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First story "Tonight on Main"

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Emma Palova I consider the first story "Tonight on Main" probably the most mysterious out of the bunch, followed by the "Death Song."

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message 2: by Doc (new) - rated it 5 stars

Doc Chavent Tonight on Main is a story that puts side by side the deception in the soul and heart of the old and the anticipation in the eyes of the young. We see several contrasts happening at the same time, the exposed sins in the thoughts of the old women and the innocence of the young boy. The fast paced and noisy main street and the slow nonchalantly unveiling card game on the table. Once in a while one of the old women resurfaces from her sea of nostalgia to bring everyone back to reality with a simple phrase, later proven to be fateful, which goes ignored. Hard to say if purposefully or by simple oblivion. The card game continues as the women sink deeper into their memories. Everyone is attached to the past and no one wants to live in the present as portrayed by the decaying porch and old curtains on the window. In the end, we find out that feelings like jealousy and the need for revenge burns strong in the human heart.


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Emma Palova Tonight on Main also best manifests the shifting of character. #AsktheAuthor


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Emma Palova Join the discussion of The Temptation of Martin Duggan story


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Emma Palova #AsktheAuthor about egotistical characters in the stories?


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