Cheyenne and We Are The Fallen

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Hi

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Hello

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Any ideas?

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I can come up with one. What do you like? Fantasy, paranormal, Sifi, normal world, none of those?

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Anyone of those are fine. I do prefer working with doubles just to make things fair.

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Okay I'm good with that. But do you mean doubles on the same story or two different stories?

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It could be the same story or different it doesn't matter to me. I think it makes it more interesting with the same story, but it doesn't really matter.

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The same one would probably be less confusing XD.
Ill go type up an idea

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Okay :)

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So there's this Jack Frost retelling or I can come up with another. We can discuss how to put doubles in there

Person A goes out on the frozen lake with their family one day. It's wonderful and breezy and cold. But soon enough Person B watching from afar sees something inside person A. Something Person B needs. They use the minimal power they have to cause a spiderweb of cracks in the ice. Person A in a desperate act to save one of their family members falls into the icy depths. Person B wakes them and explains that Person A has been reincarnated as the new Jack Frost of sorts. Both are invisible to the world but Person B teaches Person A their job of controlling the seasons of the world. The pair always annoyed with each other start to grow and care for each other as there powers start to diminish. They have to figure out what is going on before the seasons start to shift.

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I like this one :)

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Yay!! Okay
How do you want to do doubles?

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Maybe a person is causing the shift in the seasons and maybe he or she doesn't know or maybe they are a villian. Possibly there's another person who's good or human and they fall for each other. That's all i got

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Well that does sound fun. Lets go with that :) who would you like to be? I have no preference.

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Person A and Person D if you don't mind

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Yeah that's fine.

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Okay, so do you like short or detail character profiles, or do you prefer just to jump in it?

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Uhh shirt characters like name age blah blah blah.

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*short

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Okay :)

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Okay quick question about genders on your characters so I can do the opposite?

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Person A
Name: Lilia
Age: 17
Appearance:


Person D
Name: Max
Age: 19
Appearance:

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I just saw your reply I hope my character profiles answer your question :)

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You did :)
Person B
Name: Cilligan (Cal for short)
Age 18
Appearence: https://s-media-cache-ak0.pinimg.com/...

Ill get my other in a minute :)

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Person C
Name: Evangeline
Age: 17
Appearance: https://s-media-cache-ak0.pinimg.com/...

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So who shall go first?

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You if you don't mind?

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Gtg sorry!

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It's fine and okay I'll start

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Back

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Sorry was eating dinner.

How detail shall I be?

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It's alright.

Uhh a couple of sentences?

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Okay

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Lilia looks around the surrounding icy water and smiles. The crisp cold winter breeze blew in her face, as she stands on the deck of their boat. A smile played on her face as this marks the perfect day.


Max smiled as he was walking along the sidewalk. He felt like he had to be in this particular town, but for what that was still unknown. A gut feeling told him eventually it will be revealed.

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Cal stepped farther onto the branch of the tree that overlooked the lake. A girl caught his eye. He watched her. This could be it. He waited watching her.

Evangeline kept her head down her hair in a tight ponytail. Her fist closed smiling as she remembered what she had done to the last boy. Winter was gone. Summer, that annoying little brat would have to wait. She crossed the street and looked up to see a boy. She had never seen him before.

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They were going slower than normally because of the ice. If they were to go faster there was a chance that the ice would break and that could be disastrous. Already going a snails pace they hit a bump. "Is everything okay father?" Lilia asked softly. He responded with a shrug of the shoulders.

Max caught the eye of a girl looking at him, he gave a friendly smiled and kept walking. He learned to mind his own business quickly after several failed missions that he was sent on.

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Cal watched them. He smiled. This had to be the girl. With a flick of his wrist he release a breeze of warm air to the ice underneath them. It started to crack.

Evangeline smiled back and caught up to him. "Hello," she said sweetly trying to get his attention. She needed to figure out why she hasn't seen him before.

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((Sorry I had dinner))

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((That's fine :) ))

Lilia felt their boat shift down into the water. Her eyes caught her little sister on the edge of the boat and when it shift she fell overboard. Lilia made an impulse decision to jump into the water and save her as she pushed her sister back on the boat her ankle got wedged between some ice.

Max perked his up. "Hello," he said as he was turning around to get a look at the person who spoke to him.

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Cal stood on the narrow branch and before he could have her family help her, he forced more warm air to the stretch of ice. If she moved it would collapse. He smiled.

Evangeline forced a blush. "Sorry it's just I've never seen you around here before. Are you visiting or did you move?" She asked. Okay it wasn't that hard to blush. He was pretty handsome.

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It was like the ice was melting from underneath her. Lilia gasped knowing she couldn't move this might truly be the end. Her parents told to her to stay there and wait. Cracking noises started to fill her ears.

A small grinned appeared on Max's face. "I'm temporarily living here. I have some business that requires my attention, " he said softly. "What brings a pretty girl like you to this town?"

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Cal waited. Annoyed she didn't move. He's finally moved the got air one more time. The Ics was starting to falter underneath her weight.

"believe it or not, I actually live here," she said.

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((That's okay))

Lilia felt her body hit the cold lake water hard. She tried to push herself to the surface, but soon realize that she was trapped under some. Her heart thumped against her chest as she started to struggle to breathe.

"You don't sound too thrilled about that?" he said softly.

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Cal smiled and took all his air back and the Ice started to freeze again. He gently flew himself over to the boat. Invisibility had it perks and he gently wiped the memories of her family and sent the boat on its way.

Evangeline shrugged. "You'll learn it gets pretty boring around here."

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((Ugh. I'm sorry. As soon as I come I have to go))

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((Its okay))

Lilia hit the ice as she heard the boat moving away. Her family was leaving. She was going to die. Her oxygen started to diminish she could feel her body started to sink. A blanket of darkness covered her as she took her last breath of air.

"Any thoughts of leaving?" Max asked.

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Cal smiled and felt her. He whispered a small spell under his breath and stepped on the ice where she fell. The ice melted under his feet.

She shrugged. "A few. Yet none have been convincing enough."

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Lilia's body started to float up to the surface. Her face was pale and her lips were blue.

Max nodded. "Well I hope, that maybe one day you can leave and travel," he said.

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Cal smiled and took her body over to the shore. He held a hand over her stomach and head and slowly heated her body.

She smirked. "Yeah I hope so too,"

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Lilia felt heat go into her body. Her eyes started to, fluttered open "You guys came back for me," she whispered she was a little out of it.

Max smiled. "I should be going, it was nice talking to you though," he said.