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[D-Class] Dont be a menace for the people
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Nov 10, 2017 02:02PM
Soon, the noises were getting loud as he began to charge his magic and releasing some sharp air pressure attacks.
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Atleast, Jenares would take some rest and walking over to Erza's direction, he wanted to sat down at a tree but then he noticed Erza doing quite impressive stances and slashes and waiting for a moment she stopped he greeted her and said: "Oh, good morning Erza. I see you are also doing some practising. They look impressive.".
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It was odd that he'd come to rest where there was such cacophony, but that was no matter. She raised her eyebrows as she took him in. Had he followed her? Probably not, but she still felt odd about it. "Good morning. Thank you."
((You are teasing me are you? xD))
He didnt say anything for a few seconds as he didn’t knew to approach her right so with a soft smile he said: “A lovely morning to train right? I was doing some stances and sword skills at the river.
He didnt say anything for a few seconds as he didn’t knew to approach her right so with a soft smile he said: “A lovely morning to train right? I was doing some stances and sword skills at the river.
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"You're a long ways from the river. I think I heard you when I came by." She usually practiced at the river. She might need to find a more private spot, she considered remorsefully.
((Please dont do that XD *puppy eyes*))
“That could be possible as I thought I saw someone walking neaby.”, Jenares said still softly smiling a bit and not knowing why he asked this he said: “ W-would you like to train together?”
“That could be possible as I thought I saw someone walking neaby.”, Jenares said still softly smiling a bit and not knowing why he asked this he said: “ W-would you like to train together?”
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She sighed, seeming a little reluctant. She would definitely need to hold back. She didn't want to kill him, after all. She wouldn't get anything done! "It is probably better for you if I practice alone."
((Argh! Dx))
"A-are you sure? I know you are much stronger and experienced than me, but I thought that since we are both sword users, it would be fun if we could practise together. But I thank you for your concern and I accept your decision. Have a great training Erza.", Jenares said in a polite tone, slowly walking back to the lake.
"A-are you sure? I know you are much stronger and experienced than me, but I thought that since we are both sword users, it would be fun if we could practise together. But I thank you for your concern and I accept your decision. Have a great training Erza.", Jenares said in a polite tone, slowly walking back to the lake.
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Turning around, Jenares then looked back at her and giving a slight nod, he said: "Sure.", performing some stanced and sword skills, mainly using the air pressure to create pretty strong attacks. Although it didn't seemed that he was unexperienced, it was obviously to see that he still had much to grow, but he tried to perform his skills as best as he could.
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He blushed a bit, but following her advice he thanked her and getting his word thin, creating anohter slice, more controlled this time and one time he would do it slowly and the other time more quickly.
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"Thanks Erza.", Jenares said with a soft smile, getting more courage and slicing down at the ground, many leaves would dance in the sky and focussing on them, he charged his magic, repeating the slices as they would hit the leaves, the leaves shattering in the sky.
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"I will.", Jenares said, continuing to repeat these attacks as he tried to control his magic carefully as he didn't want to cause much damage to the trees around him.
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Watching how she swung her blade, Jenares then tried to do the same and as she took down two trees, he would take one tree down as well.
He was using his magic carefully, but he did felt that he was improving his swordman skills.
He was using his magic carefully, but he did felt that he was improving his swordman skills.
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He did had much magic remaining as he do have a large amount of magic. It is his strenght and agility though which needs to be trained most.
Having repeat these attacks he then looked over to Erza and said: "Am I doing well so far?"
Having repeat these attacks he then looked over to Erza and said: "Am I doing well so far?"
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Jenares surely need some time before he could master the techniques, but as long the importnant thing is that he keep practising them. Having taken some trees down, Jenares would thank her and sharpen his blade even more and increasing his magical strenght, he swang his blade so fast that a giant air pressure came out of the slash, cutting one big tree down.
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He blushed a bit by the compliment and nodding back he said with a small smile: "Thank you Erza. I do think too that I have indeed some strenght, but I'm also sure that I got lots too learn.", a small blush appearing on his cheeks as he didn't wanted to boast about himself.
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He nodded again and altough he was still blushing a bit, a soft smile appeared on his face and thinking of what he or they could practise next he then had an idea and asked: "Would you like to spar with me?"
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"Thank you. I will try to stay on my guard and do best.", Jenares said, waiting for her to allow him to get started and darting foreward, he would slash his sword towards her middle, making sure that the blade wouldn't hit her sword neither too high or too close as that could take him out of balance.
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Hypothetically it was a mistake yes, but by hitting it at the center first she had to guess if he would either move his sword down to the hilt or to the tip of her blade. By this, he dont want his moves to be predictable but as Erza's blade would move her blade up and starts beating at his tip, he still tried to focus and when she would slash down towards his center he leant foreward and trying to push back which was very hard as Erza's was incredibbly strong, he stepped aside, moving his sword towards the ground as Erza's blade would now hit the tip of his again and stepping in front of her again, he would now try taking dvantage by hitting her hilt.
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((I know, but I mean that he fights with dark thoughts. Like that he doesnt have control of his emotions. Edited the last lines.))
It was very stupid indeed and all of his movements seemed to be completely usesless. Even while he is in-experienced, he should have known better, but what made him being so uncertain again? After all, he did do a good job once he defeated the group of wizards. What makes him lacking his defence, his control, his focus, everything?
The answer is that there is a hidden fear inside him. And not only fear, but a deep anger as well. By focussing only on her blade he is only afraid that she would hurt him while the ironic thing is indeed that he lacking all of his defences by doing so, but what is the cause of his fear? Obviously, it had to do with something in the past. Yes, something terrible had happend and he would surely not speak of it, atleast not yet.
Again, mostly its because that he is in-experienced and nodding with an ashamed face he said: "I-ill try better..", trying to focus again and shaking a bit he would whisper a name and attacking at speed now, he would hit against her sword, combining it with some martial arts as such that he would made a somersault over her and quickly trying to hit her in the back, but once again he made a big mistake as he was now being guided by his emotions. Now using emotions isnt trully bad, but he doesnt have control of it. The fear, the anger was overwhelming him, making his attacks rather reckless.
It was very stupid indeed and all of his movements seemed to be completely usesless. Even while he is in-experienced, he should have known better, but what made him being so uncertain again? After all, he did do a good job once he defeated the group of wizards. What makes him lacking his defence, his control, his focus, everything?
The answer is that there is a hidden fear inside him. And not only fear, but a deep anger as well. By focussing only on her blade he is only afraid that she would hurt him while the ironic thing is indeed that he lacking all of his defences by doing so, but what is the cause of his fear? Obviously, it had to do with something in the past. Yes, something terrible had happend and he would surely not speak of it, atleast not yet.
Again, mostly its because that he is in-experienced and nodding with an ashamed face he said: "I-ill try better..", trying to focus again and shaking a bit he would whisper a name and attacking at speed now, he would hit against her sword, combining it with some martial arts as such that he would made a somersault over her and quickly trying to hit her in the back, but once again he made a big mistake as he was now being guided by his emotions. Now using emotions isnt trully bad, but he doesnt have control of it. The fear, the anger was overwhelming him, making his attacks rather reckless.
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"Thanks. I will try to do more better though.", Jenares said panting a bit and clashing his sword against hers, he tried to take control of the battle by fighting on speed, his blade making fast movements but even then he noticed that his sword art skills dont match to hers.
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"Thanks a lot Erza. You trully have great sword skills.", Jenares said with a soft smile, accepting his defeat. He knew of course that Erza could fight way and way more better and dangerous, but still he was much impressed.
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"I will.", Jenares said nodding, standing up and after he got some water he returned to her and asked: "I'm ready to start.", waiting for her to give him instructions, paying all attention to her.
He knew that she would push him hard. The guildmembers already warned him that she is definitely not a lady which will hold back. No matter what. Still though, he would try to obey in all she asks and requests from him.
He knew that she would push him hard. The guildmembers already warned him that she is definitely not a lady which will hold back. No matter what. Still though, he would try to obey in all she asks and requests from him.
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As she began demonstrating the basics, Jenares would try them himself and although he made some slight mistakes, he did manage to perform most of the stances correctly.
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After a while, Jenares finally had control of the basics and while exercising them he did admire Erza as even though the moves she was teaching him now are simple, she talked and explained them to him tike she was one with the art of the swordmanship. Like she understands every single detail of what it is to be a swordfighter.
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Jenares was glad that he was learning quickly. He was a good fighter indeed, but it was also due that Erza explained him all basics to him so well. After an hour has passed, Jenares finally learned most of the basics and looking over to Erza he asked: "I think I have most of the basics now.", showing gratitude to her for learning him all this.
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((I actually meant most of the basics she was teaching him now. My mistake xD))
Okay. Picking all of it might be a bit optimistic, but atleast he did perform most of the basics she was teaching him now. He still had to train and practise them often before he would master them, but the main thing was that he did was moving fast indeed.
Nodding at Erza he put his sword away and offering themselves some water he said with a soft smile: "Thanks for helping me with training Erza. You are a good teacher.".
Okay. Picking all of it might be a bit optimistic, but atleast he did perform most of the basics she was teaching him now. He still had to train and practise them often before he would master them, but the main thing was that he did was moving fast indeed.
Nodding at Erza he put his sword away and offering themselves some water he said with a soft smile: "Thanks for helping me with training Erza. You are a good teacher.".
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He nodded back at her and not really knowing what they should do next he asked: "Is, is there anything else we could do next or shall we go back to the guild?"
