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Ohhh, I am going to have to try this.....
Pam wrote: "Ohhh, I am going to have to try this....."
Me too. If you smell something burning it's my brain cells frying. But I'd love to come up with something to do with Eternity Springs...and those handsome men. LOL.
Me too. If you smell something burning it's my brain cells frying. But I'd love to come up with something to do with Eternity Springs...and those handsome men. LOL.
Paula wrote: "Pam wrote: "Ohhh, I am going to have to try this....."Me too. If you smell something burning it's my brain cells frying. But I'd love to come up with something to do with Eternity Springs...and t..."
Never tried it, my thoughts & writing style are too business like. I really struggle to write anything which isn't in a formal style.
Y'all, we can totally do this. I woke I thinking about it! Just need to think while I work today! Thanks for the challenge Paula! :)
***Drumroll, please!*** This one was so easy it's embarrassing...and it came to me in a flash. I am no longer a Haiku Virgin! Ready...set...read:
Eternity Springs
Colorado mountain town
Where Hearts Come To Heal
(inspired by a quiet house, a sleeping dog, a cat on my lap, and New Age music on TV.)
Eternity Springs
Colorado mountain town
Where Hearts Come To Heal
(inspired by a quiet house, a sleeping dog, a cat on my lap, and New Age music on TV.)
That is awesome Paula! I was OMG, there is no way, Haiku is way too hard. But yours makes total sense. Great job!
Thank you! I was stupidified by how easy it was. It's addictive. I want to do more.
Excellent Paula!! I've been thinking about an ES one all day and yours is wonderful!
Have a broken heartA place to heal and renew
Eternity Springs
This is fun. I like it. Have a great day everyone. Linda Manthey
Linda wrote: "Have a broken heart
A place to heal and renew
Eternity Springs
This is fun. I like it. Have a great day everyone. Linda Manthey"
Great job, Linda! I'm going to work on one that makes reference to some of the other advantages of living in ES... hint-hint-hint.
A place to heal and renew
Eternity Springs
This is fun. I like it. Have a great day everyone. Linda Manthey"
Great job, Linda! I'm going to work on one that makes reference to some of the other advantages of living in ES... hint-hint-hint.
Cicero and RoseRefined and transformed as one
By the fire of life.
I'm hooked. I love this.
Have fun everyone
Linda Manthey
Linda wrote: "Cicero and RoseRefined and transformed as one
By the fire of life.
I'm hooked. I love this.
Have fun everyone
Linda Manthey"
You go girl! You have the talent. Love them!
Linda that is very good.
Linda -- you've got the gift!!! That was so good and so perfect for our story! It is fun once you let your mind loose on the 'puzzle' of haiku!
There's a contemporary Christian song that has the same theme - refined by the fire. It will nag at me until I remember who sang that one. It's from the 80's I think....
AHHH! "The Refiner's Fire" by Steve Green. Score one for my sieve of a memory.
There's a contemporary Christian song that has the same theme - refined by the fire. It will nag at me until I remember who sang that one. It's from the 80's I think....
AHHH! "The Refiner's Fire" by Steve Green. Score one for my sieve of a memory.
A new haiku....
Authors make magic
Transforming words to feelings
And feelings to words.
P.S. This is really addictive once you get the right inspiration!!
Authors make magic
Transforming words to feelings
And feelings to words.
P.S. This is really addictive once you get the right inspiration!!
Good job Paula! I am going to try this soon. Y'all are having such fun. ☺️
Paula wrote: "Linda -- you've got the gift!!! That was so good and so perfect for our story! It is fun once you let your mind loose on the 'puzzle' of haiku!There's a contemporary Christian song that has the s..."
Oh my goodness, I had such a crush on Steve Green when I was a youth. We used to go to Christian Music concerts at Disneyland and Knott's Berry Farm with our youth group. It was such a blast. They would have different groups all over the park and you just went from one to another all night long. WOW memories... Those were fun times. Have a great night everyone. Linda Manthey
I got to see and meet Steve at church. He gave a concert during one of our revivals and it was incredible. I'll never forget it!
Paula, love yours! Y'all are so talented!
Ok here is my attempt, keeping with the ES series theme.A feeling of peace
From the mountains topped with snow
Eternity Springs.
Beautiful!! I love it! Emily will too!
Here is my submission. I will have you know it's taken a week to write this because I kept going over the syllables count. :( grrrrr So here goes:Having a bad day
Enter Eternity Springs
It will heal your heart.
Whew!!!! Next challenge please....
Jina wrote: "Here is my submission. I will have you know it's taken a week to write this because I kept going over the syllables count. :( grrrrr So here goes:Having a bad day
Enter Eternity Springs
It will he..."
Love it Jina and it fits really well with the series!
Jina wrote: "Here is my submission. I will have you know it's taken a week to write this because I kept going over the syllables count. :( grrrrr So here goes:
Having a bad day
Enter Eternity Springs
It will he..."
Brilliant, Jina!! I love it!! You are all so talented!
Having a bad day
Enter Eternity Springs
It will he..."
Brilliant, Jina!! I love it!! You are all so talented!
Jessica wrote: "What is it?"
We haven't set up a new challenge yet ... but we will, for Heartsong Cottage!
Paula
We haven't set up a new challenge yet ... but we will, for Heartsong Cottage!
Paula
Try it. Double points if the haiku that you write has something to do with Eternity Springs. (I absolutely will try it myself...but it may take a while.)
Haiku is a three-line poem structured as:
5 syllables
7 syllables
5 syllables
Google it for examples. It's truly an art form. And have fun. I'd love to see what you come up with.