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Ellison
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Nov 14, 2015 05:34PM
I have to say "A woman brutalized to breaking point" makes this something I wouldn't care to read, however, all else the blurb is concise and to the point and I like it.
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Yes, I have to agree with Ellison. The word "brutalized" makes me think of all sorts of things I really don't want to think about. Could you use another descriptor? Something like: stressed, pressured, brain washed, or manipulated?
Tami
