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message 1: by Kaseadillla (last edited Jun 01, 2017 05:15AM) (new)

Kaseadillla | 1373 comments Mod
Thanks, Victoria, for this suggestion!

How it works: Write one sentence to add to the story. That's it!
Rules: only ONE sentence please. No limits to your replies, but try to only write one sentence in a row at a time.
Try to ONLY READ THE COMMENT DIRECTLY PRIOR TO YOURS. Will make for a more fun read at the end.

Will close at the end of the quarter and we'll start a new one =)


To start us off...

Eleven blocks was a long way to run, but there was so much traffic and time was running out.


message 2: by Cheryl (new)

Cheryl (cherylllr) Her armor was weighing her down, so she shed it, knowing that if she didn't reach the portal in time it wouldn't matter whether she was defenseless.


message 3: by Brady (new)

Brady Parkin It was her first time without her armor since she entered her training.


message 4: by Sarah (new)

Sarah | 728 comments She felt naked... vulnerable... exposed.... everything she was trying to avoid on this critical mission through a foreign city where THEY could be watching at any given moment.


message 5: by Charlene (new)

Charlene | 6 comments She shook her head, trying to clear her thoughts. Focus, she told herself.


message 6: by Steffi (new)

Steffi (steffiw) | 15 comments The steaks had to be cooked to perfection or everything would be ruined!


message 7: by Zainab (new)

Zainab Al Lawati (zainaballawati) | 224 comments It is her debut in "La grande viande", the restaurant she always dreamt of opening since she was 11.


message 8: by Ying Ying (new)

Ying Ying (yingyingshi) | 71 comments She had been working as executive assistant in a Fortune 500 company, but now at the age of 41, 30 years after the seed of her dream had been planted, she finally dared to leave her job.


message 9: by Kelly (new)

Kelly | 25 comments She charged courageously toward her future.


message 10: by Leesa (new)

Leesa She boarded a plane with her one way ticket to Paris and a backpack that contains her only possessions.


message 11: by Marcos (new)

Marcos Kopschitz | 1766 comments No one expected her upon arrival, she knew that was a path she had to find on her own, as usual.


message 12: by Ying Ying (new)

Ying Ying (yingyingshi) | 71 comments She had grown unusually strong through practice.


message 13: by Victoria (new)

Victoria (victoriammd) | 58 comments But now, she good cut a tree as good as any men.


message 14: by Lena (new)

Lena (lelenif) That's why she suddenly wanted to become a logger.


message 15: by Kandice (new)

Kandice The idea of building a home with her own two hands, a home she could pass on to her children, was a lovely one.


message 16: by Victoria (new)

Victoria (victoriammd) | 58 comments But now, she was beginning to worry about what kind of mother she's going to be with only 3 months to go until she became one.


message 17: by Sarah (new)

Sarah | 728 comments She could almost hear the words her own mother used as a constant reminder during her youth, "I am your mother, I am not your friend."


message 18: by Ying Ying (new)

Ying Ying (yingyingshi) | 71 comments She wondered when she could finally find someone who could understand her, as a friend.


message 19: by Kandice (new)

Kandice It certainly wouldn't/couldn't/shouldn't be this child, mores the pity.


message 20: by Christine (new)

Christine (clarkepopunta) | 102 comments Yet her time had come despite her family connections, and the city had chosen her as the seasonal sacrifice.


message 21: by Victoria (new)

Victoria (victoriammd) | 58 comments Dying wasn't the problem for her, it was what she was going to become once they killed her.


message 22: by Christine (new)

Christine (clarkepopunta) | 102 comments Would she be mutton stew or lamb roast; haggis or lamb chops; or simply yet another sacrifice to the God of Rain, Tralenahk?


message 23: by Ying Ying (new)

Ying Ying (yingyingshi) | 71 comments So many dreams shattered, so many wishes unfulfilled, so delicious a life that will now be served as a summer dish to Tralenahk, the God of Rain.


Joanna Loves Reading (joannalovesreading) As the legend says, only the chosen warrior could survive the rigors of the sacrificial ceremony, a feat none has accomplished.


message 25: by Steffi (new)

Steffi (steffiw) | 15 comments But this was his chance. This was the day he showed everyone.


message 26: by Victoria (new)

Victoria (victoriammd) | 58 comments How he could bend his knee way more than everyone, and finally, no one would ever laugh.


Joanna Loves Reading (joannalovesreading) "Arrrghh!" Sal shouted, determined to overcome the growing fatigue.


message 28: by [deleted user] (last edited Jun 09, 2017 08:35AM) (new)

And suddenly, as if triggered by her shout, out of nowhere, there it appeared before her (which was a good thing, too, seeing that time was running out 25 posts previously): the portal!


message 29: by Victoria (new)

Victoria (victoriammd) | 58 comments But a portal to where, she wondered. Then she hesitated, as time was running out, whether she would go through it or not...


Joanna Loves Reading (joannalovesreading) Sal jumped as the portal began flicker, indicating time had run out.


message 31: by Kandice (new)

Kandice She was stuck...in time and space, waiting to see if it would send her to a new world or simply leave her here in this dried up husk of a land.


message 32: by Taz (new)

Taz | 148 comments And she couldn't help but wonder by what folly the beauty had all faded before she had ever chance to see it.


Joanna Loves Reading (joannalovesreading) Her inner voice was telling her to touch the luminous rock, and just as her hand reached out for it, a voice pierced her subconscious shouting, "Stop!"


message 34: by Kaseadillla (new)

Kaseadillla | 1373 comments Mod
Or at least, she thought it was her subconscious, until she turned around and saw him standing there; she wasn't sure if she was thrilled or pissed.


message 35: by Pete (new)

Pete (pedino69) | 24 comments She has seen this person before; a dream perhaps, at a training conference, or perhaps in another life.


message 36: by Victoria (new)

Victoria (victoriammd) | 58 comments Yes, she finally figured it out, she saw him two weeks before in a conference on Legos...


message 37: by Markus (new)

Markus | 14 comments He had the same kind of repulsive cockiness that fit his looks so well.


message 38: by génesis (new)

génesis When he saw her, he started walking in her direction, smiling, so she had to pretend to be delighted that he was dedicating a few minutes of his so busy schedule to her.


Joanna Loves Reading (joannalovesreading) "Wanna play? He asked with a wink.


message 40: by Roaa (new)

Roaa (roaaexe) "I'd rather not," she said, while looking for a way out of this place, she can't waste any more time.


message 41: by Kandice (new)

Kandice "Oh, but we had so much fun last time." he says with a lascivious wink, which comes as a complete surprise to her.


Joanna Loves Reading (joannalovesreading) "What did he mean?" She wondered.


message 43: by Pete (new)

Pete (pedino69) | 24 comments "You don't remember do you?"


message 44: by Kaseadillla (new)

Kaseadillla | 1373 comments Mod
"Of course I remember - last time you ended up with the book and I ended up at the bottom of the Charlestown well for 36 hours. Play? No thanks."


Joanna Loves Reading (joannalovesreading) "Ah, yes, it was such a tempting book that I could not resist. I especially enjoyed your notes. How exactly did you relate to the peanut-pilfering mouse?"


message 46: by Victoria (new)

Victoria (victoriammd) | 58 comments "I too am a peanut-pilfering mouse", Minnie replied, even though no one seemed to believe her.


message 47: by Beatriz (last edited Nov 17, 2017 04:36PM) (new)

Beatriz (thequietthing) That is to say, no one, except the man with the curled mustache, who had been lurking behind a potted fern, eating peanuts.


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