Hello Betas: I need some feedback on a novel I am writing. I have about 130 pages plus the end. However, I would like to have some beta feedback on the first 44 pages. Here is a blurb.
News Headline: “LIVING NEANDERTHAL GIRL DISCOVERED IN MODERN-DAY FRANCE."
It is assumed from scant archeologist evidence that the pre-human race of Neanderthal went extinct 30,000 years ago. However, what if that is not what happened?
Are YOU ready to hear the truth?
Shakti, a young Neanderthal girl, and what is left of her family, have managed to survive up until present day by staying hidden deep in the forests of southwestern France. For thousands of years, they had been hunted not only by humans, but a much more powerful enemy. She desperately wants to finally have freedom and no longer have to hide.
However, when Shakti is discovered and her existence becomes big news around the world, she is put into the spotlight. That puts her in danger and she is being hunted again by that deadly entity. Will she hide again or will she finally fight back after 30,000 years?
News Headline:
“LIVING NEANDERTHAL GIRL DISCOVERED IN MODERN-DAY FRANCE."
It is assumed from scant archeologist evidence that the pre-human race of Neanderthal went extinct 30,000 years ago. However, what if that is not what happened?
Are YOU ready to hear the truth?
Shakti, a young Neanderthal girl, and what is left of her family, have managed to survive up until present day by staying hidden deep in the forests of southwestern France. For thousands of years, they had been hunted not only by humans, but a much more powerful enemy. She desperately wants to finally have freedom and no longer have to hide.
However, when Shakti is discovered and her existence becomes big news around the world, she is put into the spotlight. That puts her in danger and she is being hunted again by that deadly entity. Will she hide again or will she finally fight back after 30,000 years?
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