Beta Reader needed for Erotic Romance with suspense

[[deleted user]]

Hi everyone,

I self-published my novella, but something felt off and I made some changes. Now, I'm to the point where I'd like a few readers. I can send either a few chapters at a time, or the entire manuscript. I welcome any and all feedback.

Looking for: opinions and interest (Did I drop the ball with the ending type of thing?)

Betas: 2 or 3 (if possible)

Time Frame: No set time.

Genre: Erotic romance with a little suspense. I would like someone who isn't easily offended by a more gritty story.

I can provide either Word or PDF. Let me know either on this thread or via private GR message if you are interested.

The blurb:

Haley Cohen damned Jon Mercer the moment he left her at the altar. He embarrassed her, shamed her, and took what shred of dignity she had left. Reconstructing her life hasn’t been easy, in fact, there are things she’ll never be able to forget. Yet, Jon makes a sudden reappearance in her life, reminding her of all her losses. He’s demanding, irritating and has some kind of nerve sucking her into his drama.

As Jon endures his past sins against Haley, he can’t change what he’s done. He had reasons for leaving–damn good ones. Now, everything he strives to protect is falling apart. No matter his determination, betrayal is in the works, forgiveness desperate, and secrets more than he can stomach. As hell steps up, Jon must fight against the one thing he wants more than anything…Haley’s heart.

Thank you for your time and consideration.

[Toni]

Sounds interesting. I'd be willing to beta for you. I tried to inbox you, but its not working for whatever reason.

[[deleted user]]

Hi Toni, I've sent you a GR message. :)

[Jocelyn]

Hey Beth, you still looking for beta readers? :)

[[deleted user]]

Hi Jocelyn,

Sure, I have time for another reader before I begin edits. I'll send you a GR message with more information. :)