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Eggnog Murder (A Lucy Stone Mystery, #23.5)
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message 1: by Tina (last edited Dec 12, 2016 03:11PM) (new) - rated it 4 stars

Tina (tinacz) | 6103 comments Mod
Third story in trio of holiday short mysteries from the Eggnog Murder collection.

As it's an open chat, please be so kind and note Spoiler Alert, drop down a few lines, post so the eyes don't pick it up and well...spoil it! Thanx!!


message 2: by Tina (last edited Dec 12, 2016 03:12PM) (new) - rated it 4 stars

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As I'm so aching to spend a few holi-days in NYC (dear PI author friend, Cleo Coyle and SatC gets credit-blame for this want) I was immediately pulled into this story.

Now, I've just begun reading but I felt it was gonna be a good one so I couldn't help but start a discussion thread right off. Hope it delivers some holiday mystery spirit for her readers. Dancer, Prancer...let's do this.


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PugMom (nicoleg76) | 2014 comments I'll be starting this one soon. Had to catch up on some ARCs. I loved the other 2 stories in the collection! The victims keep getting more Grinchy and deplorable!


Tina (tinacz) | 6103 comments Mod
Any time is fine, Nicole. Haven't progressed very far in the story myself.


Tina (tinacz) | 6103 comments Mod
Aww, leaving The Big Apple. For now anyway. Let's see what happens.


message 6: by Tina (last edited Dec 15, 2016 10:11AM) (new) - rated it 4 stars

Tina (tinacz) | 6103 comments Mod
I always wanted to visit the L L Bean store. Maybe someday.

That's crazy that a big, bright yellow truck would go missing from this location. Someone should've seen something!


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PugMom (nicoleg76) | 2014 comments I'm done! I thought I'd have trouble with this one since I have only read the first book in the series and it was a while ago. I figured I might not be able to follow along with the characters but I was pleasantly surprised and really enjoyed it! I did sort of figure out the whole mystery of the victim's identity but I didn't guess every detail. Short and sweet story!


Tina (tinacz) | 6103 comments Mod
Not done with story yet as I got sidetracked with some new movie releases. Florence Foster Jenkins and A Kind of Murder both good flicks. Now to get back on Nogged.


message 9: by Tina (last edited Dec 19, 2016 11:30AM) (new) - rated it 4 stars

Tina (tinacz) | 6103 comments Mod
That Imogen is a pain. Knocking Santa into the water and toppling trees. The characters sure have patience with her. I'd have tried but not sure I'd pull it off.


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PugMom (nicoleg76) | 2014 comments I wouldn't have patience for her either, not to mention even bringing her home in the first place. I think Julia must be a nicer person than I am!


message 11: by Tina (new) - rated it 4 stars

Tina (tinacz) | 6103 comments Mod
They found the yellow truck, discarded contents and a huge surprise inside. Almost done with story.


message 12: by Tina (new) - rated it 4 stars

Tina (tinacz) | 6103 comments Mod
Getting there, PI's. Plot thickening, making sense. I mean, plot not over used though I have seen this angle before so it's still fresh and clever enough. Kinda ditched the Christmas theme though. In final pages. Anyone have any more thoughts on this one?


message 13: by Tina (new) - rated it 4 stars

Tina (tinacz) | 6103 comments Mod
Finished. Figured out part of the reveal which became quite obvious making me no Sherlock Holmes, Poirot, Marple etc. for sure.


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PugMom (nicoleg76) | 2014 comments Ok, so it seemed like these shorter stories were a hit. I liked how I could get through them in a reasonable amount of time and there weren't tons of characters to keep track of. How does everyone feel about the cozies that seem way too long (over 300 pages) and a seemingly endless number of characters? I'm not a fan (maybe it's just me?).


message 15: by Tina (last edited Dec 27, 2016 12:26PM) (new) - rated it 4 stars

Tina (tinacz) | 6103 comments Mod
Not normally a fan of short stories, I did like these for the holidays. 300 pages just seems a bit long. Some could shave a good 25 pages and would be great. Mostly just drone on for what reason, I don't know.


LovesMysteries  | 327 comments Tina wrote: "INot normally a fan of short stories, I did like these for holidays. 300 pages just seems a bit long. Some could shave a good 25 pages and would be great. Mostly just drone on for what reason, I do..."

There are some modern mystery/thrillers written today that's up to and over 400 pages -- that's a bit much and shouldn't resort to that unless it's necessary. A lot of the droning on in books that extend to that many pages is due to lots of description and unnecessary dialogue. I believe everything written in a story should be absolutely essential to the plot -- tightly written. And all the chaff should be blown away.


message 17: by Tina (new) - rated it 4 stars

Tina (tinacz) | 6103 comments Mod
Agreed, LM. If it doesn't move the story along, ditch it!


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