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Jan 04, 2015 08:40AM
Still working on my upcoming novel, which I've chronicled in this thread. I'm now into my sixth editing run-through, so maybe I've become an editing junkie. This time around I'm finding virtually no typos, only a rare awkward sentence, and no more plot holes. As much as I want to keep improving it, I think that when I finish this time, it's time to let it go. That is, if I ever want to publish the thing.
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...did somebody say air pirates?

Maybe actually finishing book 3 this month? At least the first draft. The first edit/revision will have to be next month, with all the class papers I can already see looming on the horizon.

If that weren't enough, I'm also working on an historical nonfiction as well, a companion volume to Fips, Bots, Doggeries, and More, (2012)
Counteract
Fips, Bots, Doggeries, and More: Explorations of Henry Rogers' 1838 Journal of Travel from Southwestern Ohio to New York City

Wish me luck!


Turhan, you don't need luck. You've got the hardheaded determination to knock down any wall in your way. Steady down, and smile. You've got this. (That goes for everyone else on this thread, too. If you didn't, you wouldn't be here I think.)



"Turhan, you don't need luck. You've got the hardheaded determination to knock down any wall in your way. Steady down, and smile. You've got this. "
Wow, thanx for saying that K, I really appreciate it :)
I really like this thread. It motivates me to see what everyone else is doing.
I had a bit of an a-ha! moment with the series I'm currently working on. Each story is self contained, so originally, the plan was to keep it going as long as possible, never fully defeating the main cause of conflict (think eighties cartoons like GI Joe). But I've come up with a way to tie it all up after seven books and still leave it open to further expansion in the future. Now, if I can just shut down all of the other book ideas that keep trying to cut in line.
I had a bit of an a-ha! moment with the series I'm currently working on. Each story is self contained, so originally, the plan was to keep it going as long as possible, never fully defeating the main cause of conflict (think eighties cartoons like GI Joe). But I've come up with a way to tie it all up after seven books and still leave it open to further expansion in the future. Now, if I can just shut down all of the other book ideas that keep trying to cut in line.

And as a side note from my post, fatigue is stupid.

Christina - Kind of agree with Ashe. I've had that happen a couple of times on this series. Not entire books, but definitely chapters hitting out of sequence. Getting them down where I could manipulate them later did wonders for muting down the demands to get out.
Ashe - have you tried sleep yet? Or does the schedule not allow for it?

I have a lovely idea board in my office that is usually full of lofty goals and Google Keep for thoughts on the go, but that doesn't stop ideas from other projects from invading my brain while I work on the current series. I can do chapters out of order, but I don't do well with multiple projects at once.


Ashe - hope things improve for you soon. Being tired is the pits. Being tired for medical reasons are even deeper pits. Healing wishes coming your way if you want them.



K - You know, you're right it did take quite a lot of determination to do those changes you mentioned. Plus I also had to reformat my mobi's etc and a coupl'a other things to make it all work.
'I luv authors'...is that a T-Shirt?
Ken wrote: "Still working on my upcoming novel, which I've chronicled in this thread. I'm now into my sixth editing run-through, so maybe I've become an editing junkie. This time around I'm finding virtually..."
Replying to my own post--because I lied. I'll need a seventh editing run-through because I made a lot of changes on this one to improve the book's readability, and I'm still not certain that it's as perfect as I can make it. Just one more...
Replying to my own post--because I lied. I'll need a seventh editing run-through because I made a lot of changes on this one to improve the book's readability, and I'm still not certain that it's as perfect as I can make it. Just one more...
Do you have beta readers, Ken? I find that my readers are just as good at telling me when to stop obsessing as they are at pointing out what is broken.
After years of submitting stories to magazine editors, I've become pretty good at telling when a story is and isn't ready. First you change the glaring errors, and then the lesser ones stand out more. Eventually, as you realize that your changes aren't making the work any better, just different, you stop. On this run-through the changes were for the better. The next one might be sufficient, and I think any beta readers I might engage would agree. Right now my obsession is making it the best I'm capable of; if it becomes a trial of indecision, an obsession for perfection, then you're right, it's time for beta readers.

Then I got an idea for yet another non fiction project which I think might be interesting, but haven't done much work on it. Of course I really don't need another project to work on so I should skip it until I've finished some of my current projects.

I'm also editing the second and third in a series for publishing and resisting the temptation to start writing the fourth. It seems I'm on a tangent with the series and should probably take a real break to work on something I typically wouldn't do.

Hakon, you could always put those short stories up on a blog - just let it be a series of posts. That's what I've been kind of doing with some of my stuff. At least, the stuff that's not directly attached to the series I'm actively working on. (Though, from time to time, something related will sneak through, just for some place to store it for a while.) Then, if you decide later to go back and collect them, you have everything in one place, and possibly a small fan base for it to start from.
::Shrugs:: Just a suggestion, that may be "preaching to the choir".

Thanks K., that's not a bad idea, I may just do that.
Just finished another several rounds of revisions and copy-edits on my Arts Reborn 2.5 novella. Ready to send it back to my wife for her second round thoughts, and to beta readers. :)

Can't wait for it to come out, Jamie. I like what you're doing with the story.
For the moment, while I'm still waiting on the school work pile to start sorting itself out into a priority list, I'm trying to find copies of books I swear I'd downloaded/purchased from the Better reads project. I hope they weren't on the defunct hard drive.
Oh, and hammering on a short story submission piece or two. If anyone writes in the paranormal horror genre, look up Cedar Loft Productions. They're assembling an anthology that might be interesting for you.

I'm also editing the second and third in a series for publishing and res..."
Yes, editing is important, and I too wrestle with writing another piece while I'm editing. I'm doing so now. I'm trying to finish the final novel in my High School Heroes series, while editing a sci-fi short story. It's not working out too well.
Nothing! (Finished that novel, and re-read it 7 times for edits).
Ken wrote: "Nothing! (Finished that novel, and re-read it 7 times for edits)."
Hooray!
Forging forward on Book III for a bit today, then maybe doing that next revision pass of the novella.
Hooray!
Forging forward on Book III for a bit today, then maybe doing that next revision pass of the novella.
I have five chapters left in the book I'm working on. It's big reveal time and I'm banging my head on the desk trying to plausibly get the characters into place for the end.


I'm doing a similar thing, but for a different reason. I'm trying to write a blurb.

Ah! Hakon, you just reminded me that the worst is yet to come! The dreaded blurb! At least we have a thread for help.

It is the first blurb I write, and it is taking a loooong time, but I'm glad to be able to post it the thread to see what people think of it before I use it.
Just passed 70K on the first draft of book III in my series. Have probably 40K left?
Really should go do another round of revision on the end of my novella, but I'm in a good first drafting flow, and don't like to break that.
Really should go do another round of revision on the end of my novella, but I'm in a good first drafting flow, and don't like to break that.
Resurrecting this thread because I've been thinking about writing my third novel, but I've found nothing to kindle my enthusiasm. I've been exploring a sequel to Ship of Storms, and have some of the characters ready, including characters from the original story. Haven't come up with an earth-shaking plot to get fired up about, so now it's on the back burner.
Now considering a sequel to my second novel, To Summon The Blackbird, and that's a different story altogether, with no many different ways I could go with it. Currently have a cover and a title that complements the first one, and most of the first chapter written. I think all I have to do now is buckle down and do it.
Now considering a sequel to my second novel, To Summon The Blackbird, and that's a different story altogether, with no many different ways I could go with it. Currently have a cover and a title that complements the first one, and most of the first chapter written. I think all I have to do now is buckle down and do it.

I understand motivation issues. I want to finish my current series, but every time I sit down to write, something unrelated comes out. Usually a fragment of another idea to go on the back burner. That's the main reason I've decided I'm not publishing incomplete series anymore. It may mean a year or more without a published work, but I'd rather at least have a draft finished for everything so I'm not stuck trying to meet some arbitrary self-imposed deadline.

As for what I'm currently working on... Whew, got my janky computers up and running with duct tape and some prayers. I decided to give writing books a break right now, since I had a really craptacular year and burned through 4 computers (failed every 3 months wtf). The books I had slated for release this year were 2 sequels, Enter A Shadowy Figure (SIGNET) and Written In Blood (Devil Hunter Isawa chronicles) as well as 4 new titles, The Last Remnants (YA Fantasy), Guardian Legend (Dark Fantasy), The Enforcer (paranormal fantasy/crime thriller) and Jive Turkeys Need Not Apply (action adventure/police procedural). Backups kept meeting the dust and extensive rewrites are starting to work my nerves.
But... all is not lost! Had some decent sales and good reviews, so that counts, right? XD
I'm not hanging up the word processor yet however. Since I sent off a proposal for a video game publisher, soon I'll start cranking out retro awesomeness (woot). For now, my poor tree destroying doorstoppers will be put on hold for a while...
Work hard and write on!



I've just discovered that Goodreads is also Goodwrites: a great place to find a band of warrior authors just like myself, fighting the good fight with pen and keyboard as we seek the ultimate treasure, the ability to make a living as a writer.
Any and all advice is welcome 8-)
I'm working on book three of my series, Folio 55, whilst working as a teacher. The Christmas holidays have been wonderful, not just for the obvious, but because freed of 100% concentration on lesson preparation and marking, I've been able to place thirty pages down onto my virtual paper. Sadly, once school starts, I'm lucky to make it four in a week. Given that 4659, my third book, is going to be heading towards 600 pages and I have just reached page 195, does anyone have any good tips on writing whilst doing another full time job?
thanks.
Nia S.
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Against the Eldest Flame (other topics)Daedalus and the Deep (other topics)
Rarity from the Hollow (other topics)
To Summon The Blackbird (other topics)
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