Beta Reader Available

[Kenzie]

Hey guys, I'm bored and home and willing to do some beta-reading for whoever might need me. I'm willing to read pretty much anything, but I'm particularly familiar with YA and adult literary fiction.

I worked in publishing (alongside an agent) for two years, and I also currently work as a writing tutor for one of the best writing colleges in the world, so I promise I know what I'm doing.

Post a summary of your book below and I'll message you if I'm interested (I probably will be).

[Dennis]

We are looking for beta readers for our newest novel The Neuromorphs. Here is a link to the book where you can read a few chapters to see if you would be interested in beta reading.
http://dennismeredith.com/the-neuromo...
Dennis Meredith
Regards,
Joanne Meredith
editor@glyphus.com

[Carlos]

John Crester, who tells the story, is the eleven year old son of a multi-millionaire. His parents are divorced, his mother has moved away,  his dad will buy him anything he wants. 
What John wants, can’t be bought.

John’s dad, Henry, was orphaned in Peru at a time of great violence and bloodshed. Grandpa Crester, a Nebraska farmer, adopted him and Henry grew to become a very busy software-mogul.  He loves those close to him, but has little time or patience for anything other than his business.

Henry hires a detective agency to find his paternal father in Peru.

Awki, a native of the Peruvian Andes, is poor in material wealth but rich in spirit and tradition. He comes to the states and embarks in a series of adventures with his son Henry, and his grandson John.

[Randy]

Hello Kenzi. I hope you might be interested in reading my YA fantasy novel. Here's a blurb, or query letter to give you an idea of what it's like.
Mike and his girlfriend, Violet, are strolling down a darkened hallway when it blinks away. He's shocked to find himself somewhere else when he wakes from the fall—alone on another world. Magic is real here. Also, it appears that Violet's there too—shocking.
None of these shocks measure up to when he discovers Violet can do magic. He doesn't learn about that until she pops in while he's comforting a young woman whose puppy has been killed. In a magically fuelled rage, his girlfriend turns him into a woman, Michelle. Then Violet disappears to join a group of renegade mages who plan to change the world and everyone in it into playthings for their amusement.
Michelle, still in shock over the recent change, discovers there are many connected worlds. Mother is more than just the operator of the rooming house where Michelle has been staying, she's this world's watcher/gate keeper—the one person able to help Michelle return home. The renegade mages kidnap Mother to force her to open the doorways between all the worlds so that they can play like gods in each of them.
The renegades must be stopped, Mother needs to be rescued, and Michelle wants to go home in her own, male, body. It's going to take a lot of fighting and planning—and luck, and magic.
One last shock. Bonnie, the woman whose dog was killed, is in love with Michelle... and Michelle's falling in love with her. Perhaps home's not so important after all.
I'd love to have your thoughts regarding this novel.
Thanks, Randy

[Robert]

Kenzie,

I would hate for you to be bored going into the new year and if you can stoop to doing a quick alpha read, I'd love to send you my new novella (40k words). Title is "First Ten Days in Heaven. This is the back cover copy:

Michael Greyson awoke one morning feeling better than he had in years. Unfortunately, he soon learned he felt so good because he had died the day before. The upside to being dead was that he made it to heaven. The potential downside was he didn’t believe in heaven, or God.

This is the story of Mike’s first ten days in heaven, helped by his guide Pete, no relation to the famous saint.

It is nowhere near finished. I normally rewrite twenty or more times and this is only edit four. I'm seeking someone who can tell me if my main character Mike is ruminating too much about being dead, the meaning of life, who should be in heaven, is there a god, etc. etc. etc. My concern is my message overwhelming the story. Most other faults and errors should be addressed in the next couple of months. Your background in literary fiction may be my saving grace.

Let me know if you're interested in taking a look.

Thanks,
Bob Brown

[Emily]

Hi Kenzie

I was wondering if you'd be interested in an epistolary romance to relieve your New Years boredom!

When Flora falls unexpectedly pregnant during her final year studies, she hits a huge predicament; continue a recent affair with her handsome but mysterious lecturer who dazzles her with love letters taken from the ancient tale of ‘Abelard and Heloise', or chase after the past with her estranged first love?

But will either man be there to support her during the turmoil ahead...?

It is almost ready to go and just going through a final proof reading and formatting and would love someone else's opinion :-)

Thank Emily

https://youtu.be/x70nYICz9PU

[Eve]

Hi Kenzie,

Happy New Year to you :) I can see that you have lots of offers here of great stories to read, and I hope you don't mind me adding my story to the list in the hope that you might be interested in taking a look. I would be so grateful for any thoughts or advice you might be able to give if you felt this was something that you might be interested in.

We all have that one thing in life that we want to outrun. That one thing that we ignore with all of our might as we metaphorically dump rocks on top of it in a vain attempt to bury it somewhere deep. But, these things don't like to be buried, and these things always find a way to slither back up to the surface when you're not looking.

In a universe where each planet has a ruler, and an underground kingdom of people magically commanding a different element of the universe, life was destined to be harmonious. But, for Meya - who commands the light along with her trusted stars - life has become one long metaphorical rock dump. Her sister, Gaia, who rules the Earth, has cut herself off from her family and shut her humans outside on the surface, whilst her other sister, the feisty Seraphina who rules the Sun, is far too busy loving life to offer any help. To complicate matters further, a rogue group of Knights from the outer universe who command the darkness, are growing suspiciously stronger against Meya's control of the light, and alarmingly begin draining her moons. With her army currently on an Earth mission to save the humans, Meya is forced to take matters into her own hands.

With events spiralling out of control, Meya finds herself going against everything she believes in as she takes drastic action, which has potentially catastrophic consequences for the whole universe. Tensions rise and passions overflow as a crescendo of spectacular battles of magical powers lead Meya to face the one thing she fears the most, and something she thought she had buried a long time ago. As each battle brings her one step closer to the truth, she realises that everything is not always as it first seems, and that maybe there really are no mistakes in the grand, master plan of life.

"Aether" is a 80,000 word Fantasy story with a strong undertone of romance which is written from alternating character perspectives to build this story from both an alien, and a human perspective. As this story is set in current day Los Angeles, the alien observations provide interesting twists on our modern day life, along with thought provoking alternative explanations for our history, our planet and our universe - which I feel (and hope!) gives the reader a relatable foundation from which to begin this fantasy journey.

Thank you for your consideration
Eve

[Robin]

Hi Kenzie! I have a YA Sci Fi I'd love to get your feedback on if you have time.

Sixteen-year-old Sydney Reynolds fought hard for her spot in the exclusive college-run summer science program. Nothing could make her give up the rock star neurologist future it promises. Not even discovering the program is a cover for a dangerous experiment in mind reading and mind control.

Especially once she finds out how good she is at it.

With the help of these new skills, Sydney plans to say goodbye to her socially awkward, self-doubting days and hello to a confident, accolade-filled future. That is, until Dean--the attractive yet maddeningly unpredictable student aide for the project--begins to suspect her unusual abilities may be a side effect of mind tampering.

Subsequent tests reveal several false memory implants in Sydney's brain, proving that not only are her memories not her memories, but that someone is using her as a spy to steal information about the program without her knowledge. To free herself from her invisible bonds and protect the project's research from being used to enslave minds, Sydney must track down that one who's been digging around inside her head.

But the more pieces of her true past she uncovers, the further she feels from the bright, shiny future she's planned. Surrounded by people literally playing head games, she has no idea who she can trust. Including herself.

Let me know if you’d be interested. Thanks so much!
Robin

[Dan]

Hi Kenzie! My book is a fantasy adventure one but geared toward a YA audience. Would you be interested in reading my intro and Chapter 1? I think that would all be around 6,000 to 7,000 words. :)

Best,

Dan

[Grayson]

Hello Kenzie,

Clyde Robbins is a bright and weathered young man who thrusts himself into the Vietnam War to satiate a mysterious existential longing and escape from a dysfunctional family.

.... and like so many souls who drifted into that conflict, he never returns.

However, finality is not meant to be his. He awakens in a strange world of nebulous origins and direction where he ultimately learns that he is key to an enduring prophecy.

At 60,000 words, this hybrid fantasy/speculative fiction novel explores the fragility of life, the meaning of death, and the value of forging one's own path despite the omnipresent forces that rip at all of us.

If you're interested, I'd be happy to share with you and receive your feedback.

Respectfully,
G.W. Hooper

[Yoann]

Hi Kenzie,

What a great profile/experience! You probably have enough to read by now, but just in case, here's a brief description of my story:

I just finished an epic medieval fantasy story, more low than high fantasy. It's for an adult audience and it has 135k words.

There are four point of view characters. One is Alena, an underling (other word for slave) who finds a firestone, the most precious and dangerous object in the Three Kingdoms. She hopes to use the firestone to flee and chase freedom, but brings greater misfortune onto herself in the process.
The second POV character is Hugo, a young woodsman's son who accidentally saves the Order of Sorcerers by nurturing the only magical tree in decades. It earns him a place in the Order and he embarks on a career as a mage. There he will join the sorcerers on a journey to hunt the only dragon alive.
The third POV character is Warric, a hermit who volunteers to hunt the mighty dragon on his own (separately from the sorcerers). His aim is to save his town from further harm and above all else, to protect his daughter who believes another man to be her father.
The final POV character is Carlyn, and hers is an epistolary story. We follow Carlyn's letters with her daughter Reen. She describes the political situation in the Three Kingdoms and her own misadventures as she attempts to prove a kingdom's illegal possession of firedust. Her story eventually ties in with the other POV characters.

Let me know if you're interested :-)

Best,

Yoann

[Cimone]

Hi, Kenzie.
I have a 61,000-word work of young adult sci-fi called "Red Letter Law".

In the year 2038, two sisters, Lonnie and Rochelle, are sold into slavery on Mars. One of them escapes.

[Skye Collett]

Hi There Kenzie, I'm looking for someone to read my 80k adult themed fiction book, its not Erotica but theres definitely some steamy scenes as well as recreational drug use... the main characters name is actually Kenzie!! Ha ha, ultimately its about life, family, friends & love in your 30's in Australia. I've self published on Amazon & theres a synopsis on Goodreads as well. The book is called Single Rider. Looking forward to hearing from you. Cheers

[[deleted user]]

Oh, oh, oh, Pick me!
Message 15 down here. I have a sci-fi comedy I would love for you to beta-read. This is the fourth book I've written. That doesn't necessarily mean I'm a good writer, it's just my fourth book.

Check out the introduction here.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1j...

[T.A.]

Dear Kenzie:

Ebraham hunts silvertongues. It's his job to protect the kingdom of Elysia from silvertongues--those born with a voice capable of altering the minds of others. Under orders from the Winter Queen to identify the silvertongue who has infiltrated the Fifth Regiment, he assumes the disguise of Mikhail Pierceson, the son of a wealthy lord, and joins the regiment as a new recruit. With the aid of a magicked amulet, an uncanny ability to read people, and just a touch of overconfidence, he is sure he'll have this mission closed in a blink. In fact, he already has a strong candidate for the suspected silvertongue: Davis Stone. Now all he has to do is send for the Royal guards and claim his reward.

Davis Stone is not a silvertongue. He is, however, a highly respected lieutenant in the Fifth Regiment who also serves as the regiment's second in command. His hatred for silvertongues is notorious throughout the kingdom. It pains him to maintain this false reputation, but he is willing to make sacrifices in order to serve his kingdom, even if it means betraying the silvertongue he secretly loves.

Alivia Youngblood is the captain of the Fifth Regiment. She is also a silvertongue. Ever since taking command, she's transformed the Fifth into one of the strongest fighting forces in the Elysian Army, and she isn't pleased with the addition of a Pierceson to her ranks; Lord Pierceson is a cruel man, and any harm that befalls his son will be her blame to take. With new orders from the Winter Queen to capture Dark Water Point, an enemy stronghold, Alivia's focus is so consumed by the mission on hand and keeping Mikhail Pierceson safe that she fails to see the dangers from those closest to her.

Clocking in at 75,000 words, SILVER AND ICE caters to the YA Fantasy audience, and is sure to please fans of "Throne of Glass" and "The Young Elites."

Thank you for your time and consideration.

Sincerely,
Tina Chan
101tinachan@gmail.com

***

Haha, yes. I totally just tried to use my query on you ;) (*no shame*)

Other fast facts:

*this is my 4th complete draft that has been previously critiqued and beta-ed on Scribophile, so the writing is (hopefully) pretty polished and streamlined

Here is a link to the first couple chapters so you can decide whether you're a good fit for my writing style:
https://docs.google.com/document/d/15...

If you're interested, or would like a couple more chapters before deciding whether or not you want to beta read Silver and Ice, please don't hesitate to shoot me an email at:
101tinachan@gmail.com

Cheers
Tina

[J.]

Hi Kenzie,

"The Color of Cold and Ice" is already published. But, I've been thinking it could use some tweaking. There are five characters. The book starts with the character of Sybil, but I think maybe it should have started with Mark. Also, I think my description needs work. I did have beta readers and I paid for editing. My intuition says it needs something more.

Sybil has dreams; the prophetic kind, although interpreting them correctly is another matter. Her latest dream involves her sister Emerald, who wants to pursue her art once more and move on with her life after losing her husband. John, once felt he was making a difference as an ER doctor, but finds himself slipping away in his Manhattan practice as well as in his marriage. Allison, John’s wife wants to change her ho hum existence with John into something spectacular. Mark, Allison’s brother, a struggling musician, wants to quit rambling in life and find his purpose.
The cold changes everything.

If you should have time, I could use some expert advice.

Thanks,
Jerri
J. Schlenker
jerrischlenker@gmail.com

[Cas]

Hi Kenzie

My project is more in the historical lit catagory. I'm writing about a Victorian sculler on the Tyneside and I'm not sure if this first draft is dark and atmospheric, or dingy and dull. I'm in dire need of leery eye.

All good,
Cas

[Angelina]

Hi Kenzie,

Happy New Year!

I have a YA Fantasy adventure and romance novel.

Synopsis:

“Deity’s Soulmate (Book 1)” is an 60,000 word novel set in a fantasy setting of a span of about 21 years.

The book is written predominantly from the point of view of Gardenia, a rebellious teenage goddess, who had her world turned upside down by one of the Fate sisters. Gardenia’s easy going lifestyle of slowly learning about creation of life is destroyed after she learns the truth about humanity and after Hera’s daughter egged her on to prove the Fate wrong on Gardenia’s fate.

Gardenia’s punishment is to learn the 13 days of creation from 13 different teachers for a 100 years. However, what Zev didn’t count on was on Gardenia abandoning the family to learn from his enemy, the dragons. And to make things worse, Hera and her daughter are out to make things difficult for her to succeed. To succeed, Gardenia turns her back on her family and tries her hardest to learn about creation all the while travelling the stars and finding her soulmate.

Imaginative, amusing, and adventurous, the Goddess Training Trilogy Book 1 is a tale that will possess you to want to travel the stars.



If you're interested please message me. Have a safe week. Where I live, it's super windy and rainy.

Angelina

[Gem]

Hi, Would you consider reading gay romance?
Here are the book details.
Name: Ethereal Law -Ethereals Book 2
Genre: Gay, Sci-fi Romance
Blurb:
What do you do when you realise your mate has been right under your nose all your life? And she's a he!
In Jas and Praid's case, they reject it. Fight it, and decide to hide it from everyone. Unfortunately, when you live on a space ship with your best friends, who along with you just happen to be the last of your species, keeping secrets is hard.
As they cross galaxies, chased by old enemies and use their natural charm to create new ones, Jas must decide what's more important, his secret or his mate.

Please message me if interested.
Thank you
Gem.

[Taylor]

Hello I'm looking for a beta reader for a PNR/UF novella of about 50k words. You can

Desi is a tracker for her pack and works for the leader of all werewolves, the Praetor, to find a notorious killer, Balric the Butcher, who's been killing their kind for an unknown reason. There is only one problem, he is her animal half, and she’s the killer they're looking for. When another death brings their ultimate target to their doorstep, it also brings the Praetor and his twin brother, both who offer an unexpected obstacle she’s not quite sure how to handle.

[Elisa]

Hello, I have a WIP, 64k word Dark Fantasy/SciFi novel.

Thirty years after a deadly virus turned hundreds of residents into flesh-hungry, mutated monsters, the city of Caara Island still tries to live as normal as possible.
Like most of the teenagers and young adults working for a secret organization hell-bent on producing a stronger antidote for the creatures’ toxic bites, seventeen-year-old Sasame Kai has one main mission: hunt down the residents with immunity and return them to The Organization for research. During this, she meets a group of friends who help protect their city in a different way.
Nevin Rockiest along with his buddies Fang and Dante, and his long-time girlfriend Ashley Sonnie join the Eradication Squad to fight and destroy the creatures that threaten their homes. Unknowing of Sasame’s secret missions, they befriend her as one of their own.
Sasame now battles following her orders appease her handlers and keeping her new friends out of the spotlight of her superiors.

[Samantha]

Love to work with you!

Sixteen-year-old Amelia Sawyer is a daddy's girl in the truest sense of the word. Under the protection and guidance of her father she grows up in the persecuted Southern precinct, dependant on the North for the weekly life-supporting Antidote. When her father is killed by the Vermune virus Mia leans on her best friend Dan as they seek answers through The Movement a Southern rebel group fighting for equality.

The Movement reveals that the North have been targeting Southern households with placebos, meaning everyone's life is at risk. As the movement meticulously develops a plan to take control of the Antidote, disaster strikes. Mia is forced to to take action to save not only those closest to her but in the process, decide the fate of her entire precinct. She must however rely on a Northerner to pull it off. Can she trust him, not only with her life but with the fate of all her people?

THE MOVEMENT is a YA, Dystopian novel. Complete at 116,000 words.

Thank you!

[Jennifer]

I also have a dystopian novel in final stages. Would you be interested in a beta / review swap?

I'm only interested in HONEST feedback / reviews, and am willing to do the same ;)

Let me know your thoughts...

[L.N.]

Hi, I have a friend who needs a beta reader for his new Urban Fantasy/Mystery. Please let me know if you are interested =)

[[deleted user]]

I have a novella called Pearls of Avanaria. It is seven chapters and also fantasy young adult. I need feedback from it and also a critique please.

[Jennifer]

L.N. wrote: "Hi, I have a friend who needs a beta reader for his new Urban Fantasy/Mystery. Please let me know if you are interested =)"

I just finished reviewing a novel and would be willing to take a look at your friend's novel. Do you think he would be open to swap?

[Jennifer]

B wrote: "I have a novella called Pearls of Avanaria. It is seven chapters and also fantasy young adult. I need feedback from it and also a critique please."

Has your work been published or is it in the final stages of edits?

[L.N.]

I can ask him...what genre do you dabble in? He is a bit picky =). He won't read romance/erotica.

[Jennifer]

Una of Ashael is definitely NOT erotica, and although there is a love interest or two - my husband says it's not a Romance Novel, lol! That being said, I would say my audience would tend to lean toward women, generally.

"Stripped of their birthright and shunned by the people of Ashael, Una, and her family are forced to live on the fringe of society as Scavengers. When the family experiences a sudden change of circumstance, Una takes new freedoms, free from the Authority, her family and possibly her fate. Pulled between the life she’s always known and a world where status and rituals are everything, Una struggles to understand a culture that has rejected her family and celebrates death. Time is running out and she can’t stop thinking about what she fears the most: the coming of her womanhood and her subsequent price when she’s taken to the Seller’s Stage. As the Festival of the Three Moons draws near and she learns who she really is, will Una find the courage to do what it takes to ensure her families survival or will she find the faith to follow her heart?"

[L.N.]

Hi Jennifer, I shall send him that sample to look at =).

[Chad]

Hi Kenzie,

I have a complete about 70k novel that I need to figure out the genre. What I definitely know is that it's adult literary fiction. What the specific genre is for sending query letters out, I have no idea.

Here's what the story is.

Ten-year-old Charlie Carson’s reality is so bad the only way he can deal with his reality is through his imagination. While Richard Hanford hands Charlie's drug-addicted mother more narcotics, Charlie envisions Richard as super villain Doctor Psycho injecting an energy drainer serum in Charlie's trapped mother.

Just as Charlie overhears Doctor Psycho’s plan to destroy his newly made foes, his recently moved in, next-door neighbor and classmate, Denise Proctor, develops a crush on the ten-year-old boy. Even though the feeling is mutual, Charlie isn't sure if he should even acknowledge her presence, afraid Doctor Psycho might hurt her. With the help of a school bus driver, a college drug dealer, and a purple plush toy, Charlie must discover what makes a true hero to defeat Doctor Psycho.

If you wouldn't mind reading it and let me know what you think the specific genre would be I'd appreciate it. Also, you know, critiques on the story.

Thank you!

Chad Kriss

[L.N.]

Jennifer wrote: "Una of Ashael is definitely NOT erotica, and although there is a love interest or two - my husband says it's not a Romance Novel, lol! That being said, I would say my audience would tend to lean to..."

Just sent the sample to him now. I'll give you a nod when I hear from him =)

[Brian]

Looking for Beta Readers for 7 chapters of Fantasy Adventure/Werewolf/Historical Fiction The Wolf of Dorian Gray (Book 2) Purgatory of the Werewolf

Easily found and worked with along with specific items I am looking for from a Beta reader on Wattpad for your convenience: https://www.wattpad.com/344839595-the...

[A.W.]

Hi Kenzie,

Thank you for your offer!

I am looking for betas for my new 54k character-driven, soft sci-fi/dystopian/romance (!) novel, The Seeds of Winter.

Short blurb:

In the aftermath of the gigadeath Artilect War, Ailith, one of a new generation of cyborgs, must fight for her survival in a hostile new landscape. From those who would worship her to those who would exploit her, in a world she no longer knows, who is the real enemy? The factions that formerly tried to destroy her? Those she meets along the way? Or does her most fatal enemy come from within? *sinister music*

This is hopefully going to be the first book in a series. There are sexual elements in it and violence, just so you know :-)

Please let me know of you are interested! awincross6@gmail(dot)com

[David]

Hello Kenzie
I'd love to find a beta reader who loves unusual thrillers for my Mike Delaney novel TORN APART. He is an ex US assassin, ex Hong Kong Police and ex monk.

Pitch: They were born as twins but how will they die?

Mike Delaney is sucked into a plot that could rock the world when he agrees to reunite twin sisters separated at birth in Ireland. One baby sister remains and is taken into an orphanage. The other is adopted by millionaire parents and taken to America. One becomes a Catholic nun. The other becomes something terrifyingly different in the United States – a female contract killer hired to assassinate the most powerful man in the world. Delaney’s search triggers retaliation by powerful forces that hire a deadly assassin to stop him in his tracks – permanently – and the identical twins cause mayhem and plot twists, particularly when Delaney falls for the assassin.

[V.L]

Kenzie,
Hopefully you aren't too busy now from all the wonderful projects people have posted. I have a completed novel of YA science-fiction/fantasy that I am looking for a beta reader.
BLACK.

Genre: YA urban science fiction
Length: 395 pages, 115,887 words.
Status: Completed (This is the first novel in a trilogy. The second novel WHITE will be completed by the end of FEB 2017 and the final novel GREY should be completed by the end of APR 2017.)

The Project: Lilith “Lily” Peters lives in a world where her parents, a lawyer and an insurance agent are constantly trying to save the little guy from the damages of superheroes and villains. That is until, on her sixteenth birthday Lily finds out her parents are the two most powerful supervillains in Ash Heights. Now unsure who to trust Lily finds herself stuck between Collective, the powerful hero organization who want her parents and Severance, the terrorist villain organization whose claims could change Ash Heights forever.

Hope to hear from you soon!
-Victoria

[Johanna]

Hi!

I'm halfway through a contemporary reboot that puts Pride & Prejudice in the SEALs romance genre. If you like Jane Austen and don't mind having fun with her, then I would love to send you the first four chapters.

Thanks!
Susan

[Andrew]

Seeking a beta for my 80 thousand plus word m/m erotic romance with a navy sailor theme. Pm me if interested.

[Dana]

My book is a romance/suspense. It's book 2 in a soon to be trilogy. It's titled A Hearts Revenge. Madison Skye is on the run from her abusive ex-boyfriend, who happens to be high up in the FBI. In book one she meets a famed actor, Jackson Hunter, who falls in love with her and tries to help.
Together, they derive a plan to help free her from her ex.
Suspenseful, and heartwarming, A Hearts Revenge will keep you rooting for Jackson and Madison to survive.

You can stalk my first book on my goodreads page.
Let me know if you have time and if you're interested
Thanks
Dana Christy

[Caitlin]

Hi Kenzie,

Currently seeking a beta reader for a 70k urban fantasy.

Tied to a chair in his shuttered living room isn’t how Rune envisioned the end of a hard day of running magical drugs.

But his sister, Alana, doesn’t care about his expectations. She doesn’t care that he’s hidden his magic since he was born. That the authorities will capture him and siphon it out of his spirit to make magical drugs, or that he’s got another shift running those same drugs for dealers in the city in under an hour.

Alana, the last remnant of his family, leaves her brother trussed up. Rune loses control and explodes said living room into a smoking mess, drawing the attention of every magic hunter on the planet.

Thank Magi, his fire burns through those bindings because Rune’s got to make a run for it. Got to find – and possibly throttle – his dumbass sister for running off to join the rebellion against the Drug Lords.

Trouble is, Rune’s never used his magic, never even tried, and if he doesn’t learn quick, regions will fall from the sky, Alana will die, and his soul will become just another line of powder, snorted through a tube into the nose of a worker almost as anonymous as he was.

Thanks for your time and consideration! I hope to hear from you. :)

Caitlin

[William]

Hi, I need Beta Reader to review first 6 chapters of a Family Saga/ Historical Fiction