Looking for feedback

[Ariela]

Hi all, I recently started a novel and would greatly appreciate any feedback on the first chapters. If you are interested in editing it or simply giving some friendly advice on characters, plot or the story in general please let me know so I can post the link. Thank you so much.

[Jaclyn]

Hi, Ariela!

Congratulations on starting your novel, that's very exciting!

I am a writer myself, and a freelance editor. I would be more than happy to take a look at your manuscript if you like. I can offer myself for editing services, but if you are just wanting someone to look through it and express their opinion, I would be glad to do that as well.

If you like, you can email me at jaclynalee@outlook.com, or we can discuss things on here.

Good luck, and I hope to hear from you!
Jaclyn

[Alison]

Hi Ariela

I would be happy to take a look. Feel free to email me: alisonewilliams@sky.com

Good luck with it!
Alison

[Yvonne]

Ariela wrote: "Hi all, I recently started a novel and would greatly appreciate any feedback on the first chapters. If you are interested in editing it or simply giving some friendly advice on characters, plot or ..."

Hi Ariela

I am not a proofreader (although I would like to be!), I do however love reading, and I would love to offer to read your book for You and give You an honest opinion.
If You would like , You can email Me at leevon.2005@gmail.com
Happy writing.
Yvonne

[Jody]

Ariela,

I would love to look over the first few chapters and give you any editing advice or just general feedback on what I read. Please send the link to my email jmouse62@hotmail.com

Thank you,
Jody M