This is most definitely a WIP. I'm not looking for editing, tense correction, or comma splices at this point. Right now I am just seeking feedback on whether or not the characters, plot, and writing are interesting, believable, and developed.
While I appreciate everyone's taking the time to look at this post, this is not for you if tense shifting will drive you bonkers - I fully admit to this problem up front. :)
If you're willing to give me honest feedback on what you (dis)like, what there was too much and not enough of, please contact me. Thanks so much!
While I appreciate everyone's taking the time to look at this post, this is not for you if tense shifting will drive you bonkers - I fully admit to this problem up front. :)
If you're willing to give me honest feedback on what you (dis)like, what there was too much and not enough of, please contact me. Thanks so much!