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Also, I realize :I'll tell you later" is a valid way of building the suspense, but you can go to that well too often.


I found myself thinking that Kat's being involved in both cases was what saved her from being snatched up on the street by Titus when she was with Sugar rather than returning immediately back to her apartment.
I kept trying to connect the two cases in other ways and couldn't pull that together in my head as I read along. I thought the mastermind behind the abductions must either be Jeff or have killed Jeff or, who knows. The revelation Jeff accidentally killed her Father was a shock. I wondered about Aqua's extreme distress earlier in the book but couldn't but it all together.



Overall, I found this outing unsatisfying. I was caught up in the action, that part was good. But, too many whiplash moments where something happens and you go "wah?" Like, Chaz suddenly becomes Mr. Helpful -- what was up with that? And the whole Jeff angle I mentioned before. It felt a little like patchwork plots to me.

I can't quite put my finger on it, but generally the characters don't seem real to me, and as so many other authors write characters that do seem real, and worthy of investing my time with them, I'll still have plenty to read.

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Yes, agreed. It's too bad, I really want to love them because Harlan the person is such a kick. But the characters seemed cartoony, one dimensional kind of. Like they're following plot points on an outline rather than living the moments. Quite a contrast to Broken Harbour, where I can feel everybody's pain. Which is not always fun, but I finish the Murder Squad books feeling like I really lived a drama.

Well, I don't know that I'd go THAT far!

Barry wrote: "So do we set it on fire before we fling it at a wall?"
