partner request so you can ask for a rp partner and once you finnd one, you can discuss a rp with him/her.
As for the directly related to Canon thing. I forgot to add that in the rules, but that is indeed not allowed.))
While Erza did not noticed the man, Jenares did saw the man moving away and as he suddenly widened his eyes and trying out a strawberry cheesecake shake as well which he really liked he then asked: "Uhm Erza. That man who sat there in the corner. Why was he watching us?", shaking a bit as he thought he could see a familair face, but perhaps he was mistaken.
As for the directly related to Canon thing. I forgot to add that in the rules, but that is indeed not allowed.))
While Erza did not noticed the man, Jenares did saw the man moving away and as he suddenly widened his eyes and trying out a strawberry cheesecake shake as well which he really liked he then asked: "Uhm Erza. That man who sat there in the corner. Why was he watching us?", shaking a bit as he thought he could see a familair face, but perhaps he was mistaken.
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“Oh but its just that I thought...”, Jenares said with low voice before sighing a bit, trying to calm himself by saying: “Never mind. I dont think it really matters.”, continuing to eat their food but outside, the man who left the restaurant went to a dark street cornor and there he took a mobile out of pocket saying: “I found him master but... I think we have a problem. He is in company with Erza!”, waiting for a few seconds before a woman voice would say: “Titania.... I see. Well remember your task. I want him to be brought back!”, the man replying before hanging up: “Yes. My master....””
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"Your welcome Erza. And yes, this restaurant is trully amazing. I want thank you too for ordering that lovely dinner.", Jenares said with a soft smile, bowing his head a little, knowing that its time to depart and once they were done eating, they stood up and left the restaurant, saying goodbye to eachother as they both went home.
However, around the corner, the man had noticed that they left and precisely at the moment when Erza was out of side he knew he could strike and secretly following Jenares for a moment, he waited untill he walked into dark alley and there, he attacked him from behind as in result that Jenares screamed in pain, making him fall on the ground as the man would shield off the area to prevent others from stopping him!
However, around the corner, the man had noticed that they left and precisely at the moment when Erza was out of side he knew he could strike and secretly following Jenares for a moment, he waited untill he walked into dark alley and there, he attacked him from behind as in result that Jenares screamed in pain, making him fall on the ground as the man would shield off the area to prevent others from stopping him!
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Trying to stand up, the man would then try to strike him with an anesthetic k but rolling to the side he quickly dodged it and noticing that Erza ran over towards the shield, he nodded at her advice and performing the Scorpion Defence he manged to block the mans attacks and getting up he drew out his sword and slashed it in the mans chest, making him yell out in pain and as Jenares then the skills he learned, the man soon noticed that he had to call of the attack and summoning a bright light, Jenares was blinded for a moment and once the light was gone, the man had dissapeared as in a result that the shield was gone.
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((Sorry about the huge delay!))
"Yes...", Jenares said, panting a bit, being glad that he was okay but at some point he was also in shock as for a moment, he saw a mark which would make him tremble in fear as it reminds him of his 'terrible past'. Trying to convince himself that his eyes were lying he said: "I saw a mark, but I dont remember what it is.", panting a bit heavy and nodding he said: "Thanks."
"Yes...", Jenares said, panting a bit, being glad that he was okay but at some point he was also in shock as for a moment, he saw a mark which would make him tremble in fear as it reminds him of his 'terrible past'. Trying to convince himself that his eyes were lying he said: "I saw a mark, but I dont remember what it is.", panting a bit heavy and nodding he said: "Thanks."
