Recently Edited Need Feedback

[L.A.]

What Lies Within Dark SecretsAfter releasing this book the first time I got good reviews, however I took note of the bad reviews and had this book professionally edited. It is the first in five and I am currently in the process of having the rest of the series edited. I am looking for 20 people to review this book and give me feedback on the changes my editor made.

Unfortunately I am not computer literate and only have it available as a pdf file. If you are interested please send me your email and I will send you a copy. Looking for review turn around by end of the month. Fir synopsis click link.

"What Lies Within Dark Secrets"
https://www.goodreads.com/book/show/1...

[Cheryl]

Hi. You should really paragraph that. People sometimes get frightened off when they are faced with a huge chunk of words :)

[L.A.]

Thanks for suggestion

[[deleted user]]

please send me a copy, i'll mail you back my review my email id is "mndpkapoor@gmail.com"..........wants to read some good stuff

[L.A.]

Mandeep,

Copy has been sent.

Leslie