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message 1: by Nurr (new)

Nurr Shahidna | 23 comments Mod
Please post your rhyming poem about either:

a) a character in your book or
b) about the book itself.

Your poem should be at least 8 lines.


message 2: by Arthur (new)

Arthur Gunawan | 6 comments Charlie and The Chocolate Factory

Chocolate oh chocolate
You are so sweet to eat
But sometimes so bitter
Can I have you as my birthday treat?

Mr Wonka oh Mr Wonka
What a big factory you have?
I would like to play inside
I would like to sleep inside

Little boy oh little boy
Would you be a good boy
So Mr Wonka would take you
Take you anywhere you want

Charlie oh Charlie
I’m glad that you behave well
Even you are so poor
You always have a big smile


message 3: by Wilson (new)

Wilson Wongosari | 13 comments Two Worlds from Frozen Pizza and Other Slices of Life

England was divided into two
Which two?
North and South
Poor North and Rich South

No matter what the prime minister said
How stable are the people's wealth was
We will never accept what he said
Poor and rich, it will always stay what it was


message 4: by Neha (last edited Oct 28, 2015 05:50AM) (new)

Neha Shinde | 15 comments Trumpet Voluntary Book and Audio CD Pack Level 6 Advanced (Cambridge English Readers) by Jeremy Harmer
Malgosia Armstrong feat Tibor Arkadi in the book Trumpet Voluntary

She looked into his eyes
And saw beautiful skies
Looking brilliant, tall and handsome
He captured her heart and held it for ransom

Adored by lots, but was secretly dangerous
Surely, he was contagious
Since love made her blind
For death, she'd come to find


message 5: by Valentina (new)

Valentina | 4 comments Deadly Harvest

Once upon a time
In a sleepy town
A detective always keep an eye
A murderer was found

This book is really interesting
Because the story is amazing
The story never dissapoint me
Read this book while drinking tea


message 6: by [deleted user] (new)

This poem is from the book called the shadow in the mountain
The regrets of Clare Newton

Should he had not love another
Should he had thrown his infidelity
Should he had listened to granny
Should he had lived with her happily

He would have stayed at home
He would have not climbed with that young
He would have taught me how to climb
And he would have had tea with me and Bruno


message 7: by Tania (new)

Tania Hartanto | 36 comments A poem about Steve Biko from the book Cry Freedom

Steve Biko the Great

What a wise man he was
A courageous one indeed
Biko fights for freedom
From white tyrants filled with greed

Steve Biko is greatness
But they killed his body
Now we who witnessed his greatness
Will sing and dance to his legacy

We chant Biko today
Biko tomorrow
Biko forever


message 8: by Tania (new)

Tania Hartanto | 36 comments A poem about Steve Biko from the book Cry Freedom

Steve Biko the Great

What a wise man he was
A courageous one indeed
Biko fights for freedom
From white tyrants filled with greed

Steve Biko is greatness
But they killed his body
Now we who witnessed his greatness
Will sing and dance to his legacy

We chant Biko today
Biko tomorrow
Biko forever


message 9: by Tania (new)

Tania Hartanto | 36 comments A poem about Steve Biko from the book Cry Freedom

Steve Biko the Great

What a wise man he was
A courageous one indeed
Biko fights for freedom
From white tyrants filled with greed

Steve Biko is greatness
But they killed his body
Now we who witnessed his greatness
Will sing and dance to his legacy

We chant Biko today
Biko tomorrow
Biko forever


message 10: by Natalia (new)

Natalia Tandiono (NataliaTandiono) | 18 comments AMELIA

Born with all the luck
Reputable family and great riches
Effortless, everything's hand
Anything that anyone wishes

But luck is never a enough
Such work should be done
Amelia, your fate
Not expected by anyone

Outshine by diligent girl
Who didn't mind paying the price
To get the life she wanted
In the end, she can rise

Amelia, born with all the luck
But in the end, oh, yuck


message 11: by Natalia (new)

Natalia Tandiono (NataliaTandiono) | 18 comments AMELIA

Born with all the luck
Reputable family and great riches
Effortless, everything's hand
Anything that anyone wishes

But luck is never a enough
Such work should be done
Amelia, your fate
Not expected by anyone

Outshine by diligent girl
Who didn't mind paying the price
To get the life she wanted
In the end, she can rise

Amelia, born with all the luck
But in the end, oh, yuck


message 12: by Natalia (new)

Natalia Tandiono (NataliaTandiono) | 18 comments AMELIA

Born with all the luck
Reputable family and great riches
Effortless, everything's hand
Anything that anyone wishes

But luck is never a enough
Such work should be done
Amelia, your fate
Not expected by anyone

Outshine by diligent girl
Who didn't mind paying the price
To get the life she wanted
In the end, she can rise

Amelia, born with all the luck
But in the end, oh, yuck


message 13: by Natalia (new)

Natalia Tandiono (NataliaTandiono) | 18 comments AMELIA

Born with all the luck
Reputable family and great riches
Effortless, everything's hand
Anything that anyone wishes

But luck is never a enough
Such work should be done
Amelia, your fate
Not expected by anyone

Outshine by diligent girl
Who didn't mind paying the price
To get the life she wanted
In the end, she can rise

Amelia, born with all the luck
But in the end, oh, yuck


message 14: by Michael (new)

Michael Santoso | 14 comments A poem about Maxine Cassidy from the book " Emergency Murder"

Kind-hearted she is
Makes your life full of bliss
Helps people all around
Turn your frown upside down

Playing tennis is what she loves
No matter if the person is injured
Because that's what she really loves
That's why she doesn't complain when she's injured


message 15: by Jasmine (new)

Jasmine | 20 comments Shadow in the mountain

The mountain held the town as in a shadow
I saw so much before I slept there once
I noticed that i missed him much
When they found his body

Near me it seemed
Felt like a wall
Behind everything impossible
Between the mountain was my grandfather


message 16: by Tiffany (new)

Tiffany Wibisono | 13 comments The book is called 'The Woman In White'



Walter Hartright

Walter is an art teacher,
he is extremely skillful.
He is such a fantastic teacher,
and teaches people very wonderful.

He draws really beautiful.
With all his patience,
he could be successful,
as successful as his patience.


message 17: by Tiffany (new)

Tiffany Wibisono | 13 comments The book is called 'The Woman In White'



Walter Hartright

Walter is an art teacher,
he is extremely skillful.
He is such a fantastic teacher,
and teaches people very wonderful.

He draws really beautiful.
With all his patience,
he could be successful,
as successful as his patience.


message 18: by Prudence (new)

Prudence Purwantoro | 8 comments Emergency Murder

Maxine oh Dr.Maxine
What a brave soul you are!
You're a doctor with a heart of gold
Really unflinchingly bold

Maxine oh Dr.Maxine
You almost got yourself killed
Not once, not twice ,but thrice
The murderer is going to pay a price


message 19: by Matthew (new)

Matthew | 13 comments What a generous person you are,
You are a wonderfully,giving,person
You are a person without a doubt
You are a wise man,
What a loving child you are,
You are not an ordinary man, you are a gentleman,
What an inspiring man you are


message 20: by Wilbert (new)

Wilbert Sean | 4 comments Dolphin music

On the quay the sailor stands,
His thoughts are turned to distant lands;
He sees wq


message 21: by Russell (new)

Russell | 28 comments THIS TIME IT'S PERSONAL

Nat marley is a private investigator
He is a very shiny bolded guy
He is like a dictator
He always helps people

He was the best investigator
He is fat and he is fluffy
He eats like an aligator
This poem is not funny
This Time It's Personal Level 6 by Alan Battersby


message 22: by Wilbert (new)

Wilbert Sean | 4 comments Dolphin music

On the quay the sailor stands,
His thoughts are turned to distant lands;
He sees the snow-caped mountains freeze
And hears the surf in tropic seas

His tawny skin is tattooed blue
And bears a picture of his sue;
His hair is thick, but growing grey,
His dreamy eyes look faraway


message 23: by Wilbert (new)

Wilbert Sean | 4 comments Dolphin music

On the quay the sailor stands,
His thoughts are turned to distant lands;
He sees the snow-caped mountains freeze
And hears the surf in tropic seas

His tawny skin is tattooed blue
And bears a picture of his sue;
His hair is thick, but growing grey,
His dreamy eyes look faraway


message 24: by Wilbert (new)

Wilbert Sean | 4 comments Dolphin music

On the quay the sailor stands,
His thoughts are turned to distant lands;
He sees the snow-caped mountains freeze
And hears the surf in tropic seas

His tawny skin is tattooed blue
And bears a picture of his sue;
His hair is thick, but growing grey,
His dreamy eyes look faraway


message 25: by Jennifer (new)

Jennifer | 9 comments Elizabeth Bennet (Pride and Prejudice)

Mr Bennet has some daughters
For Elizabeth is the brightest
She might look ordinary in glance
But she has the most independence

Her virtue is like a blessing
Yet her honesty is her charming
For her love is great
Being with the one she love is her
beautiful fate


message 26: by Jade (new)

Jade | 9 comments East 43rd Street Level 5
This book is sad
This book is bad
This book makes me want to go mad
This book is one of the worst i've had

I hate this book
It makes me want to puke
Don't ever show me this book
Or else i'll murder you


message 27: by David (new)

David Wirawan | 44 comments NAT MARLEY
From East 43rd Street

Detective Nat Marley
He is old, fat and chubby
His head is bald and shiny
And he makes people happy

His job is to solve crime
Without wasting time
His friends are so many that it's hard to count
Even if he doesn't have a social media account


message 28: by David (new)

David Wirawan | 44 comments NAT MARLEY
From East 43rd Street

Detective Nat Marley
He is old, fat and chubby
His head is bald and shiny
And he makes people happy

His job is to solve crime
Without wasting time
His friends are so many that it's hard to count
Even if he doesn't have a social media account


message 29: by Dyah (new)

Dyah Lavia | 13 comments Elizabeth Bennet (Pride and Prejudice)

Elizabeth is a beautiful girl
She is Mr Darcy's pearl
They overcome their pride
And Elizabeth became a bride

Now Elizabeth and Darcy are together
Because they love each other
Now in their mind
Love makes them blind


Janemichellehartono | 15 comments East 43rd street

Nat Marley, what a great investigator
A smart, bold, fat man
Who solves, who dares
What a very cunning man

Nat Marley,
You have solved crimes in your own way
We are impressed by you
I hope I will not be you someday


message 31: by Kimberly (new)

Kimberly Kwandy | 14 comments Solo Saxophone

Katy is a reporter,
so young and innocent.
She dated a cheater,
whose nickname is Vincent.

She was offered a work,
in a place where there's a war.
She thinks her work is a jerk,
but the still does it like its a chore.


message 32: by Shannon (new)

Shannon | 19 comments Frozen Pizza and Other Slices of Life

There are many stories
And u am very sleepy
I only read one story
And then i fell asleep

I read the frozen pizza
Because of the word pizza
Turns out it is about a man
And not some yummy pizza


message 33: by Delicia (new)

Delicia W | 16 comments The Woman In White

Standing in the moonlight
On the lonely heath
A woman dressed all in white
Shining wide and bright

A story of greed and evil
Innocence and betrayal
Confused Identities
And cruel deceptions


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