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Robin wrote: "Hi. I have a 120k mystery/thriller set in a near future India. It's called 'The Other God' and is about a British woman who travels to India during the 2022 Kumbh Mela to find and bring her fathe..."
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It sounds great. Unfortunately I'm committed right now so can't offer. If you need another look later on I could maybe help next month. Otherwise, good luck.
Hi Robin!My name is Rebecca and I would love to take a look at your manuscript! Right now I am doing beta reads for Goodreads members for a discounted price. My website is www.thekreativspace.wordpress.com and you can take a look at my types of edits and prices there. But! Please note that for Goodreads members those prices are HALF OFF.
If you are looking for a particular type of beta read/edit, I'm open to discussion as well.
I hope we can work together and best of luck to you!
Rebecca
I have been working as an independent freelance editor for about 8 years. My clients have been very pleased with my work thus far and would certainly be happy to provide recommendations if needed.I recently achieved my bachelor’s degree in Creative Writing, as well as accomplished a Study Abroad program with a focus in writing. I can provide a high attention to detail, the ability to think outside of the box, and an enthusiastic attitude that clients will find quite appealing.
Certifications: Bachelor's Degree in Creative Writing
Contact: tkselbach13@gmail.com
Experience: 8 years of Beta Reading, 2 years of commission work
Rates: $0.05 per word.
Turnaround: 1-3 months
$5 – 100 words
$50 – 1,000 words
$500 – 10,000 words
$5000 – 100,000 words




I have a 120k mystery/thriller set in a near future India. It's called 'The Other God' and is about a British woman who travels to India during the 2022 Kumbh Mela to find and bring her father home after he's spent 20 years in hiding for a murder she believes he is innocent of.
But the deeper she travels into India and the more she finds out about him the more she comes to realise that she has stepped into the middle of something much greater and that her father may be involved in a devastating plot to murder millions.
There are echoes of Heart of Darkness as she journeys up the Ganges in search of her father - from the plains of Varanasi to the holy towns of Haridwar and Rishikesh and eventually to climax in the high Himalayan Gangotri glacier - the very source of the Ganges itself.
There are 7 POV's who drive the story along (though one main character) and a big thriller twist at midpoint which moves the plot from mystery to out and out thriller.
I've had lots of good feedback so far and am hoping it is only a few tweaks away from sending to an agent.
If you would like to Beta-read this for me - please send me a message letting me know your background and what sort of service you would provide and for how much.
Look forward to hearing from you.
Robin.