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Jun 19, 2014 06:14PM
hahah I know right!? I'm like.. no mom this is what i love to do and it would be nice to have this one thing to myself.
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Haha, that's funny xD My mom has a goodreads but she never goes on it and I don't think she even understands how it works
I tell my mom its a place were i get to right my own book. Its true but i don't tell her about rping.
Lol same. Whenever I pull up goodreads on the bus my friend asks about it. I always tell her, "oh.. It's a website where I keep track of my books.."
Fayza wrote: "I tell my mom its a place were i get to right my own book. Its true but i don't tell her about rping."SAME!
I just told my mom it's a place where people review books, which is true, I just left out the rping part
I dunno. I hide if from most my friends and family (even though some already know). My friends will just find it boring and wonder why I'm so interested in it.
I shared my RPing secrets with my friend. She's almost addicted as I am! Thank god. But now I'm unsure about showing everyone else
Yeah, only my best friend knows about me rping and stuff, and she doesn't really care. My other friends don't really know, they just know I like to write stuff, which is true, I guess
It's weird because we make references to goodreads at school and everyone's like, What r u even talking about?? And who r u talking to?
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ƘẴɨȚēĽƴǸƝ wrote: "Oh goodness I just dyed my hair purple, blue and teal its so cool"Oh my gosh that sounds awesome
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Guys I need some help. I have a plot for a book I'm going to write and I need feedback; I also need a title for it.
Well here's the plot I wrote. I'm trusting you guys not to take anything :IIt's fantasy and adventure mostly.
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ℓιℓу wrote: "Well here's the plot I wrote. I'm trusting you guys not to take anything :IIt's fantasy and adventure mostly.
A girl. A wand. And no memory.
A young woman by the name of Elvira wakes up one nigh..."
Wow, that's really really good!! I'm super intrigued already!
Very entertaining! And don't worry, ask anyone I hate plagiarizing with a passion because I think it's so low for a writer(who shouldn't even be called one) not to mention that I love reading fantasy but don't think I could ever write one(:Okay, one question though, who is the woman who died from the cloaked figure? Is she the owner of the house? Because I'm assuming that this is the back of the novel book, where the readers get an insight. If so, maybe you can mention that the owner of the house was female? Just a suggestion (: if this is a rough draft, then it's still a really good one!
And as for titles, it usually changes throughout the story as you write it, but here are some ideas:
•Elvira
•Arivle (it's her name backwards, but maybe you can make it into some sort of code or magical word? Idk haha)
•sticks and stones may break bones but wands will never hurt the (i know kinda long)
•The way to Retrogression
•The Cloaked Past
It's kind of hard when just given that little information, so I would just say that in the end you might find a word or a small key or statement or something that goes perfectly with the plot of the novel. Sometimes it won't even make sense in the beginning of the story until you run across that word or situation in the novel, ya know?
Does this make any sense? Hope it helps!
It is a rough draft, I just wrote it down quickly before I went to sleep so I could remember my exact idea.Thank you for all the feedback, though! I really like the last two titles, but as you said, it changes while you write it. I was planning on putting this on Wattpad, however, so it probably needs a title beforehand. I can always change it, though.
I am a bit confused by your last paragraph. Do you mean like a buzzword?
No problem! Always happy to help out a fellow writer!And what I meant by that was like... For example, the movie Hocus Pocus! I'm sure the writer never write the title until it was nearly complete. Many of the characters through out the movie say "hocus Pocus" in multiple sentences. And because that stands out a bit in the movie, that's where the title came from. Makes sense?
Yes! I think mine might be "cloaked", because that relates to many things, but we'll just have to see.
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Can anyone catch me up on everything that happened in the last week? :// I'm still in school and just got out of finals week.
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I call it the whale face. Or my friends last name is Noman and we call it after her face so we say "Nomans face"




