Fixing Your First Page

[Kimi]

Hello there! I'm a freelance editor and I thought I would do something for fun. I will be starting this new series on my blog called "Fixing Your First Page" I will critique your first 250 words for free. I'll share my overall thoughts as well as my redline critique. If you want to know more about me, check out my website.

Here are the rules:

I will be posting this critique on my blog so you have to be aware that this is a public critique.

If you want to enter, all you have to do is email me your first 250 words at: ikram.belaid93@gmail.com

I will be posting these critiques once a week.

I will do my best to get to all the emails but it's going to be on a first-come-first-served basis.

Ready. Set. Email!

[Aliza]

Will you be emailing those you post on your blog to the author?

[Kimi]

I'm actually doing all of them. Yours is the last one I'm accepting. I will be posting one critique every Saturday on my blog. I'll email you to let you know when yours will be posted.

[Aliza]

Thx