three-line haiku; my attempts

[Robbie]

These are beautiful, Martin! Thanks for sharing them.

[sliknl]

Shutters flung ajar;
the morning iris unfurls through
eyes of no return.

[sliknl]

Two white rabbits hop
along the path in the dark -
Nikes in the night.

[sliknl]

My daughter stitches -
I see in her moving hands,
her mother - exact.

[sliknl]

Carefully balanced,
as fish swim in a brimful bowl,
... blink ... the tears spill out.

[sliknl]

The pins shower down
like raindrops on a tin roof,
around my bare feet.

[Robbie]

Sliknl wrote: "Carefully balanced,
as fish swim in a brimful bowl,
... blink ... the tears spill out."

I was just at the memorial service for a very dear man today, so I especially appreciate the beauty of this one

[sliknl]

Sliknl wrote: "The pins shower down
like raindrops on a tin roof,
around my bare feet."

Robbie wrote: "Sliknl wrote: "Carefully balanced,
as fish swim in a brimful bowl,
... blink ... the tears spill out."

I was just at the memorial service for a very dear man today, so I especially appreciate ..."

It is moments like these which touch us, I think. I remember one haiku (by Buson) which had that impact on me It went like this:
This piercing cold I feel
my dead wife's comb, in our bedroom
under my heel . . .

[Jo]

Summer has ended
But sunlight bathes my garden
My beatiful gold.

[Gerda]

Open fire roaring
Classical music playing softly
Winter afternoon

[Gerda]

Wintermorning in the park
the dog smells the icy grass
before disappearing

[Robbie]

Hooray! New poets. Beautiful!

[Jo]

Chilling my thin hands
the wind and air that's galore
chill my hands. Winter.

[Robbie]

Welcome back, Martin!
Welcome, Josephine!
Thanks for your beautiful haiku.

[Gerda]

swirling mist
wet grass and fresh smells
early autumn morning

[Robbie]

Beautiful, Gerda! I was wondering if you might be from Australia, and I see you are! Autumn is my favorite season--enjoy!

[Gerda]

Thanks Robbie, I was in the park that morning very early with my dog. It's a beautiful autumn in Melbourne at the moment. Cheers.

[Gerda]

the low sun
nights cold and dark
red leaf

[Grace]

what i like about your haiku is the certain style- you capture very clear images of, idk, a moment.

[Gerda]

hot sand
rasps between wet toes
run run

Hooray, it's summer here and pretty hot. Will spend quite some time on the beach with the dog.

[[deleted user]]

Summertime again
Birds in the air flutter,
squawk, squabble, wild & feral.