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message 1: by Saarah (new)

Saarah Niña (saarahnina) This is just an idea I had, a bit like the word game where you take the last letter of one word to create a new word. Except that it has to be a sentence (or a bunch of sentences), and it contributes in creating a story. Just note- everything has to match the discussion, and has to be relevant and make sense.

Language: English. Anyone welcome to play.

I'll start:

The night air was cold as I trudged up the walkway. Today had not been a good day.


message 2: by Daniyal (new)

Daniyal Kaleem | 1310 comments Why does it always happen to me ? i thought to myself. I tried to be nice to people all day long but still end up having a bad day. Why can't people be a bit more sensitive to other?


message 3: by Saarah (new)

Saarah Niña (saarahnina) Upon further reflection, perhaps I deserved it- after all, I... Oh, maybe I should just quit. Why are my thoughts going around in circles?


message 4: by [deleted user] (new)

As I opened the door and stepped inside, my inner monologue was suddenly forgotten as I saw who was waiting for me inside.


message 5: by Arbaaz (new)

Arbaaz Khan (arbaazkhan1999) | 1592 comments A guy in a black suit with a red shirt tucked in, no tie. He was there waiting for me with his hands intervened with each other.


message 6: by Saarah (new)

Saarah Niña (saarahnina) His eyes were bruised, red and beaten. His whole demeanour was strange, but eerily familiar.


message 7: by Daniyal (new)

Daniyal Kaleem | 1310 comments I started to think "Where have i seen him before?". May be someone i encountered in class or the park.


message 8: by Rabiya (new)

Rabiya (rabiyareads) | 76 comments and all of a sudden he started to sing: is it too late now to say sorry.. cuz m missing more than your bodyy..ooo yeah


message 9: by [deleted user] (last edited Oct 18, 2016 07:53AM) (new)

(@Rabiya, lmao... that was a pleasant twist :p)

As he was singing this song, he began to glow and transform into something resembling an angel with a beak and wings.


message 10: by Rabiya (new)

Rabiya (rabiyareads) | 76 comments (@asad lol seriously. wings and beak. :'D)

and then he came close to me, So close that i could hear his heartbeat. I was so scared that i couldn't move my legs. He quietly whispered in my ear. "happy Halloween"


message 11: by ⊱ Poppy ⊰ (new)

⊱ Poppy ⊰ (poppyreadsalot) | 484 comments and i started hitting him, because he scared the hell out of me. a. nd said "you jerk, i am gonna kil you" and he start running from me


message 12: by [deleted user] (new)

But then I remembered that I had eaten 4 grams of magic mushrooms two hours ago and that person was just a momentary hallucination. He faded out of existence in front of my eyes


message 13: by Rabiya (new)

Rabiya (rabiyareads) | 76 comments I waited for some moments, standing still.. absorbing the situation.. then quietly came inside the room and locked myself in.


message 14: by Daniyal (new)

Daniyal Kaleem | 1310 comments I always liked to lock myself alone in my room... it gave me an opportunity to think about ways to direct my life... These hallucinations and magic mushrooms.... angles with beaks and wings....haaah! these things have started to effect me.


message 15: by Aakash (last edited Oct 21, 2016 11:01PM) (new)

Aakash (mistyanon) | 5393 comments Mod
effected me in a way that nothing else did. I started to live in the hallucinations. soon enough I was friend with these angels and aware of the magic in the dark.


message 16: by MI (new)

MI Abbas | 6 comments And one day with the help of my inner angels and their hallucinations I emerged as a human angel, and got overnight fame and success by singing "Angel, mankind" and since then they call me Tahir Shah.


message 17: by Zarshal (new)

Zarshal Saeed (zarshalsaeed) | 814 comments The end xD


message 18: by Nigham (new)

Nigham | 4042 comments Zarshall wrote: "The end xD"

Haha, happy happy! XD


message 19: by Aakash (new)

Aakash (mistyanon) | 5393 comments Mod
but it was not the end! he said to himself... it was the beginning, a new beginning! xD :P


message 20: by Zarshal (new)

Zarshal Saeed (zarshalsaeed) | 814 comments The whole wide world tried to convince him it was all in his head, but he just won't listen. It was as if he was numb to everything they said. xD


message 21: by Rabiya (new)

Rabiya (rabiyareads) | 76 comments but he could hear the slight humming..like a silent whisper in a quiet night..hear them say.." angel.. i am an angel.. mankind's angel.."
:D


message 22: by Eesha (new)

Eesha Sajid (eeshasajid) | 55 comments it wasn't his fault that he was what he was. He had always been the odd one out. he was born that way, imagining situations and then all of a sudden, finding himself in that situation...


message 23: by Aakash (last edited Oct 23, 2016 02:26AM) (new)

Aakash (mistyanon) | 5393 comments Mod
and his this habit of hallucination was getting worst day by day, it was hard for him to differ in the reality and illusions certain times.!

bsss karo bechara Tahir... heard about his new song? idk if its rumor :P


message 24: by Zarshal (new)

Zarshal Saeed (zarshalsaeed) | 814 comments So people started to seriously think of something to keep his hallucinations at bay and bring him back to reality. But another problem set in. What if after coming back, he realizes what he's done. He'll definitely try to end his life!

Nope. Kya naam ae?? xD


message 25: by Eesha (new)

Eesha Sajid (eeshasajid) | 55 comments and so a cult formed beneath circles of underworld, a cult of angels and devils, of furies and fates, a cult of mortals and immortals, to keep such people who could discern between the veils of mortals and mortals away from the clutches of humanity....


message 26: by Aakash (new)

Aakash (mistyanon) | 5393 comments Mod
whenever these friends of him would come around him, he would feel like a the leader of them and his eyes would start shinning..


message 27: by Nigham (new)

Nigham | 4042 comments They were so like him. He felt as if the cult was his only family. In truth...


message 28: by Aakash (new)

Aakash (mistyanon) | 5393 comments Mod
an orb where nothing was familiar darkness prevailed across the horizon..


message 29: by Eesha (new)

Eesha Sajid (eeshasajid) | 55 comments and beyond that darkness, beyond a mortal or immortal eye could see, thrummed THE light....


message 30: by Aakash (new)

Aakash (mistyanon) | 5393 comments Mod
his body was alerted... strong winds started to blow..


message 31: by Eesha (new)

Eesha Sajid (eeshasajid) | 55 comments strong enough, that he thought they would blow his very being away, far away... so he closed his eyes, raised his arms, and welcomed the ice-cold beating... at last, after a long long time, at last, he was home..


message 32: by Aakash (new)

Aakash (mistyanon) | 5393 comments Mod
slowly he was attracted towards the light his body disintegrated into the air, smile appeared on his face


message 33: by Nigham (new)

Nigham | 4042 comments The familiar energy welcomed him. "This is what it feels like... to be at home", he thought.


message 34: by Daniyal (new)

Daniyal Kaleem | 1310 comments He felt as if it was ages ago the last time he had felt this pleasant feeling. That feeling alone had the energy to brush away all the darkness and the demons within it. It brought me back; back to reality, back to where i was comfortable.


message 35: by Daniyal (new)

Daniyal Kaleem | 1310 comments The world turned to normal after his death... but like all good things it never lasted for long. A year after his death .. on the Halloweens eve.. when the sky was clear and a full moon was shining.... An uncomfortable breeze blew... The spirits of the earth and the dead started to unveil their self... the restlessness become dominant in the air... and descended on earth His spirit once more.


message 36: by Eesha (new)

Eesha Sajid (eeshasajid) | 55 comments and now he was ripped off from the his body, his body that was his only link to the puny mortals, the only cloak that had kept his powers in check, restrained, weakened, sickened.... now he was free from it, now once again he was what he always was, what he had been from the first light of this world, now once again he had become his original self, a self that had sustained beneath the crumbling, rotting body ,even after eons and eons of petty mortality. once again. He was The spirit... The spirit incarnate.


message 37: by Nigham (new)

Nigham | 4042 comments OYE!!! O.O


message 38: by Nigham (new)

Nigham | 4042 comments And then he get married to the bloody Mary and then they both started scaring the hell outta people together.


message 39: by Aakash (new)

Aakash (mistyanon) | 5393 comments Mod
why people are always trying to put an end to a story?? He always thought to himself. What does not interest them is a crime to people. But he was an indigo and he must act like one. One day he will bring change in the society..


message 40: by Nigham (new)

Nigham | 4042 comments So he proposed Bloooody Mary!


message 41: by Eesha (last edited Nov 08, 2016 10:29PM) (new)

Eesha Sajid (eeshasajid) | 55 comments it annoyed the hell out of him that people used his Wife's name for a game and a drink.... they should have something else to play with and so eventually when they had a child together, he named him Coca Cola, the ultimate change....


message 42: by ⊱ Poppy ⊰ (new)

⊱ Poppy ⊰ (poppyreadsalot) | 484 comments But after some time pepsi got so sweet that people start to take him lightly and then slowly and gradually people start to forget pepsi and pepsi faded into the darkness. this was time when COCA COLA decided to come back when he saw that Pepsi was now no one and hence come the coca cola who got his place back in this world and decided that being too sweet can be the ultimate downfall sometimes,


message 43: by Aakash (new)

Aakash (mistyanon) | 5393 comments Mod
Then on the other side of city a boy decieded that it's time to leave the world.


message 44: by Eesha (last edited Nov 09, 2016 08:49AM) (new)

Eesha Sajid (eeshasajid) | 55 comments so he decided to do just that i.e leave the world, by combining the pieces of advice given by two other boys from his home town .... Sting and Dew


message 45: by Reyna (new)

Reyna Ashford (Reyna_12) | 6 comments Just when he decided to leave the world , he woke up , his mother was standing above him telling him to get up and go to school and dream later......


message 46: by Yahya (new)

Yahya Hyder | 5 comments why we can't just live in dreams, why this dull boring real life we have to live, day in day out. he thought.


message 47: by Nigham (new)

Nigham | 4042 comments And then Fanta (her mother) pulled back from his hug and punched him hard on the shoulder. And said, "Ab chaly bhi jaooo, mera drama miss ho raha hy!"


message 48: by Reyna (new)

Reyna Ashford (Reyna_12) | 6 comments The day in school seemed to too slow. He dragged himself through classes all the while thinking about his weird dream. Was it a dream or something else all together?


message 49: by Eesha (new)

Eesha Sajid (eeshasajid) | 55 comments i am thinking that we should start a new story thread...


message 50: by [deleted user] (new)

Feeling happy after having hugged his mother, he merrily strolled down the street and lit up a joint while thinking of what to do for the day, for it was a saturday!


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