MAY 2017 MICROSTORY CONTEST - COMMENTS ONLY

[Dean]

The topic for this month's story is "Broken Bonds". This post is for comments only. General rules are found under Jot's post.

[Justin]

Powerful story Chris. Hit me right in the gut. Good work!

[Chris]

Thanks Justin! :)

[Paula]

Some seriously terrific stories this month. And continuing your terrific debut here, Matthew!

[Matthew]

Thanks, maybe one of these months I'll submit a story with actual dialogue in it.

[Jot]

I just "finished" my full length novel based my short and micros called Temporal Shift. If anyone would care to read it and provide a critique before I publish, please let me know. I'm sure an outside view would help to fix outstanding issues that I might have overlooked. Thanks...

[Justin]

Hello Jot, please send it to me. I would love to read it and give you feedback and write a review. I don't remember if you have my email or not so just let me know.

Congratulations on completing your book!

[Jot]

Thanks Justin. Maybe I can include some of your critique on the back cover with your name, if you agree. But most importantly, I want the truth from you. This is an extreme story line and I tried to write it from the first person perspective of two with an extreme view. Does not reflect my opinion.

I don't have your email, but if you email me at author.jotrussell@gmail.com, I can send it to you.

[Justin]

Sounds good. Just sent you an email at the address you listed. Thanks!

[Paula]

Wish I could, Jot, but I'm swamped in work and NO "free time now. I'm sorry.

[Paula]

Wrote this months's story but no time to go over it and get it in on time. Very work-heavy month. Sorry.