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Archived: Series Reads > Fatal Consequences (Fatal #4) Start Date: December 7, 2015

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message 1: by Phoenix (Online Elf), Moderator (last edited Nov 13, 2015 06:30PM) (new)

Phoenix (Online Elf) | 4358 comments
Back from their honeymoon, Senator Nick Cappuano and D.C. Police Lieutenant Sam Holland are ready for some normalcy after the whirlwind of their wedding, but someone has other plans for them. When Sam discovers wedding cards containing thinly veiled death threats, she's not sure if she or Nick is the target.

Already on edge, Sam and her team start investigating a series of baffling murders. The victims are well-liked with no known enemies, and the murders are carried out in a clean and efficient manner. Unable to find a clear motive for the deaths, she feels like she's chasing her tail.

With no obvious connection between the victims, Sam soon suspects that she may be the ultimate prize in the killer's clever game. When the danger starts to hit a little too close to home, she has two goals: find the elusive murderer and manage to live long enough to enjoy her happily ever after.

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Please feel free to join us. As always expect spoilers .


Chapter Breakdown

Date Chapters PPDQs*
December ## Chp.01 – ?? ???
December ## Chp.?? – ?? ???
December ## Chp.?? – ?? ???

*PPDQs = Person Posting Discussion Questions



message 2: by Phoenix (Online Elf), Moderator (last edited Nov 13, 2015 06:30PM) (new)

Phoenix (Online Elf) | 4358 comments Reserved.


message 3: by ShoSho , Moderator (new) - rated it 3 stars

ShoSho  (shoshost) | 12263 comments In


message 4: by Lisa Kay, Moderator (new) - rated it 3 stars

Lisa Kay (lisakayalicemaria) | 20787 comments In, too.


message 5: by Sue (new) - rated it 4 stars

Sue | 205 comments I'm in


Chris (cdavies1951) | 312 comments I'm in.


Silvia In!


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ShoSho  (shoshost) | 12263 comments Got my book, I'll start Monday afternoon.


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Elishia | 2620 comments I'll start tomorrow some time need to finish 2 books first.


message 10: by Lisa Kay, Moderator (new) - rated it 3 stars

Lisa Kay (lisakayalicemaria) | 20787 comments I'll have company until Tuesday...I'll try and catch up fast.


Chris (cdavies1951) | 312 comments Ready to report!


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ShoSho  (shoshost) | 12263 comments I'm guessing MF has never lived with anyone with serious need for order. Messing up his orderly desk wouldn't be funny for someone like Nick! It would be frustrating.


Jonetta (ejaygirl) I agree, ShoSho. It ain't funny.


Chris (cdavies1951) | 312 comments My husband was so organized... I loved to open his sock drawer and "rearrange" it :-)


Silvia I have a book to finish and then will hop on this one!! Won't miss this for sure, love this series!!


⚜️XAR the Bookwyrm (xar-the-bookwyrm) I got caught up last week, so I'm in as well.


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ShoSho  (shoshost) | 12263 comments Chris wrote: "My husband was so organized... I loved to open his sock drawer and "rearrange" it :-)"

Did he think it was funny? If I do this to my hubby he'll go ballistic or just have a nervous breakdown :p
I should upload a photo of one of his drawers or our pantry!


message 18: by Chris (last edited Dec 07, 2015 10:32AM) (new) - rated it 3 stars

Chris (cdavies1951) | 312 comments ShoSho wrote: "Chris wrote: "My husband was so organized... I loved to open his sock drawer and "rearrange" it :-)"

Did he think it was funny? If I do this to my hubby he'll go ballistic or just have a nervous b..."


He absolutely hated it! He would laugh, too. He used to hang his shirts in order of color, too. It was his worst nightmare to have to share a closet with me :-) He was the total engineer, and had a military background.


message 19: by ShoSho , Moderator (last edited Dec 07, 2015 02:26PM) (new) - rated it 3 stars

ShoSho  (shoshost) | 12263 comments Too many romances going on

Freddie and Elin , Jeanine and Michael and Terry and Lindsay I'm guessing one of them are doomed! Not all 3 can have a HEA , What do you think ?

I love the 3 couples and their story lines.


message 20: by ShoSho , Moderator (new) - rated it 3 stars

ShoSho  (shoshost) | 12263 comments Too many mysteries and plot lines :


As for the murders , obviously there is a connection between Crystal's and the freezer bodies.

The threatening fan mail, other than thinking it might or might not be Peter I don't have any other suspect. It obviously can't be Stahl. He can't be that dumb. On that note how dumb is it to complain about not being invited to a wedding?

Skip's Pneumonia , I think he'll survive and he'll get to know who shot him in the future books.

The cold case that Jeanine is investigating it will be the reason she gets back her confidence to come back to work.


message 21: by ShoSho , Moderator (new) - rated it 3 stars

ShoSho  (shoshost) | 12263 comments I'm about to start chapter 14


message 22: by Chris (last edited Dec 07, 2015 03:03PM) (new) - rated it 3 stars

Chris (cdavies1951) | 312 comments There seemed to be more developed story lines that are fanning out. I like the way you get to know their entire community of friends.

Still not an Elin fan, but maybe it's the voice of the narrator. (view spoiler)


message 23: by Lisa Kay, Moderator (new) - rated it 3 stars

Lisa Kay (lisakayalicemaria) | 20787 comments Chris wrote: "He was the total engineer, and had a military background."

Oh, dear. A double whammy! I was married to an engineer. He was very OCD. I just thought I was OCD, until I lived with him.


message 24: by Lisa Kay, Moderator (new) - rated it 3 stars

Lisa Kay (lisakayalicemaria) | 20787 comments I started, while I fiddle-farted around "detailing" the kitchen and my company watches football.


message 25: by ShoSho , Moderator (new) - rated it 3 stars

ShoSho  (shoshost) | 12263 comments Chapter 21
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ShoSho  (shoshost) | 12263 comments Chapter 28
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ShoSho  (shoshost) | 12263 comments Chapter 31

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message 28: by ShoSho , Moderator (new) - rated it 3 stars

ShoSho  (shoshost) | 12263 comments I'm done.
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message 29: by Sue (last edited Dec 10, 2015 08:25AM) (new) - rated it 4 stars

Sue | 205 comments I enjoyed it, but definitely not as much as the others (my opinion). Having read the series, I find that if Nick is less engaged in the crime it's not as good.... the personal stuff is always great.

The last book just posted by the author is the exception. Fatal Frenzy most likely because the book is nearly all personal even the crime.


message 30: by ShoSho , Moderator (new) - rated it 3 stars

ShoSho  (shoshost) | 12263 comments Sue wrote: "I enjoyed it, but definitely not as much as the others (my opinion). Having read the series, I find that if Nick is less engaged in the crime it's not as good.... the personal stuff is always great..."

I hope the next one is better.


message 31: by Sue (last edited Dec 10, 2015 02:51PM) (new) - rated it 4 stars

Sue | 205 comments ShoSho wrote: "I hope the next one is better. ..."

I read my review of Fatal Deception (Fatal, #5) by Marie Force and up to that point, I thought it was the best. So don't worry... My least favorites were 4 & 8 (but 8 is necessary to enjoy 9).


message 32: by ShoSho , Moderator (new) - rated it 3 stars

ShoSho  (shoshost) | 12263 comments That's good to know thanks.


message 33: by Lisa Kay, Moderator (new) - rated it 3 stars

Lisa Kay (lisakayalicemaria) | 20787 comments It hasn't grabbed me, yet. In fact, I went on to another book. (Don't yell at me!)


message 34: by ShoSho , Moderator (new) - rated it 3 stars

ShoSho  (shoshost) | 12263 comments Lisa Kay wrote: "It hasn't grabbed me, yet. In fact, I went on to another book. (Don't yell at me!)"

I WON'T YELL!!!


Silvia Jumping in now!


message 36: by Lisa Kay, Moderator (new) - rated it 3 stars

Lisa Kay (lisakayalicemaria) | 20787 comments ShoSho wrote: "I WON'T YELL!!!"

LMBO!


message 37: by Lisa Kay, Moderator (new) - rated it 3 stars

Lisa Kay (lisakayalicemaria) | 20787 comments How did I get so behind on my books? I have two I need to read and review, as I committed myself. Plus, several in a series, if I want to keep up with other GR friends. And, I was offered one I really, really want to read from Net Gallery. *sigh*

Too much company. That's it. LOL!


Silvia @ chapt 14 there's something unnerving about Skip's wife (view spoiler) And what's with Sam (view spoiler) !!!


message 39: by ShoSho , Moderator (new) - rated it 3 stars

ShoSho  (shoshost) | 12263 comments Silvia wrote: "@ chapt 14 there's something unnerving about Skip's wife [spoilers removed] And what's with Sam [spoilers removed] !!!"

I know!! I kept thinking why didn't she take him to the hospital sooner.
And Sam acted dumb more than once!


Silvia @chapter 30 just read Terry's testimony at the AA meeting! Wow, just wow! My fave part of the book so far!


message 41: by Lara (new) - rated it 4 stars

Lara | 2335 comments I don't know how I missed this discussion! I listened to the audiobook earlier this month, so was ready. But, I didn't get notifications and it slipped my mind. I had a bunch of driving to do, so listened to the book at 1.5 speed, and I think that helped.

The thing I liked was that this one wasn't about some famous figure. However, the amount of time spent whining about the wedding cards and flailing around because they didn't have a motive for the murders was excessive.

Also, I thought the police work was a little sloppy. First, they should have been digging more on all of the victim's lives and associates, not just recent ones. Second, Sam broke her own court order against her ex by going to visit him. She should never have done so, and if there was a problem, I could see that compromising the case. Dumb. When is she going to get over herself and just let him be the crazy jerk that lied to her rather than being embarrassed that she didn't see it? Having him in every book sours my experience as I don't think he's necessary, and Sam's interactions with him are just stupidity on her part.


message 42: by Lara (new) - rated it 4 stars

Lara | 2335 comments ShoSho wrote: "I'm done.

... the cold case."


ShoSho, given Sam's character, I'm betting we haven't seen the end of it yet. Personally, I was hoping the story would give someone the chance to get things clear and off their back. But, that wasn't to be.


message 43: by Lara (new) - rated it 4 stars

Lara | 2335 comments ShoSho wrote: "Silvia wrote: "@ chapt 14 there's something unnerving about Skip's wife [spoilers removed] And what's with Sam [spoilers removed] !!!"

I know!! I kept thinking why didn't she take him to the hospi..."


There was a lot of dumb in this book, but since I listened to a sped up version when driving, it wasn't so bad. Although there was waaaay too much going on. So much drama!

One thing that didn't set well with me was how Jeannie's partner dropped her off and didn't wait until she got inside. Given his guilt over her attack, I was surprised.


message 44: by Lisa Kay, Moderator (last edited Dec 24, 2015 07:36AM) (new) - rated it 3 stars

Lisa Kay (lisakayalicemaria) | 20787 comments @ Lara

Also, I thought the police work was a little sloppy. First, they should have been digging more on all of the victim's lives and associates, not just recent ones.
Too true!
.Second, Sam broke her own court order against her ex by going to visit him. She should never have done so, and if there was a problem, I could see that compromising the case. Dumb.
Extremely dumb!
When is she going to get over herself and just let him be the crazy jerk that lied to her rather than being embarrassed that she didn't see it?
VERY good point. She should pull her Big Girl Panties up and get on with it.
Having him in every book sours my experience as I don't think he's necessary, and Sam's interactions with him are just stupidity on her part.
I can't tell you how much I TOTALLY agree with you on this, Lisa. Not enjoy his scenes or her handling of the sit.


message 45: by Lisa Kay, Moderator (new) - rated it 3 stars

Lisa Kay (lisakayalicemaria) | 20787 comments Lara wrote: "There was a lot of dumb in this book, but since I listened to a sped up version when driving, it wasn't so bad."

LOL! I should have go at that speed, too. I only did 1.25 speed. :o)


message 46: by Lisa Kay, Moderator (last edited Dec 24, 2015 07:40AM) (new) - rated it 3 stars

Lisa Kay (lisakayalicemaria) | 20787 comments Lara wrote: "One thing that didn't set well with me was how Jeannie's partner dropped her off and didn't wait until she got inside. Given his guilt over her attack, I was surprised."

DEFINITELY! "Little" detail things like this really bug me about this series. A partner of a rape victim wouldn't do that. I also go upset last book with Sam always saying she was always careful...when, obviously, she wasn't and lost her baby. Plus, she kept saying it afterwards and into this book! You'd think she'd at least flashback to when she hadn't been careful.


message 47: by ShoSho , Moderator (new) - rated it 3 stars

ShoSho  (shoshost) | 12263 comments Lisa Kay wrote: "Lara wrote: "One thing that didn't set well with me was how Jeannie's partner dropped her off and didn't wait until she got inside. Given his guilt over her attack, I was surprised."

DEFINITELY! "..."


That bugged me too.


message 48: by Lara (new) - rated it 4 stars

Lara | 2335 comments FYI, the 8th book in the series, Fatal Scandal (Fatal, #8) by Marie Force is $2.99 (at least in the US) at multiple ebook sellers right now.


message 49: by ShoSho , Moderator (new) - rated it 3 stars

ShoSho  (shoshost) | 12263 comments Thanks, Lara.


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