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Singing in the Shrouds Chapters 10-Conclusion
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Won't look at the above posts so I don't spoil as I'm almost there. Wow, lots of action at the end. Should be done with book soon.


Done.
Mini spoiler -
As noted, I rarely pick the right perp. lol Okay, as for Ms. Marsh's nasty, I just don't think there were enough red or blue herring, clues on this guy. Almost like she picked another and changed at last minute. And as far as the motive for the killings, that seemed a pretty thin reason for doing the crimes. Didn't take much.
Author's writing offers fine plotting but the prose seemed to drag me through the story. Then again that can be attributed in part to the era. Contemporary audiences are harder to astonish esp. with all the stimulation we get in this modern age. Not fair in a way but there it is. Just a thing.
Mini spoiler -
As noted, I rarely pick the right perp. lol Okay, as for Ms. Marsh's nasty, I just don't think there were enough red or blue herring, clues on this guy. Almost like she picked another and changed at last minute. And as far as the motive for the killings, that seemed a pretty thin reason for doing the crimes. Didn't take much.
Author's writing offers fine plotting but the prose seemed to drag me through the story. Then again that can be attributed in part to the era. Contemporary audiences are harder to astonish esp. with all the stimulation we get in this modern age. Not fair in a way but there it is. Just a thing.


Nicole wrote: "I didn't pick up on any clues s throughout the book so I didn't guess correctly. First, I thought it was Mr. Cuddy and maybe Mrs. Cuddy was in on it or knew about it! I enjoyed it though I found th..."
Nicole, Pghfan, PI's, I thought it was Mr. Cuddy right from the start. The herrings thrown about led me in that direction.
A writing tool that authors often do employ is to change perp near the end. I think it's because the characters change along the way or to fool the reader and not make the outcome too predictable. Not sure I like that slight of hand tactic.
Nicole, Pghfan, PI's, I thought it was Mr. Cuddy right from the start. The herrings thrown about led me in that direction.
A writing tool that authors often do employ is to change perp near the end. I think it's because the characters change along the way or to fool the reader and not make the outcome too predictable. Not sure I like that slight of hand tactic.