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message 151: by Day (new)

Day (yes2danny) | 186 comments Day looked up as he walked and saw the queen.He had been trying to avoid her since she rubbed on his face that they couldn't date.


onceuponatimeareview She took a deep breath. She turned around slowly looking for a different route back to the castle. She got there and cried.


onceuponatimeareview ((..))


message 154: by Day (new)

Day (yes2danny) | 186 comments ((slightly losing interest...I feel like I can't get along with your writing"


onceuponatimeareview ((Oh ok))


message 156: by Day (new)

Day (yes2danny) | 186 comments ((I'm trying tho))


onceuponatimeareview ((Ok))


message 158: by Day (new)

Day (yes2danny) | 186 comments ((maybe if you made it easier) )


onceuponatimeareview ((Like what?))


message 160: by Day (new)

Day (yes2danny) | 186 comments ((It's like so hard for them to be together))


onceuponatimeareview ((Hmmm maybe she could do something that makes her forfeit the thrown.))


message 162: by Day (new)

Day (yes2danny) | 186 comments ((NO lol not that bad...I mean like think of a way to make her go with him...))


onceuponatimeareview ((Ok I think I could do that))


message 164: by Day (new)

Day (yes2danny) | 186 comments ((OK post please :D))


onceuponatimeareview It was a new day and she walked through the village this time. She wanted to be with him. She was so confused right now. She walked to his house. She made sure his wife and kid wasn't home. She knocked on the door.


message 166: by Day (new)

Day (yes2danny) | 186 comments Day hurried to the door as he heard a knock.He was finished polishing his sword that he made after several hard tries.


onceuponatimeareview She waited for him quietly. She didn't want to disturb anything.


message 168: by Day (new)

Day (yes2danny) | 186 comments HE opened the door with a smile as froze seeing her there."Um hello queen"he said bowing.


onceuponatimeareview "Um I was wondering if us could workout." She whispered.


message 170: by Day (new)

Day (yes2danny) | 186 comments "What do you mean?"He asked nervously.


onceuponatimeareview "If us as a couple could."


message 172: by Day (new)

Day (yes2danny) | 186 comments "I-I" he said looking down.He had a family and was afraid."Why wait so long?"


onceuponatimeareview "Because I was upset at you but mostly myself for letting you go."


message 174: by Day (new)

Day (yes2danny) | 186 comments "Oh..."He said sighing."I...don't know what to say"He said watching her lips.


onceuponatimeareview She looked at him softly. She didn't say anything. "I understand you have a family now."


message 176: by Day (new)

Day (yes2danny) | 186 comments "Yeah i do..."he said not looking away from her lips.For some reason he couldn't.


onceuponatimeareview "And I understand I was jerk and thought a title was something I needed for a person but it isn't."


message 178: by Day (new)

Day (yes2danny) | 186 comments "I mean it wasn't your fault"He said shrugging.


onceuponatimeareview "It was in a way." She whispered.


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