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onceuponatimeareview "I'm sorry about that. They think my mom is still queen." She said.


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Day (yes2danny) | 186 comments Day watched her shaking from the pain and cold.it hurt so much he could only nodd.He was afraid to even talk.


onceuponatimeareview "So um you should be out soon." She said. "I have a coronation to get ready for." She said she left out of there.


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Day (yes2danny) | 186 comments He watched her leave and screamed.They would be back for him..he would pay for it so much if she left him there.


onceuponatimeareview She walked out knowing her was mad. She sighed and kicked the dirt.


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Day (yes2danny) | 186 comments Day rolled under the bed clenching it ground for his life.He felt as he would let go his life would be over."No no stay away" he said when he thought he heard voiced but it was nothing.


onceuponatimeareview She danced around. She smiled. She was upset inside.


onceuponatimeareview ((...))


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Day (yes2danny) | 186 comments Day only panicked from the previous beatings he wished it would soon end.The beatings,life,everything.


onceuponatimeareview She hated stand if around like this. She left the party early. She soon slipped downstairs to see him. "Hello." She called at him.


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Day (yes2danny) | 186 comments Day was in the corner weeping like a child.Most people would think he has lost his mind.


onceuponatimeareview She oped the cell door and walked to him in her dress. "Why are you crying?" She asked kneeling down by him.


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Day (yes2danny) | 186 comments Day slowly looked up to her seeing it was just her he wiped his eyes."No reason" he said looking down.


onceuponatimeareview "Your scared." She said as a statement. "It's ok." She said. "I'm not going to let them hurt you. You can leave whenever you want."


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Day (yes2danny) | 186 comments He looked at her backing against the wall, rising slowly."What's the catch?" he asked nervously.


onceuponatimeareview She looked at him. "There is no catch." She whispered. This is the third time he did this to her.


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Day (yes2danny) | 186 comments "Look I don't really know where to go anyways i have no where"He said leaning back on the wall.


onceuponatimeareview "Fine stay here I told you you can leave."


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Day (yes2danny) | 186 comments "I will,not all of us are rulers of kingdoms"He said sighing.At least she had somewhere to go he could just be worse then a joker,he would be a slumb.


onceuponatimeareview She bit her lip. "Not all of us are stubborn people who won't except help from their queen." That came out harsher than she excepted.


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Day (yes2danny) | 186 comments "Well I don't understand why the queen only helps me when there are other people"He said quickly.


onceuponatimeareview "I do help people for your information you wouldn't know because you were a prisoner for most of you life." She said. She looked at him her words getting harsher every time.


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Day (yes2danny) | 186 comments "Well who said I wanted this life"He said watching her feeling hurt as the truth was being forced in.


onceuponatimeareview "I tired helping giving you a better life. You could start your life as a peasant what you are anyways and you refused my help. I'm tired of being nice to you everytime I see you." She said.


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Day (yes2danny) | 186 comments "Then don't see me anymore,send me to hang for all I care"he said quickly as he looked away.


onceuponatimeareview "Guards put him under lock down." She said angry and upset. She went away holding the tears in.


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Day (yes2danny) | 186 comments ((You really do not seem to want to fight for him XD
I told you he was going to be hard to get but you give up to soon))


onceuponatimeareview ((Well you'll see why she is the way she is sooner or later:P))


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Day (yes2danny) | 186 comments Day looked at her and throw her a small can."Your too scared to hang me you filthy queen"he said screaming


onceuponatimeareview She blinked trying not to cry so hard. "Shutup you peasant I will not hang you because I said so. Shall we conintue that torment that he guards give you?"


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Day (yes2danny) | 186 comments Day backed away quickly.He couldn't get beat again.He just sat on the corner weeping.There was no love in his life. He wished he could know what it was.


onceuponatimeareview "Guards leave alone and so will I. If he asks to be released let the poor peasant." She said. She walked away slowly and let the tears come down her face.


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Day (yes2danny) | 186 comments Day had nowhere to go he cried himself to sleep and was awaken around midnight when the guard that loved to beat him the most opened the cell."Queen said you can leave when you want...So let her think you left..your coming with me"He said as he cuffed him and knocked him out.He dragged his body out quickly.


onceuponatimeareview She knew she said she wouldn't go see him but she wanted to check on him. He was gone. She walked out then walked back to her chambers. She sighed and looked at the floor.


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Day (yes2danny) | 186 comments The guard picked him up and quickly took him to his house outside of the kingdom."She wont miss you so don't worry"He said to Day.Day moaned in pain as he woke up rubbing his head.


onceuponatimeareview She sat there crying got most of the time. She was hurting so much inside. She didn't speak to anyone or anybody for the longest time.


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Day (yes2danny) | 186 comments "Why did you bring me here?"he asked nervously."Slaves sell for some pretty cold coins"He said smirking.


onceuponatimeareview She paced around. "Guards be on the look out for this person for treason." She showed him the picture of Day. She wanted him back here. She was being super selfish. "Bring him back alive."


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Day (yes2danny) | 186 comments "So lets get you to this slave auction and see how much we get for you"He said as they arrived in the Slave auction.He throw Day in line with the other slaves.


onceuponatimeareview One of the queens knights found him at the slave auction. "Haunt that is a guy wanted for treason against the queen." He said.


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Day (yes2danny) | 186 comments Day looked around as he stood in line."This isn't fun" he said nervously


onceuponatimeareview "Arrest him." The knight said pointing to Day.


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Day (yes2danny) | 186 comments The guards quickly tackled Day and dragged him away.
Day just looked at them confused."Is everything alright?"He asked.


onceuponatimeareview "Your under arrest for treason." He said.


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Day (yes2danny) | 186 comments "Nice,wait what?"He asked quickly.He was dragged to the queens chambers and thrown into her floor as the locked the doors behind him."OK i did nothing wrong" Day said quickly as he stood up.


onceuponatimeareview She looked at him. She had to make her intentions seem evil. "I think a good sorry should come into here for being mean to me,"


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Day (yes2danny) | 186 comments "Look i didn't know you would go this far"He said quickly."I'm sorry"


onceuponatimeareview "Well in a way you did commit treason talking down to me." She said.p


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Day (yes2danny) | 186 comments "Well sorry"He said nervously.


onceuponatimeareview She looked at them upset. "Sorry isn't good enough here"


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