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Brianna | 33 comments I was as normal as they come until the day of march,1,1820. I was sitting on the couch lisening to my sister rant on about the perfect gown to wear at the spring ball. She was so thrilled because mother said it would be the perfect place to find a man worthy to call husband.I on the other hand wasn't very fond on the idea that without a man you were worthless but those were the rules. My sister still ranting about her perfect dress gave me a look of pity and then asked,"Now sister what shall you wear on this night of chances to find a husband?" when she asked it occurred to me that I hadn't picked out a gown worthy to wear to the ball so answering her question with bravery I said," I haven't got a gown." I knew from the horror in her face as I spoke those words that she was going to find me a dress. "Well you mustn't worry dear Rizbé I shall find you a gown that will make the men see you as a goddess." Then without saying one more word she ran out the room for her quest. Leaving me alone and not a thing to do except sit .

That's when I heard a knock on my front door. As i walked over to greet who ever was awaited there I heard a familiar sound. Could it be , I thought racing to the front door. As I opened it i saw him, George kentworth. "George oh my what pleasure to see you!" I said with excitement racing threw my voice. " Yes it's more my pleasure Rizbé, is Phanta home I really need to see her?" he spoke with worry in his voice. " No, you just missed her she in the town on a quest to find me a gown for tonights ball." I said still excited to see him, see he was my sisters lover at one point they did everything together, so i grew fond of him as a brother until he left with his father to France. " Oh, well tell her I will want to see her as soon as possible." and then he walked away. He was in love with her I could hear it the way he talked but never mind to that I had to meet someone it was 2:00.

Then as I raced to lake I saw my lover sitting on the bench that faced the water. He was absolutely perfect the way his brown hair covered his eye When he wore it natural, his dark brown eyes That Went with his face completely,the way he talked when he was nervous and so many other things that made him perfect.As I said "James!" he looked back and smiled jumping up and rushing to me as he got closer to me he leaned on his nee, grabbed my hand and kissed it. He was charming in so many ways that is why I fell for him in the first place, after he kissed my hand he led me to the bench and we sat looking at the water reflecting the sky like a mirror."So Rizbé are you going to the spring ball tonight I heard it is going to be absolutely unforgettable!" he said as his words leaped up in the air. Answering his question calmly I said "James I would never dream not to attend a party so grand, are you attending this ball?" his smile reached the corner of his mouth "yes I shall attend I suppose its just that without a date it's pointless unless you shall go with me?" Jumping off the bench I said "Why my answer is yes of course!" He just smiled and spoke handsomely "Well I must be going ,bye Rizbé." Then as quickly as a fox he scurried up the hill to where the village laid.

Then still excited I heard the yelling of what sounded like a monster but I knew it was just my sister, she found my dress. So without thinking I ran towards the house where my sister held a magnificent gown. Her smile took up her face. She rushed me into my room to change. She started by handing me a corset then when it was in place she tighten it so tight I thought I might die. then she handed me the gown that was golden with professional detail as i put it on I looked like a god." Oh Rizbé you look absolutely magnificent in that dress.Oh I out done my self this time." she said tears appearing in her eyes so I responded " Yes you did a marvelous job, maybe you could do my hair because I not that good and hair you should know" She just grinned and started to work on my blonde hair. As she was pulling strands of hair up I suddenly remembered I didn't tell her about George. " Sister do you remember George Kentworth?" I asked then without even a second going by she responded "Now sister how could I ever forget him I thought I would marry him." excitingly I screamed " Well he back in town and," I paused " he came by and asked to talk to you, Phanta!" Her face went pink then she suddenly realized I was looking and smacked the back of my head. "Well after I done I shall talk to george." she said trying to hide how excited she was."Aww" I sang almost then she trying to get me off this topic asked "So I saw you with James on the bench is he taking you to the ball?"I just shakes my head and she mocked me by saying "aww" after that we just sat in complete silence .Finally after a hour she was finished with my hair. Then my sister was off to the town to see George. Little did I know that would be the last I saw of my dearest sister Phanta.

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Brianna | 33 comments ^*^*^*^*Please write your response back I did mess up on adding things were they didn't belong^*^*^*


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