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Having written that book, and self published, I felt the follow up arrive just as quickly, in my head as a fully formed story. It is called cont3xt. http://cont3xtbook.co.uk, It has given me a interesting opportunity to work out how to top the previous novel, how to take the technology and adventure and the twists and turns even further, whilst having a base of believable tech. I am just in the process of the multiple read throughs on different formats to try and spot any formatting errors, missing words and continuity errors. I am treating the whole thing like a software project, so it has to compile, run and pass all the tests to go live. :) The writing has been intensely exciting. I have had the chance to be engaged in full flow for 6 hours a day each day of the week. I am not sure that will happen all the time, bit so far its the pattern after two books :) The third, well I need to get Cont3xt published first !

A year later, and we are still working to finish that fourth book ... mostly the last third or quarter.
We are currently looking for a new definition of "progress".

Strangely enough this looks to be a work of heavy worldbuilding over military sci-fi. The first part of 26k words was released with my last book as a preview. 26k words and 92 pages covering the battle for Earth before I fastforward to the title character's time in part 2. 16k words into part two and she's just discovered the lone survivor and still filling him in on current events.
I actually plan to leave her home behind and never come back to it at the end of part 3 or the middle of part 4, but I've been building it up as if it's the most important world in this universe. And I never thought I could be this excited about so much seemingly mundane text, but it's been strangely fascinating.

First one's done - starting the marketing for it now (going KU, so hopefully that'll gain some new potential readers), and am a little under 1/2 way into the second. Hoping to have that one out in February. Also working on cleaning up and streamlining the original work from my blog as an anthology to offer as a giveaway for the OTHER project in the works - a newsletter.
All of this is on top of school, and the associated work that goes into that mix.
::Slinks off to go catch a nap so I can try to tackle some more words tonight.::

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What do you think of this poem? I'm ready for critique! Your advice is a need.
... Steel rails like belts,
Constrain the world.
People are sleeping. All is quiet.
We rush to abyss, through the night.
There’s nothing there to stop the flight.
We are inside the monstrous snake
That has devoured the best of brains.
The two of us woke up in wrath
To wreak the choo-choo of its path.
So let the convoy miss a curve,
Cars break apart, disaster strike
But wake and save all those who’ve there
Succumbed to poison, unaware


Then it's on to my first attempt at writing an episode for a zombie show my friend is producing.
I have 5 finished and polished chapters for a sequel to To Summon The Blackbird. Making good headway, and it's interesting, so it looks as though I might actually write the thing. Wasn't sure of it when I started.

But, I set that aside momentarily to clean up some stuff on my author site. I harvested reviews and included them on the site and associated them closer to the book. I've added a bit more content. Dropped some unnecessary stuff. I still need to get the site to behave better for mobile devices. If anyone has a moment to give it a look-over, I'd appreciate feedback in a private message. Here is the site: http://www.checkeredscissors.com

The Selkirk family is one of the seven Blessed bloodlines; true emissaries of God empowered by his seven Archangels. The Blessed have protected humanity from the Grigori and their demonic allies for over nine hundred years. Trained from birth to battle the Grigori the Selkirk brothers fight forces that most people do not believe in yet still instinctive fear. The seventh son of a seventh son, Cadell Selkirk has power beyond that of his brothers and the other Blessed. That power has made the Grigori fear him and mark him for destruction. With the Grigori gathering their forces against them Cadell and his brothers are the only hope of stopping a plague of vengeful demons from being unleashed on an unbelieving and unprepared human race.
For updates go to my Facebook page, https://www.facebook.com/Ray-Chilensk...
Hi everyone! I'm an indie-author with several YAs under my belt. My current WIP is a Fantasy NA, due to release late next year. I've included the jacket below. Eager to discuss with any interested readers!
“Men bow to nothing but gold, glory, flesh, and death.”
GOLD
Fifteen years ago, Cody lost everything when a dragon scorched her town. Now, the new Emerging approaches. Will Cody restore the prosperity of her family by slaying a dragon and reaping the reward?
GLORY
Orphaned and untitled, Wolfe has spent twenty years relying on the favoritism of his friends: the Duchess Zoe and the Crown Prince Fares. Slaying a dragon might be the only chance he has to make his mark…if he can live to tell about it.
FLESH
Amiable and aimlessly flirtatious, Fares has never wanted for a dime or a bedmate. But when his sweetheart is viciously mangled by Night Beasts, he will have to recruit a penniless whore to help save him.
DEATH
Penn has spent one-hundred-and-twenty years ferrying departed souls to the City of Eternal Sleep. Now he has a chance to recruit a dragon-slayer to take his place. But what will he do when he falls in love with his best candidate for conscription?
Castleberry pits girl against dragon in this stunning blend of Greek mythology and medieval lore. Readers will not quickly forget the diverse cast or the thrilling, sexy ride!
http://www.jencastleberry.com
“Men bow to nothing but gold, glory, flesh, and death.”
GOLD
Fifteen years ago, Cody lost everything when a dragon scorched her town. Now, the new Emerging approaches. Will Cody restore the prosperity of her family by slaying a dragon and reaping the reward?
GLORY
Orphaned and untitled, Wolfe has spent twenty years relying on the favoritism of his friends: the Duchess Zoe and the Crown Prince Fares. Slaying a dragon might be the only chance he has to make his mark…if he can live to tell about it.
FLESH
Amiable and aimlessly flirtatious, Fares has never wanted for a dime or a bedmate. But when his sweetheart is viciously mangled by Night Beasts, he will have to recruit a penniless whore to help save him.
DEATH
Penn has spent one-hundred-and-twenty years ferrying departed souls to the City of Eternal Sleep. Now he has a chance to recruit a dragon-slayer to take his place. But what will he do when he falls in love with his best candidate for conscription?
Castleberry pits girl against dragon in this stunning blend of Greek mythology and medieval lore. Readers will not quickly forget the diverse cast or the thrilling, sexy ride!
http://www.jencastleberry.com

I'm an outliner, so that's where I'm currently at. The first book came in at over 120k words and I have a lot of threads to pick up for the second one, so I see an outline as a necessary instrument to keep it progressing at a good pace and from getting too unwieldy.
I'm also looking to read more of my fellow indie writers' works as we move toward 2017 so I'm just looking to get involved.
I'll be updating progress on book two on my facebook page as I hit some milestones. Feel free to get in touch there or here!
facebook.com/mjwilsonauthor

“Rarity from the Hollow has a science fiction base whereby some groups have long nurtured Lacy Dawn to save the universe. They have done this through an android (Dotcom) who has taught her to use a montra to escape her dysfunctional family and then has her complete modules on science, history, and philosophy. She is able to communicate with trees and her best friend, now deceased as a result of abuse. One of the most interesting twists is the desire of the android to be ‘humanoid’ and how that then interferes with his efficiency.
Reminiscent of the works of Vonnegut as well as the 60s and 70s, there is a satirical tone about this small piece of society including drugs, bootlegging, sexuality, child abuse, post war PTSD, and dysfunctional families. The ending is a bit of a surprise - ironic to say the least. This was a pleasant change from my usual lighter fare reading. Although there is no graphic sexuality, the references to sexual molestation, abuse, and out-of-control erections limit the appropriate audience to adults. I received a copy of this book in exchange for an honest review.” c-lu, Top Amazon Reviewer
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Frankly, I was getting a little discouraged. But then on 1-6-17, the first review of it was published, five stars. To facilitate your consideration of reviewing this novel, the closing lines were: "…Brilliant satires such as this are genius works of literature in the same class as Orwell’s 'Animal Farm.' I can picture American Lit professors sometime in the distant future placing this masterpiece on their reading list." https://marcha2014.wordpress.com/2017...
Not everybody has understood my debut novel. Sometimes, it has been outside of comfort zones. You would have to read the novel to find out how Lacy Dawn, the protagonist, convinced Mr. Rump (Bernie Sanders) to help talk Mr. Prump (Donald Trump) into saving the universe. The political allegory includes pressing issues that America is fighting about today, including illegal immigration and the refuge crisis, extreme capitalism / consumerism…. Mr. Prump was a projection of Donald Trump based on the TV show, The Apprentice. Part of the negotiations in the story occur in the only high rise on planet Shptiludrp (Shop Until You Drop), a giant shopping mall and the center of economic governance, now more easily identifiable as Trump Tower. There is no political advocacy in the story, other than sensitizing readers to the huge social problem of child maltreatment, but the allegory is much more obvious now that Donald Trump is a household name. A similar press release: http://www.pr.com/press-release/695122 .
Connection with the political allegory of Rarity from the Hollow has definitely increased its receptiveness.

Good luck to everybody.
I just finished the last chapter of Alvar's Spear, and sent one copy off to Shannon Reber for a beta read. Shannon is amazing. I will be sending hard copy to another marvelous Indie author for a beta read next week. Then it's just a matter of fixing those pesky commas and typos that slipped past the zillion edits and alpha readers, formatting it, getting a cover, and hoo rah, publishing. Hope to have it out by March.
Alvar's Spear is about the sentient planet, Alvar, who has become distraught over a mutant conspiracy to turn Alvar into a fetid swamp, and enslave the Antal hive. She has sworn to hurl herself into the gas giant she orbits before she allows the mutants to triumph.
The half-Antal, half-Terran, Gar has just one desperate last chance to save the planet and all its inhabitants from immolation at the hands of its own mother, Alvar.
To become Alvar’s Spear, the planetary savior, Gar will confront enemies, assassins, a traitor, and a beautiful, brilliant, Terran geneticist. He will travel into the mysterious Forbidden Mountains of the vild, from which no one has returned. If successful, he will save Alvar.
But the danger of creating a savior is that he will be his own person. He will do what he will, and whether his acts are judged good or bad will only be known in the unrolling of time. Time is not on Gar’s side. But time does unroll. What it reveals may not be to everyone’s liking.
Alvar's Spear is about the sentient planet, Alvar, who has become distraught over a mutant conspiracy to turn Alvar into a fetid swamp, and enslave the Antal hive. She has sworn to hurl herself into the gas giant she orbits before she allows the mutants to triumph.
The half-Antal, half-Terran, Gar has just one desperate last chance to save the planet and all its inhabitants from immolation at the hands of its own mother, Alvar.
To become Alvar’s Spear, the planetary savior, Gar will confront enemies, assassins, a traitor, and a beautiful, brilliant, Terran geneticist. He will travel into the mysterious Forbidden Mountains of the vild, from which no one has returned. If successful, he will save Alvar.
But the danger of creating a savior is that he will be his own person. He will do what he will, and whether his acts are judged good or bad will only be known in the unrolling of time. Time is not on Gar’s side. But time does unroll. What it reveals may not be to everyone’s liking.

I haven't been able to put pen to paper (fingers to keyboard?) yet and it's killing me. It's looking like an interesting, fun premise, but one that is tricky and requires an outline or planning of some kind. So each day my thought process progresses a little further and fleshes the idea out a bit more. I'm hoping I can get to writing it soon but I'm trying not to rush.

Thank you so much,
Rory


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Now all I need are blurbs and cover copy (plus feedback on book 3)

In The Pandora Principle, FIRE Team Alpha is tasked with protecting the American Undersecretary of State against a force of drug-crazed terrorists some of which are genetically enhanced just as Team Alpha is.
I'm hoping to have the manuscript finished by July 2017.

I love science fiction set in this era. It takes me back to when I was cutting my nerd-teeth of Jules Verne and Edgar Rice Burroughs.

The second is a thriller novel, whereby the main character is healed of a terrible disease through fringe science as an infant, only to develop strange powers that grow to take over her life.

Takes place in in the Theobald Psychiatric Hospital where the survivors of the original book have been placed under study by the mysterious Association only for everything to go to hell once more, patients and employees giving in to violent urges while strange shadowy creatures stalk the halls, the power going out and locking everyone inside.
I'm also working on the first in my vampire series, Scarlet Night, which exists in the shared universe of my horror stories but has a more suspense/thriller feel to it. Following the high schooler, Maria Lake, a girl who is slightly out of touch with the regular world, she meets the mysterious Rebecca Valentine a vampire searching for the man who betrayed her mother and who takes an instant interest in Maria dragging her into her hunt.
As for my creative process, I usually start with mapping out the characters, their roles and a basic description of their personalities, appearance and abilities. I then map out the major sets (such as the colliery, mines and caves from my first story) and finally i list out the scenes in order (mostly three to a chapter).
Honestly, I'm a little stuck on it the now. There are three leads in Scarlet Night, Maria the human girl with supernatural enhancing blood, Rebecca the laid back vampire out for revenge and Alex the witch hunter searching for the same man as Rebecca but also extremely combative with the vampire.
My problem is that I don't know whether to make Alex male or female. I already have Maria and Rebecca ending up attracted to each other with Alex making it a kind of odd triangle, if I make them female then she'd really just be combative with Rebecca and protective of Maria, where as a male he'd be attracted to both but I feel it would raise unfortunate implications to have the vaguely predatory Rebecca as the holier-than-thou Alex's love rival for Maria.



It's the story of a young woman half-elf, half-human, who discovers she is neither. She must figure out who she is in order to decide what she is. Or is it the other way round?

One thing that has surprised me is just how complex a follow up book is. It's not too hard to keep it in line with the first but is extremely hard to foreshadow and set up the third and last book in the trilogy.
If I had advice for anyone foolish enough to take on the epic task of writing a trilogy, it would be this: Outline the whole thing first.
As a "gardener" or "seat of your pants" writer, this may seem painful or magic killing but the level of detail contained within the outline can be left fairly sparse, but the main movements and structure should be clear.
I left the structure open. I've had to edit the second book massively just to keep the series on track.

Almost finished. I had to get some distance to it for a couple months, though it's ~18k words. It surprised me cuz it sets up the rest of the trilogy and even launches an action/adventure series afterwards.
Books mentioned in this topic
Against the Eldest Flame (other topics)Daedalus and the Deep (other topics)
Rarity from the Hollow (other topics)
To Summon The Blackbird (other topics)
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Working on? Ummm... Book 4 in the Torments saga (And Keep This In Mind), editing 4 anthologies (A Walk Down Dreamer's Lane - collections of short stories, flash fiction, and poetry [depending on which installment]), the next companion novella (Akantheldama Intu), and getting the blog set up, so I only have to do a few minor edits for the next semester.
Oh, and trying to figure out how to set up a newsletter that isn't a major link farm.
Does trying to survive the coming semester count as well?