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Nerdy and the Jedi Journal
KingChocolateMilk wrote: "i realy gtg Cookie bye i love u <3<3"Bye Love <3<3
Tell your grandma I said hi
My first dirty thought: Nerdy and King gets married and lives with King's grandma.
PinkLoki(Shine) RULER OF: CrimsonPeak, Asgard, Jotunheim, Midgard, AvengersTower wrote: "My first dirty thought: Nerdy and King gets married and lives with King's grandma."how is that dirty lol
PinkLoki(Shine) RULER OF: CrimsonPeak, Asgard, Jotunheim, Midgard, AvengersTower wrote: "My first dirty thought: Nerdy and King gets married and lives with King's grandma."Like he'd let me go over there
And thats not dirty XD
Because if they get married, they can have children, and King's grandma becomes GREAT GRANDMA!
PinkLoki(Shine) RULER OF: CrimsonPeak, Asgard, Jotunheim, Midgard, AvengersTower wrote: "Because if they get married, they can have children, and King's grandma becomes GREAT GRANDMA!"But thats not dirty, thats nice
BlaurgrhBlah+ahhh+ugh+grr= Blaauurrggrrrhh
PinkLoki(Shine) RULER OF: CrimsonPeak, Asgard, Jotunheim, Midgard, AvengersTower wrote: "Oh... *facedesks*"it's okay sis XD
Cause he loves me
NerdyJediGymnast wrote: "Cause he love me"loves*
im subbing for ms. rae now
so
jacqueline wrote: "NerdyJediGymnast wrote: "By THIS girl:https://www.goodreads.com/user/show/4..."
hey thas me"
I know XD
blue wrote: "NerdyJediGymnast wrote: "Cause he love me"loves*
im subbing for ms. rae now
so"
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hmmI could write but have no time for all that
lol
I've been sitting here for 15 minutes and I got NOTHING
I wrote a few lines and erased it cause it wasnt aesth enough
Something sweet but simple and aesthstic
I should write something too
Ok ok this is KINDA working
its a warm night. the moon is awake with the stars, stretching across the sky above the bright red car. inside it, a pair of hands hold each other as if afraid to let the other go. until she does let go and opens the door. no she cant he thinks. dont let her get away. the door shuts again and shouts follow. he knows why she's upset and cant bear to see it anymore. he leans forward to grasp her face into his hands. he kisses her with passion as though this was the end. her heart beats the sound of a drum, as the weigt of his body pressed against hers. his lips swallowed her whole, melting her on the inside. a fire escaped through his tongue when it wrapped around hers, spreading warmth through her. the moans he made vibrated in her mouth and his hands crept around her waist puller her closer and closer, desparate and pleading for more. he hears her say his name....Jonathan....she pushes him away and crawls on his lap. she wants nothing more but to hold him close. the one who was there when she cried pools of tears, there when she didnt want to go on, the one who gave her life when she felt so close to death. death by the pain scarred on her heart forever marked by the ones that say they love. love shouldnt hurt, but oh it hurts her. and it hurts him. it hurts so much to love her since she fills him up. he can only take so much. but he'll take it all from her if she desires. she's his angel with breaking wings, but each kiss heals them. headlights beam behind them as her family approaches, but they are too lost in each other to notice. screams are heard and the pounding on windows begin, but they ignore it. let them see he thinks. let them see what i want most of all. a never dying love
Me: "This aesth writing is SUCKING for me"Jac: aesthetic writing is writing with your heart for the sake of expressing how you feel without saying it directly
there isn't a formula, there aren't specific word choices
just write with youre heart love and don't think
So thats what I did
Based on last night btw. Well its midnight so really 2 nights ago I think XD
I hate it. I need to do a better one
This actually happened........
*Silent Fist-Bump*
By the way, Nerdy for this being the first aesth.....let me say this, now it isn't the best (don't cry!) but I think its a good first step, probably even a second step as I don't think this is even close to terrible or bad.
*Silent Fist-Bump*
By the way, Nerdy for this being the first aesth.....let me say this, now it isn't the best (don't cry!) but I think its a good first step, probably even a second step as I don't think this is even close to terrible or bad.
I honestly would give this 3-4 stars out of 5 as aesths are based off of emotion, I believe, as this was pure emotion and love.
once upon a time, i fell in love. that alone is scary. so when i say i fell in love hard, thats even scarier. who knows if he'll catch me? but he did. the day we met he did. and now i grasp him in my arms never letting go. he has cast a spell on me that makes me love. love his smile, a dazzling diamond in the sun that sparkles with every laugh makes. his hair untop his head like a crown , fit for the king he is. his body built solid and strong, but warm and soft. his presence, his aura, his persona cast that spell and now i cant help it. i must hold him when i can, brushing kisses to his lips light as a feather. but hes always the one wanting much more. but i cant give it to him. I am the peasant, not fit to dine with the kings, but he still wants me. he believes i make his life better but oh how silly. i have done nothing but made it harder. its worse now and i couldnt stop it no matter how hard i tried. so why is he still loving? what have i done to earn this? i deserve nothing but to him i need a crown. to be his. the thought is tempting and as bliss as his bronze eyes when he stares at you. and it frightens me so. but i love him too much to say no. i become his and i fall. he caught me and now pulls me closer. when e said he loved me thats whe i knew. my heart fluttered, butterflies releasing themselves out my caged heart. im one kind of love he wont let go
Trey wrote: "This actually happened........*Silent Fist-Bump*
By the way, Nerdy for this being the first aesth.....let me say this, now it isn't the best (don't cry!) but I think its a good first step, probab..."
Cry? XD I KNOW it sucks thats why Im trying again
UGGHHH JAC HELP ME NOT SUCK
See I've always loved writing, but I never tried writing aesth
Yup. You have no idea how giddy I got when I saw you say that
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