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i want to be a jellyfish

Good so far! I had a yummy breakfast Mom made me of apple cinnamon oatmeal!

Ooooo. Oatmeal. *starts salivating* I had bread with butter and chocolate sprinkles. They aren't the typical chocolate sprinkles because they are Dutch! *fist pump*
Any plans for today? Like reading? ;-)

That sounds good! Way better than mine!
I'm probably going to play some games. I tried to read yesterday but I kept getting distracted by funny youTube videos!



Mom thought it was really creepy though. XD

I can see how she would think that. XD A creep baking cupcakes? C'mon, you don't get any creepier than that! >.<


While it's technically done, I feel like it's just missing that special something. You know, the glue that holds it together. My idea was to develop the characters' relationships to their parents more since they're kinda glossed over, and I'm currently doing that to see if it'll help any.




I mentioned these relationships in the original draft, but now I'm thinking of going more in depth if you get what I'm saying.

What part do the parents have to play in this fanfic? Arebthey any importance to the story AT ALL?
Would the kids come closer to together because they want to comfort each other or would that seem out of the ordinary?
Would the relationship between their parents and the group of friends affect any one of them at all?
Would some kids be jealous of the parents their friends have that they don't?

The kids are very close to each other and would always do their best to comfort each other, especially after said event occurs.
One of them is fairly jealous since she wants to spend more time with her mom, but her mom is the busiest out of the group of parents.
Mom wants to make me chocolate bananas haha.

Mmmm. You should take her up on that offer

I'm not sure, I don't really like the taste of bananas, but I have to eat a lot for my current diet plan. But I do love the taste of chocolate!

Me too. . . I don't mind bananas when they're in shakes or desserts but having it by itself isn't really ideal for me. XD Who can say no to the deliciousness of chocolate?

I love strawberry-banana stuff! Like yogurt and smoothies!

STRAWBERRY AND BANANA!?!? No way! That is the best combination for anything! XD






Ugh and it's going to flood everything again and we just got finished cleaning up from a flood last week!




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How's your morning going so far?