First 2 chapters of The Cycle

[Kaitlyn]

I would like an (unpaied) beta reader to please review the first two chapters of my book. It's a start and it moves kind of quickly. There are 2,362 words including the introduction and it's a dystopian literature. I'm hoping that I can get some feedback on how I can improve and how I should approach the next few chapters. This is also the first book I've tried to write. Should I make it a short story, or so you think it would be best to make it longer? It it interesting or boring? Thank you. :)

[Kaitlyn]

Sorry, I totally forgot to introduce myself. Hi, my name is Kaitlyn. ;) ^

[Anne]

Kaitlyn wrote: "I would like an (unpaied) beta reader to please review the first two chapters of my book. It's a start and it moves kind of quickly. There are 2,362 words including the introduction and it's a dyst..."

I think I should be able to help you! How would you like to send it to me?

[Kaitlyn]

Can I email it to you? Thank you so much!

[Anne]

Kaitlyn wrote: "Can I email it to you? Thank you so much!"

No problem! My email address is annebrees00@gmail.com.

(The font makes it hard to tell, but those are zeros, not o's.) :)

[Kaitlyn]

I'm not sure if it's just my device, but your email didn't show up.
-Kaitlyn

[Anne]

Kaitlyn wrote: "I'm not sure if it's just my device, but your email didn't show up.
-Kaitlyn"

Hmmm...do you mean on the post or in your email?

If it's just on the post, my email is annebrees00@gmail.com. (zero's, not o's)

If it's in your email, I don't know what to do...