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message 3901: by kavi ~he-him~ (new)

kavi ~he-him~ (spideykavi) | 25621 comments ∂ινιиιтуღ ~ι ¢αи'т ρυт му нєαят σи нσℓ∂~ wrote: "Wait...Albus left?!

I have a cramp rn >.<"


No not Albus, Beast is the one that left :(


message 3902: by kavi ~he-him~ (new)

kavi ~he-him~ (spideykavi) | 25621 comments *sobs* today's the day.....my favorite band broke up.....*cries* MCR I MISS YOU!!!


message 3903: by [deleted user] (new)

i sory *hugs*


message 3904: by kavi ~he-him~ (new)

kavi ~he-him~ (spideykavi) | 25621 comments *hugs Lee and cries* WHYYY MCR???


message 3905: by Wolf (Alpha) (new)

Wolf (Alpha) | 938 comments *hugs* I'm sorry Kavy


message 3906: by blue (new)

blue (hermiionegranger) | 10482 comments ❄️Princess K (Kavy) of Books and music ❄️~It's killing me, I admit it now~ wrote: "*sobs* today's the day.....my favorite band broke up.....*cries* MCR I MISS YOU!!!"

Aw, I'm sorry *hugs*


message 3907: by kavi ~he-him~ (new)

kavi ~he-him~ (spideykavi) | 25621 comments But it's also the day the tickets for Warped Tour come out, and we'll get to know which bands are playing


message 3908: by [deleted user] (new)

*pets and says* shush its ok just let it out


message 3909: by kavi ~he-him~ (new)

kavi ~he-him~ (spideykavi) | 25621 comments Wolf wrote: "*hugs* I'm sorry Kavy"

Blue wrote: "❄️Princess K (Kavy) of Books and music ❄️~It's killing me, I admit it now~ wrote: "*sobs* today's the day.....my favorite band broke up.....*cries* MCR I MISS YOU!!!"

Aw, I'm sorry *hugs*"


*hugs and cries*


message 3910: by blue (new)

blue (hermiionegranger) | 10482 comments *hugs*


message 3911: by Wolf (Alpha) (new)

Wolf (Alpha) | 938 comments ❄️Princess K (Kavy) of Books and music ❄️~It's killing me, I admit it now~ wrote: "Wolf wrote: "*hugs* I'm sorry Kavy"

Blue wrote: "❄️Princess K (Kavy) of Books and music ❄️~It's killing me, I admit it now~ wrote: "*sobs* today's the day.....my favorite band broke up.....*cries*..."


*pats on back and holds*


message 3912: by Jade (new)

Jade Oh ok sure
I have a bipolar psychotic mama who took my tablet and claimed to the athorities and administrators at my school that I was sending and recieveing nudes. For some reason they think that I was logged onto the tablet for a week but get this, the tablets not even mine, it's my friends. Ohhh and if that's not enough, my mama.acted as if she actually cared for me.. REALLY! FUCKING REaLLy?! The same parent who beat me repeatedly with a frying pan and when she got to tired to swing it, she stumped on my whole body!!! The same person?! Are you fucking serious!?! So they pull me out of class and tell me. The say they saw the so called messages I've been sending and they were upset. Well first things first, idgaf becuase they only listen to her!!! Not all parents tell the truth. They are full of lies just like everyone else because we all are human. They fucked up my day. I'm just done rn


message 3913: by Jade (new)

Jade Committing suicide


message 3914: by [deleted user] (new)

then come live with me we dont do that


message 3915: by Wolf (Alpha) (new)

Wolf (Alpha) | 938 comments Jade wrote: "Committing suicide"

Please Jade. I'm begging you don't commit suicide.


message 3916: by kavi ~he-him~ (new)

kavi ~he-him~ (spideykavi) | 25621 comments Jade wrote: "Oh ok sure
I have a bipolar psychotic mama who took my tablet and claimed to the athorities and administrators at my school that I was sending and recieveing nudes. For some reason they think that ..."


NO DON'T DO IT DON'T KILL YOURSELF PLS JADE it's not worth it!! You've got us pls we love you!!


message 3917: by kavi ~he-him~ (new)

kavi ~he-him~ (spideykavi) | 25621 comments I need help with a essay......


message 3918: by kavi ~he-him~ (new)

kavi ~he-him~ (spideykavi) | 25621 comments I have to write a half-serious juvenalien satirical solution to a problem in modern American Society. And I'm doing bullying


message 3919: by kavi ~he-him~ (new)

kavi ~he-him~ (spideykavi) | 25621 comments I need help with making up the subtitle. It has to flesh out the problem I'm trying to solve and it has to be VERY long


ᴘʜᴏᴇɴɪx ★ᴄᴀᴛᴄʜ ᴍᴇ, ɪ'ᴍ ꜰᴀʟʟɪɴɢ★ | 4587 comments Why does it have to be so long? Are subtitles usually really long?


message 3921: by kavi ~he-him~ (new)

kavi ~he-him~ (spideykavi) | 25621 comments So the essay has to follow this basic model

a. write a subtitle. Your essay should be called "A Modest Proposal" but the subtitle should flesh out what problem you are trying to solve (without giving away your "shocking" element)

b. Paragraph 1: A clear first paragraph that contains a fixed image of your problem. Try to include an image of your problem that elicits the readers' sympathies.

c. Paragraph 2: A Paragraph description of your shocking solution.

d. Paragraph 3: A list of four to six clearly labeled "logical reasons" for why your solution would work

e. Paragraph 4: An italicized paragraph describing your response to the opposition's argument

f. Paragraph 5: Conclusion



message 3922: by kavi ~he-him~ (new)

kavi ~he-him~ (spideykavi) | 25621 comments ᴄʟᴀʀɪᴄᴇ ★ᴘᴇʀғᴇᴄᴛ ᴛʜᴇ ᴡᴀʏ ɪ ᴀᴍ★ wrote: "Why does it have to be so long? Are subtitles usually really long?"

Because the other day we had to read an essay in class because we're doing a unit on Satire, and the essay that we're writing has to have a structure similar to that essay we read in class


message 3923: by kavi ~he-him~ (new)

kavi ~he-him~ (spideykavi) | 25621 comments And it also has to have at least 4 satirical devices


message 3924: by ᴘʜᴏᴇɴɪx ★ᴄᴀᴛᴄʜ ᴍᴇ, ɪ'ᴍ ꜰᴀʟʟɪɴɢ★ (last edited Mar 22, 2017 09:33AM) (new)

ᴘʜᴏᴇɴɪx ★ᴄᴀᴛᴄʜ ᴍᴇ, ɪ'ᴍ ꜰᴀʟʟɪɴɢ★ | 4587 comments Wait, have you guys read "A Modest Proposal"?

Okay, so since you're doing bullying, how about....
"A Modest Proposal: An Examination of Bullying and How to Control and Eradicte It"?


message 3925: by kavi ~he-him~ (new)

kavi ~he-him~ (spideykavi) | 25621 comments Yeah we did, but I'm terrible at focusing in the class and paying attention, like it's hard for me to pay attention for a long time without zoning out

Thanks Clarice!!


ᴘʜᴏᴇɴɪx ★ᴄᴀᴛᴄʜ ᴍᴇ, ɪ'ᴍ ꜰᴀʟʟɪɴɢ★ | 4587 comments ❄️Princess K (Kavy) of Books and music ❄️~It's killing me, I admit it now~ wrote: "Yeah we did, but I'm terrible at focusing in the class and paying attention, like it's hard for me to pay attention for a long time without zoning out

Thanks Clarice!!"


Basically, the jist of it was that there was a severe lack of food somewhere (I forget which country) and married couple kept having babies and couldn't feed them, so Swift proposed that each married couple should have one baby for the sole purpose of eating it. That would help build better "relationships" between mother-and-child and father-and-mother. Anyway, the mother would feed it as much as she could to fatten it up and send it to the slaughterhouse for the butcher to care of.

You're so welcome, hon!


message 3927: by kavi ~he-him~ (new)

kavi ~he-him~ (spideykavi) | 25621 comments Thanks Clarice!! *hugs*


message 3928: by kavi ~he-him~ (new)

kavi ~he-him~ (spideykavi) | 25621 comments I need help with the other paragraphs too


message 3929: by kavi ~he-him~ (new)

kavi ~he-him~ (spideykavi) | 25621 comments This essay is gonna kill me....


message 3930: by NerdyJediGymnast (new)

NerdyJediGymnast | 15013 comments hey princess wanna help me? bae iz mad @ me -_-


message 3931: by kavi ~he-him~ (new)

kavi ~he-him~ (spideykavi) | 25621 comments Is this a good first paragraph

Bullying is something that happens to a lot of people. It goes from the bully punching or pushing their victims, hurting them physically, to throwing words at them, spreading rumors, hurting them emotionally. Everyday there are so many innocent people that become victims of bullying. Bullying is a serious problem and is something that needs to be addressed



message 3932: by kavi ~he-him~ (new)

kavi ~he-him~ (spideykavi) | 25621 comments Now, for the 2nd paragraph....what should the shocking solution be?


ᴘʜᴏᴇɴɪx ★ᴄᴀᴛᴄʜ ᴍᴇ, ɪ'ᴍ ꜰᴀʟʟɪɴɢ★ | 4587 comments ❄️Princess K (Kavy) of Books and music ❄️~It's killing me, I admit it now~ wrote: "Is this a good first paragraph

Bullying is something that happens to a lot of people. It goes from the bully punching or pushing their victims, hurting them physically, to throwing words at them,..."


That's good! Now, for a bit of constructive criticism...instead of a lot of people, use many people. Try using 'It can range from...'. Put an 'and' in front of hurting them physically and hurting them emotionally. There's a space between every and day. Great job so far, Kavs!


message 3934: by kavi ~he-him~ (new)

kavi ~he-him~ (spideykavi) | 25621 comments Thanks Clarice *hugs*


message 3935: by Jaxon(Jax)[They-He] (new)

Jaxon(Jax)[They-He] | 4642 comments Guys, Jade isn't on. Im really worried


message 3936: by kavi ~he-him~ (new)

kavi ~he-him~ (spideykavi) | 25621 comments My fingers hurt from working on a science project....


message 3937: by kavi ~he-him~ (new)

kavi ~he-him~ (spideykavi) | 25621 comments Cynonic~The one and only~ wrote: "Guys, Jade isn't on. Im really worried"

No....she has to be okay.....


ᴘʜᴏᴇɴɪx ★ᴄᴀᴛᴄʜ ᴍᴇ, ɪ'ᴍ ꜰᴀʟʟɪɴɢ★ | 4587 comments Try not to panic, Kavs...hopefully she's alright. Do you have another way to talk to her?


message 3939: by kavi ~he-him~ (new)

kavi ~he-him~ (spideykavi) | 25621 comments ᴄʟᴀʀɪᴄᴇ ★ᴘᴇʀғᴇᴄᴛ ᴛʜᴇ ᴡᴀʏ ɪ ᴀᴍ★ wrote: "Try not to panic, Kavs...hopefully she's alright. Do you have another way to talk to her?"

No....


message 3940: by kavi ~he-him~ (new)

kavi ~he-him~ (spideykavi) | 25621 comments Ugh....life.....so many things....I feel so overwhelmed and stress because of too many things going on at the same time.....I can't breathe.....because my thoughts are choking me....


message 3941: by kavi ~he-him~ (new)

kavi ~he-him~ (spideykavi) | 25621 comments I'm failing science....and I need that credit to graduate....school is killing me, I have to deal with my depression, anxiety, and paranoia as well.....I'm scared of my mind.....grades grades grades, the teachers only care about the grades.....I'm broken and fragile.....I hate this feeling.....


message 3942: by kavi ~he-him~ (new)

kavi ~he-him~ (spideykavi) | 25621 comments I feel like I can't do anything right.....


message 3943: by kavi ~he-him~ (new)

kavi ~he-him~ (spideykavi) | 25621 comments Ppl JUST KEEP on expecting me to do things.....expecting me to pass....ask for help....speak up.....but the thing is I can't....I can't ask for help even if I desperately need it....It's hard for me to open up to ppl.....


message 3944: by Wolf (Alpha) (new)

Wolf (Alpha) | 938 comments Does anyone have a way to talk to Jade?


message 3945: by kavi ~he-him~ (new)

kavi ~he-him~ (spideykavi) | 25621 comments No.....


message 3946: by blue (new)

blue (hermiionegranger) | 10482 comments Wolf wrote: "Does anyone have a way to talk to Jade?"

no..


message 3947: by [deleted user] (new)

Can I know what happened with Jade


message 3948: by Jaxon(Jax)[They-He] (new)

Jaxon(Jax)[They-He] | 4642 comments I dont know


message 3949: by kavi ~he-him~ (new)

kavi ~he-him~ (spideykavi) | 25621 comments YES I GOT THE TICKETS TO WARPED TOUR!!


message 3950: by blue (new)

blue (hermiionegranger) | 10482 comments ❄️Princess K (Kavy) of Books and music ❄️~It's killing me, I admit it now~ wrote: "YES I GOT THE TICKETS TO WARPED TOUR!!"

cool


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