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1st Chapter!
Sunlight streamed through the windows. I woke up. I walked downstairs. I was an average 13 year old. Brown hair, Green eyes. Downstairs my younger sister Jamie, was eating pancakes. It was her birthday. She was 11.
“Happy Birthday Jamie!” I said.
“Thanks” Jamie said happily. My mom, Jane, entered the room.
“Oh hello Jacob! your up!”
“yup.” I yawned. “but I’m still tired”
“Well, Better eat breakfast. You don’t want to be late for school!”
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“your writing assignment will be to think of an imaginary land and describe it. What would it look like? Would there be different creatures? What would they be called? It’s due next Monday” said Ms. Jones “Class dismissed”
“Jacob! Jacob!” Jamie shouted across the hall.
“What?” I asked “ Don’t shout that loud! It’s embarrassing!”
“Look what my teacher got me!” she held up a kit-kat king sized candy bar and a ten dollar gift card to Target.
“Well you don’t have to make me jealous!”I said grumpily. “Let’s go home.”
“Sheesh”
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Jane walked out the door to go to the grocery store. She looked at her list, Banana’s, bread, broccoli, cake, onions, rice. Jane walked out the door.
Jane walked to the banana’s and picked five out.
“All done” she said. “I think I’ll do self checkout”
“That will be 12.79 dollars” said the machine. Jane swiped her credit card ing to the slot.
“Twelve dollars going down the drain” Jane said. “sheesh”
Jane walked toward the front door.
“We’ve been waiting for you” said a voice. Jane turned around. To men stood there. Tall and burly, broad shoulders, bald headed. The men were wearing sunglasses.
“Uh-hello, can I help you?”asked Jane frightened.
“You are going to hand us the key right. Now.” Said one of the two.
“What key?”
“Your key, the one you have.”
“you want my car key?” Jan asked.
“No, the key” The men walked up to her. \
“You’re coming with us.”one of the men said. They walked toward her. Jane screamed, she tried to run away but they caught hold of her and bound and gagged her.
“Mmmmm! Mmmmffff! Huhhh! Huhh!” Jane tried to resist but it was useless. The two men carried the struggling woman to their car and put her in it. The only thing that the men addent noticed was that Jane’s ring had slipped off in her finger asimst struggling.
Sunlight streamed through the windows. I woke up. I walked downstairs. I was an average 13 year old. Brown hair, Green eyes. Downstairs my younger sister Jamie, was eating pancakes. It was her birthday. She was 11.
“Happy Birthday Jamie!” I said.
“Thanks” Jamie said happily. My mom, Jane, entered the room.
“Oh hello Jacob! your up!”
“yup.” I yawned. “but I’m still tired”
“Well, Better eat breakfast. You don’t want to be late for school!”
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“your writing assignment will be to think of an imaginary land and describe it. What would it look like? Would there be different creatures? What would they be called? It’s due next Monday” said Ms. Jones “Class dismissed”
“Jacob! Jacob!” Jamie shouted across the hall.
“What?” I asked “ Don’t shout that loud! It’s embarrassing!”
“Look what my teacher got me!” she held up a kit-kat king sized candy bar and a ten dollar gift card to Target.
“Well you don’t have to make me jealous!”I said grumpily. “Let’s go home.”
“Sheesh”
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Jane walked out the door to go to the grocery store. She looked at her list, Banana’s, bread, broccoli, cake, onions, rice. Jane walked out the door.
Jane walked to the banana’s and picked five out.
“All done” she said. “I think I’ll do self checkout”
“That will be 12.79 dollars” said the machine. Jane swiped her credit card ing to the slot.
“Twelve dollars going down the drain” Jane said. “sheesh”
Jane walked toward the front door.
“We’ve been waiting for you” said a voice. Jane turned around. To men stood there. Tall and burly, broad shoulders, bald headed. The men were wearing sunglasses.
“Uh-hello, can I help you?”asked Jane frightened.
“You are going to hand us the key right. Now.” Said one of the two.
“What key?”
“Your key, the one you have.”
“you want my car key?” Jan asked.
“No, the key” The men walked up to her. \
“You’re coming with us.”one of the men said. They walked toward her. Jane screamed, she tried to run away but they caught hold of her and bound and gagged her.
“Mmmmm! Mmmmffff! Huhhh! Huhh!” Jane tried to resist but it was useless. The two men carried the struggling woman to their car and put her in it. The only thing that the men addent noticed was that Jane’s ring had slipped off in her finger asimst struggling.
About: Jacob is an ordinary 13 year old. But when his mom get's abducted will he go after her? When his sister Jamie, runs off to save there mom, he knows then he has to go to. When he runs into a portal leading to another world he realizes saving his mom is going to be a lot harder than expected.
Prologue: Once there was a man named Igor. Igor was a wicked man, hungry for power. He wanted to control the world the only way was to unlock the Demon Prison. By doing that he needed the key. The Key of Power. Crafted in the hands of the God Hestaphus. When used it gives you anything you want. Igor was searching for that. But Grendel the Wizard and crafted it into something nobody knew. It would glow in the hands of the keeper of the key. Igor always thought he was the keeper so he went to Grendel saying:
“ Grendel the the Key of Power to me! I am the Keeper! I deserve it! Give it to me!” Grendel gave the key to Igor knowing that it would not work. Igor held it in his hand.
“You liar!!!!” screamed Igor “give me the true key! Give it to me!”
“That is the Key of Power. You are not the keeper.” With that Igor fled with the key. He accidentally dropped it, down deep in the earth.
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1000,000,000 years later some English men had found the key and decided to make it into to a ring for it’s shining gold was gorgeous. People bought it not knowing it was the ring of power. people past it down for many generations. Until one girl got it: Jane Wilde.
I will post the 1st chapter when I can!