Vicci Audio Nerd & Ezinwanyi - Out of Breath, Book 3

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Chapter 9: The Non-Date. Woo Hooo!!!

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Vicci Audio Nerd wrote: "Chapter 5 - Fading


“Well, you intimidate most of the guys in the school, so you never get asked out. The girls think you’re stuck up and that’s why your only friend is the most popular girl in sc..."

Loved this scene. Freaking loved it and loved Evan for being man enough to voice it.

Did I miss why she is living with this particular relative?
also is she related to George or Carol?

the kids know what Carol is doing, but what can they do? i am surprised the soccer coach hasn't noticed and reported the abuse

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Erghh she's horrid.

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Chapter 8 - Bad Luck

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Ahh I really like Evan he's so cute.

They're going on a not date haha, I think i can see where this is heading

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Chapter 9 - Not a Date

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I got nervous when they went back to Evans house I was hoping that he wasn't going to turn into a douchebag but no, he was a perfect gentleman.

I think he relates to Emma a lot as his parents seem to be out of the picture quite a lot by the sounds of it.



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I'm up to chapter 16 by the way but have been at work all day so just posting these now, I'm not speed reading lol

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Chapter 10 - Night Game

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Erghh she was locked out for not being home at 10pm , that was freaky when she saw her face at the window, her aunt is a freak!

And then her aunt whispered that she would have left her out in the cold !!!

What is her problem !?!?!?!


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Did I miss why she is living with this particular relative?
also is she related to George or Carol? 

the kids know what Carol is doing, but what can they do? i am surprised the soccer coach hasn't noticed and reported the abuse 

i think it mentions about that in a couple of chapters later

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Chapter 11 - The Library

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Holy shit a baseball bat !!!!!!

How she can not say something is unbelievable, it's like she's accepted "this is my life and I've just got to get on with it.

I ♡Evan though, he's so patient with her and doesn't push her to open up if she doesn't want to.


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Chapter 12 - Bad Influence

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“Does she even know you?” he challenged. “You’re not the type of person to hang out with the wrong crowd. You’re the perfect student, a talented athlete, and the most responsible person I’ve ever met.”

I think Evan has some sort of idea about what is going on, I don't know why but he's so tentative around her, and then gets angry when she mentions things she is not allowed to do.

I think she is getting a bit sloppy with hiding things from her aunt I hope she doesn't get caught, it wouldn't surprise me if she's following her or something.

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Chapter 13 - Replaced

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OMG !!!
She hit her in front of the children and then blamed her for it !!!

And the belt !! Jesus she is completely deranged !!

“Emma, you have to tell someone.” Her words sounded desperate and urgent. “If you don’t, then I will.” GO SARAH!!
I was nearly jumping up and down when she said that, but then Emma was SO horrible to her, I know she was just doing it to push her away but she will regret doing that to her best friend, she's all she has got.

And her uncle telling her to "take it easy" on her aunt wtf!!! Does he actually live in the same house?? He MUST know what is going on.



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Chapter 14 - Hollow

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Ahh Evan missed soccer practice to be with her ♡♡♡

The pillow fight, I sooo wanted them to kiss, they are so cute together.

“If she hasn’t told you, then I can’t.”
Kudos to Sarah for not saying anything, even if they are not friends she is still keeping her secret for her, that shows what a good friend she is.


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Chapter 15 - Relentless

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Erghh Carol is such a BITCH. “You’re pathetic. If you’re begging for rides and embarrassing me, I will hurt you severely"

“Don’t worry about hurting me,” he replied calmly. “I like being a part of your world, and I understand that it’s more complicated than you’re willing to share with me. But I’ll respect that, for now.” Evan is just sooo nice to her, and he's unpacked YAY!!

And I've changed my mind about Sarah, I love her now.

“And I’m sorry I threatened to expose you. I understand why you’re doing this. I hate it - I’m not going to lie. But I’m here for you, no matter what.”


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Chapter 16- The Plan

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“But Emma,” Sara stated seriously, “if you ever get caught, I will not let her hurt you. I will tell my parents, or call the police, before I allow you to get hurt for my plan. Okay?”

YES OPERATION FREE EM

A party to go to....... i hope she knows what she is doing , still Carol shouldn't find out if they are away for the weekend!

Wow she is getting brave though, agreeing to go for dinner and meeting his parents.... brave girl!

AND she's just realised she likes him, no LOVES HIM squeeelll♡♡♡

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Chapter 17- Unexpected Visitor

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OMG her mother just turns up........and drunk !!!

It sounds like Carol has been hiding her letters, wouldn't surprise me at all.


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Chapter 18- Another Dimension

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And make sure you shave lol

Bless her she is so uncomfortable at the cocktail party, and what is up with that girl, how rude!!!

Hmm Catherine sounds like an old girlfriend but a shameless flirt!

Oh no I was cringing when her heel got caught.

Haha she got her own back on miss flirty pants!


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Chapter 19- Not Laughing

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Hmm this party is a bit weird!

Oh no....

No it's Sunday it's my day! ♡


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Chapter 20 - The Room

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Ooh she's opening up to him, talking about her mum, I hope she tells him soon about her aunt.

Ahh he ♡'s her and he took her picture.

Evan is just freaking CUTE !!


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Vicci Audio Nerd wrote: " Chapter 11 - The Library


Holy shit a baseball bat !!!!!!

How she can not say something is unbelievable, it's like she's accepted "this is my life and I've just got to get on with it.

I ♡Evan ..."

Of course she did. (view spoiler)[ If she tells CPS, her cousins will be subjected to the foster care system, and it may be worse for them. She is almost of the house. The college recruiters saw her soccer game, there is definite interest.
She is such a sweet person, thinking of the little kids while the aunt from hell is snatching all her hair out from the roots (hide spoiler)]

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Vicci Audio Nerd wrote: " Chapter 13 - Replaced


OMG !!!
She hit her in front of the children and then blamed her for it !!!

And the belt !! Jesus she is completely deranged !!

“Emma, you have to tell someone.” Her wor..."

girl, for all we know, the aunt could be (view spoiler)[ beating the uncle, blackmailing him etc.
I wonder WHY she hates her so much.

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That's true I hadn't thought of that, perhaps that's why he's so worried about upsetting her?

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Chapter 21 - Just Friends

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We were engaged in a very intricate dance of touching without touching, knowing without saying, and feeling without expressing"

I love that.

Sarah and Jared sitting in a tree ........I can see it coming lol


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I am just beginning Chapter 11 now.

Thank you for encouraging me to go on with the book. It's definitely at least a 4-star. I am enjoying listening to it now!

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For real? Really?
She was locked out (view spoiler)[ for attending her soccer game? Her aunt hit her with a bat? What the F?
I hate that witch so much!
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Yeah im glad I picked it up again I'm really enjoying it.
Dont read any other spoliers yet though lol

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What kind of relationship did George have with Emma's father (view spoiler)[
that he isn't a loving and protective uncle?
What kind of relationship did Carol have with her inlaws that she is this hateful? (hide spoiler)]

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leaving work, but will be back around 10p

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Have fun x
it's nearly midnight here so I'll probably speak to you tomorrow

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Kids eating pizza before we hit the toad.

What Emma said to Sarah was AWFUL. I felt so bad for Sarah.
Evan is persistent, huh? He was trying to broker a peace treaty. What a great guy.

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I know I ♡him

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I'm off to bed it's 12.30 now, speak to you tomorrow.

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I'm on Chapter 18...after the visit from (view spoiler)[ Emma's drunk mama.

And she's going to dinner with Evan.
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I'm on Ch.20:
That dinner was hilarious. But I think Evan must have (view spoiler)[ slept with that girl. Catherine Jacobs. She was so pathetic. How sad.
Emma laughing at her must have really upset her. I wonder if she'll tell daddy Jacobs.

Jason's hook-up party. I bet Jason thought Evan was cock-blocking. Jason is a douchebag. I bet his party features date rape drugs too. That's why people don't talk about it. They hand pick vulnerable people to prey upon (hide spoiler)]

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Yeah that was what I thought.
I got worried when he closed the door behind him!

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Chapter 21 - Revealed

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Oh shit !!!

Wow my heart was in my mouth when I was listening to this chapter, and when Carol came and picked her up , it stopped!

Just when I thought she couldn't be any more of a bitch she pulls that out of the bag!

Jealousy? Really ? Is that all it is "He'll always choose me" What a sad sad old lady.

And when Evan was knocking on the window, I thought for sure that her aunt was going to burst in!

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Chapter 23 - Silence

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Ok what is going on here, why isn't Evan speaking to her, is it just because he is angry with Emma.

Hang on he went on a date !!!!!! Omg.....

No no nooooooo not Drew ....

What are they doing to each other ?!?!?!

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Chapter 24 - Fallen

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Erghh Her aunt is just vile.

Omg I didn't think she was going to stop hitting her.

YES EMMA RUN !!

What on earth is she doing playing soccer, if she gets bumped it will knock her out probably.

Oh.....


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Vicci Audio Nerd wrote: " Chapter 21 - Just Friends



We were engaged in a very intricate dance of touching without touching, knowing without saying, and feeling without expressing"

I love that.

Sarah and Jared sitting..."

I agree with you. The south or set that up well by Sarah complaining that Jason won't touch her.(view spoiler)[ that Jason's kind of boring and she needs more.
Then Bam! Jared shows up with Evan. If Sarah is as friendly with her body as Emma said in the locker room shower then it's a done deal (hide spoiler)]

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I like that Evan's mom likes Emma. That's so cool.

Off to swimming lesson, soccer and Birthday party. I'll be back online after 5pm. I'll try to finish up the book tonight.

I'm definitely enjoying it you

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Chapter 25 - Inevitable

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He's not Evan ♡

Sara and Jared.......i knew it !

George KNOWS!!
Emma, I don’t think I have to remind you that what happens in our house, stays in our house Wtf!!!


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Chapter 26 - Broken

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Evans gone !!!!!! Nooo

Arghhh just call him you have his number in your phone remember !!!!


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Yeah it's really good.
wow you've got a busy day, I'm doing helping make a solar system for homework lol.

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Chapter 27 - 29

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Hmm Drew ??

He seems a nice guy but I knew that he would probably want something else from Emma, he was all hands!

I like the fact that Emma and Sara have their weekends together now but I don't think Carol will let it go on too long without interfering.
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Chapter 29 - Flutter

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He's back Yay !!!

And they kissed ♡♡♡

They are just so cute together and I loved the fact that he wanted to have a talk about everything first.


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Chapter 31-

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Oohh sneaking out of the house to see Evan, I don't think this is going to end well, Carol seems to have it in for her again.

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Chapter 32

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Burn??? Where did she get a burn from?

Everyone has an idea about Carol, "you tripped??"


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Chapter 33

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Burn??? Where did she get a burn from?

Everyone has an idea about Carol, "you tripped??"

I don't think it'll be long till everyone finds out!

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Chapter 34 - Paying Attention

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I knew in that moment that I would never love anyone in my life the way I loved Evan Matthews!!

Ahh♡♡♡ Gush!!!!

I love the way Sara tried to get all of the juicy details out of her.

THE KNIFE !!!! Oh my god she is such a bitch !

Besides I only have 480 days left.

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Chapter 35 - Sabataged

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OMG she told Carol and asked them to go for dinner with Evans parents! !!

This is going to end badly !

Dinner made? What is she up to ???

She's put something in her food omg!!
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