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"It's no secret that someone else has to die.""
Sounds like a great first line.


"The new doctor took her by surprise. Not that there was any..."
This one starts out interesting too!

"The great horn sounded. Arlen paused in his work, looking up at the lavender wash of the dawn sky."

The beginning took me a bit by surprise too, Janice. It soon makes sense though ;)

"The great horn sounded. Arlen paused in his work, ..."
Sarah, it's not what you'd usually expect from the first line of a fantasy book. It's quite poetic actually!




From And the Mountains Echoed
So, then. You want a story and I will tell you one.

The End of the Point by Elizabeth Graver



I agree, Margo. I am struggling with the writing style. I thinks it's aimed to be poetic, but it ends being pretentious. I'm still giving it a chance.


I like this start, Lilisa.

http://www.telegraph.co.uk/culture/bo...
http://theasianwriter.co.uk/2016/06/a...


"On our wedding day I was forty-six, she was eighteen. Now I know what you are thinking: older man (not thin, somewhat bald, lame in one leg, teeth of wood) exercises the marital prerogative, thereby mortifying the poor young ---"


"The town feels like home immediately, and he credits the leaves. It must be a pickup day. Plastic bags bursting with withered remains of life are stacked on the curbs, a few spilling over onto the sidewalks, flecks of crimson and copper that dot the white concrete like blood splatters on pale flesh. The air is that contrary blend: alive with a smell, but the smell is death."
I had to give you the entire first paragraph.





It was a complete disaster for me!

This is what got me to buy the YA book I just finished, but I think it was all down hill from there.





"On the day of the tragedy, the boys of Windfield School had been confined to their rooms.
It was a hot Saturday in May, and they would normally have spent the afternoon on the south field, some playing cricket and others watching from the shady fringes of Bishop's Wood. But a crime had been committed."


"The town feels like home immediately, and he credits the leaves. It must be a pickup day. Plastic bags bursting with withered remains ..."
I love that first paragraph. This book's on my TBR list and I must get to it. Would it fit for 'Autumn' I wonder...?


"On the day of the tragedy, the boys of Windfield School had been confin..."
Ooh, I have to reread that one!

I love the way this lady plays with language! The almost quotations. The words are from Autumn - the grammer is all mine as I'm listening to the audio ;-)


"On the day of the tragedy, the boys of Windfield School ha..."
Why do all of his books have to be door stops? I still have not read this one and several others I have marked.
You are making me want to buy Autumn, Margo!

Lol, Cherie! Maybe he gets paid by the page? This one is actually not as long as some of his other books. It's around 600 pages. I still need to read World Without End and A Column of Fire. WWE has been on my TBR pile for a few years now, but I keep putting it off because it's so massive. Which is silly really because I adored The Pillars of the Earth.

Oh, I know what you mean. I thought TPotE was great too! I cannot believe how long it has been since I read it, yet there are so many scenes that I can see clear as day.

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Very much so! Autumn is a central theme.
I finished the book this afternoon and came very close to giving it 5 stars.

Lol, Cherie! Maybe he gets paid by the page? This one is actually no..."
POTE, WWE and A Dangerous Fortune basical all have the same characters translanted in history - it is almost like a Blackadder lol

Lol, Cherie! Maybe he gets paid by the page? This one i..."
Lol, Margo. I'm already noticing some similarities between the characters in A Dangerous Fortune and The Pillars of the Earth. I think Blackadder is right! I prefer the characters in TPOTE though, even the bad ones.

Lol, Cherie! Maybe he gets paid by the pa..."
As someone said to me (think it was Paul) if you've got good characters, use them!

Lol, Cherie! Maybe he gets p..."
I agree. If it ain't broke, don't fix it.

I've had POTE on my TBR list forever - I keep putting it off, although I listened to The Century Trilogy and particularly enjoyed the first two books. Do you recommend POTE?

Yes, I highly recommend POTE, Lilisa. It was a 5 star read for me and it's one of my favourite books of all time. It's long but it really rewards the effort. It's got great characters and the historical setting and world building are both excellent. I couldn't put it down once I got started.

yes, yes, YES

Yes, Lilisa - I think Margo and Lisa agree. We recommend it!
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"There was a hand in the darkness and it held a knife."
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I read that one, but didn't recognize it by the first lines. Definitely an interesting beginning.