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When I write, I work in 3rd limited past. I don't have large character casts, but I prefer the extra freedom of 3rd when I write. I don't mind reading 1st past - in fact, I've read several very good novels in that style, such as Burning Bright and Curse of Prometheus: A Tale of Medea.

When I write, ..."
Not everyone likes everything. POV and tense are not strong factors for me in reading. In writing, I go with what works. My first novel is first person, present, so you wouldn't like it either.




To caveat this, first person can be a hit or miss affair. If I don't like the voice, then no matter how well written the book is, or how fancy its plot, I won't get pass page 1 or 2...
A book written in third person pov feels cooler in tone to me. It's harder for me to sink into, but I'm also more patient with it.
Someone else mentioned earlier that the new wave of YA is all in first so I guess the pov choice is also genre-dependent?


I've seen books that have 1st person for the main protagonist and 3rd limited for little jaunts into other heads, which is something I may try sometime, but, when I do read 1st, I want to be primarily (95%+) in the head of one person, or it disturbs my immersion.
I hope that makes sense.


However, I also really enjoyed "Cut" by Patricia McCormick and "Go Ask Alice" by (Anonymous, if you prefer) Beatrice Sparks.
"Cut" is written in 2nd person and the reader is subjected to playing the role of therapist. This is a "love it or hate it" aspect in my opinion, meaning you either love it or hate it. "Go Ask Alice" on the other hand is more of an apostrophe where the main character is always talking to her diary.
Other fun POVs and structures include Harry Potter, the highly descriptive but eerily mysterious Lolita, Remeber Me? by Sophie Kinsella where the main character has amnesia, some of the dialogue only books really appeal to my gossip-loving side, and I'm sure I'm leaving out better ones, but these are what comes to mind.

Thank god. I'm not alone. I prefer to write in 1st person, which is a true talent, but tricky. I've been challenged to write my current novel in 3rd by my agent and editor, just as a change of perspective. It's hard to be an overseer when I'm living in the world of the work. It's really good, but my editor has had her work cut out for her fixing my two-headed changes in POV...ugh! Always up for the challenge:)

I wrote both my books in first person POV.
I've tried to re-write small parts in third person just to see how it would sound but my stubborn MC disappeared on me and left me with nothing. Writer's block? Not really, just a missing MC. :P
So First person POV (past tense) it stayed.

True or false?

In my personal library of favorite books *glances over shoulder*, it's everything. 1st, 2nd, 3rd. Personally, I read whatever works best for the story. If the POV doesn't work, then I find it undreadable.
Switching back to being an author, in the past 5 years or so, I've noticed the extremely popular books have been mostly YA and written in the 1st person, so I guess it's only natural others would be inspired to continue with that.

Probably why so much of the YA genre are written from that POV. That period of one's life is, necessarily, one of being self-conscious.


3rd person is fine for some stories but not all. I've even tried a mix of 1st & 3rd and got many comments hating it.

'Tis true. For me, good 3rd person doesn't tell me everything, but it makes me (the reader) like the "devil on the shoulder." I'm following along with the character, hearing his/her thoughts, seeing what he/she sees...but there's enough detachment that the reader might hear the footsteps that the character didn't notice, or catch the wince on someone's face that the character dismissed as unimportant.
I don't want to BE the character when I read. I want to be WITH the character.
Character driven, large cast: Third limited
Plot driven, one main focus: third limited
Plot driven, large cast: Third Omni
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Nice breakdown, although I tend to think all good stories are 'character driven' even something like GOT which fits the PD/LC category. If I didn't care about Tyrion, Arya and Daenrys, I wouldn't be interested in the plot developments.
As it happens, I write 3rd Person/Present with Omni. The present tense wasn't conscious, it was how the first book developed. I was worried about it because it was unusual, but when I tried to switch to third person/past, it became really awkward and wouldn't flow. I need the Omni since it's sci-fi and it's pretty hard to world build without it.
Since romantic sci-fi isn't a huge seller to start with, I can't tell if the unusual tense is hindering sales. It doesn't seem to be affecting the reviews.