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message 3801: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments ((no shoot her or something. Get creative.;) ))

Kher smiled I'd think quick.

Emmy smirked at Ellis.


message 3802: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((oh joy))

Lemme go then. Shadow knew what she was going to do but she needed Kher out of her head first.


message 3803: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments ((haha dw bout it.))

Alright Kher got out of her head. She smiled pleasantly, thats what made it so scary.




message 3804: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((tehe))

Shadow levitated some of the smoldering rocks, about four the size of fists. They were red hot. She made them soar at Emmy,hitting her in the back and one hit her head. I'm sorry. She continued doing things like this.


message 3805: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Emmy was knocked out by the one to the head.

Patrik saw this he yelled
"SALEM! What are you doing?!"


message 3806: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "I'm sorry." she collapsed, crying bitterly. Ellis was just as confused as Patrik.


message 3807: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Kher placed a hand on Emmy and dissapeared.

Patrik ran to Salem, and grabbed her roughly
"What did you do?"


message 3808: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Shadow couldn't stop, could barely breathe for it. "Sorry,sorry,sorry..."

Ellis walked over. "Leave her be."


message 3809: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Patrik calmed down "What happened?" he was gentler this time. He shut Ellis out.


message 3810: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "She,Kher, I'm sorry." she couldn't concentrate well enough to answer him properly.


message 3811: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "It's ok I'm sorry I freaked." He put a hand on her shoulder calming her down a little.
"What happened?"


message 3812: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "That girl, Kherington, she got in my mind Patrik. She told me I had to, she made me see the future. I didn't want to..Emmy's okay. I'll see her soon." her breathing was shallow.

Ellis stood by for a moment.


message 3813: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "Its alright." Patrik said he stood up and looked at Ellis. Glared is the more accurate term.


message 3814: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Ellis sighed and grabbed Shadow's arm, pulling her up to stand beside him.


message 3815: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Patrik wanted to kill them all. His power wasn't as intense as Emmy's was.


message 3816: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((can Hunter wake up?))

Ellis started to pull her to the car that had arrived at the scene but she was stronger than he was and was ignoring his attempts to speak to her.


message 3817: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments ((sure))

patrik looked at Salem.

Hunter woke up and stood up angrily


message 3818: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "Stop it Ellis." she said calmly,her voice hard. "I may not waant someone else to kill you but I sure as hell wouldn't be afraid to do it myself."

He smiled, "As if."


message 3819: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "And if she doesn't kill you, I know a few people who will be more then happy to kill you." Patrik interjected.


message 3820: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "Oh yeah? That's wonderful." Ellis motioned for Hunter to come over.


message 3821: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Hunter walked over.

"Isn't it just?" Patrik smiled


message 3822: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "Indeed." Ellis handed Shadow to Hunter, knowing he'd have a better chance with her than he would.

Shadow glared at him but it was weak.


message 3823: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "Oh what Ellis you going to shoot me?" Patrik asked "You can do absolutely nothing to me."


message 3824: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Ellis made a face. "No, I'm not going to shoot you. I'm going to tell you something."

Shadow bit her lip and tried to take her arm back.


message 3825: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "And what is that?" Patrik asked

Hunter tightened his grip on her.


message 3826: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "If you fight, your girlfriend dies."

Shadow stiffened.


message 3827: by Hannah (last edited Feb 06, 2010 07:22PM) (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Patrik was motionless.
"You so much as touch her, I'll kill everyone you ever cared about." he snarled.


message 3828: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "that would be a lot harder than it sounds." Ellis replied, walking towards the car.

Shadow yawned, tuckered out.


message 3829: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Patrik grinned darkly
"I can kill them all from here. And if they are all dead already, I can do one better."


message 3830: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "What do you mean?"


message 3831: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Patrik smiled
"You touch Emmy. You will find out."


message 3832: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "I won't be touching anyone." Ellis stated, walking to the car and getting in.

Shadow looked at Patrik. "Be safe." she was very tempted to knee Hunter in the 'place where the sun don't shine' but her body wouldn't let her.

"Let's go Hunter!"


message 3833: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "You too." Patrik said and once again he was happy she couldn't read his thoughts.

Hunter pulled Salem after him.


message 3834: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Shadow nodded to Patrik and reluctantly went with Hunter.


message 3835: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Patrik was left where he was.


message 3836: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "Why?" she said when they were in the car. "Why?" just why, nothing else.


message 3837: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Kher appeared next to her
"Why what?"


message 3838: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "Holy goodness! Don't friggin do that!"


message 3839: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "You asked and I'm one of the only ones that can answer. So I came. Now. Why what?"


message 3840: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "Why did you do that? You knew he would get mad, didn't you?"


message 3841: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "Of course i did. He was supposed to stay mad though. He has potential as well. He can control himself though, Emmy can't and she is part shadow. So we can use her."


message 3842: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "I hate you. You used me Kher."


message 3843: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "Of course I did. You didn't expect me to believe that you would watch while Ellis burnt to death. You would stop her and you did, just as I thought you would."


message 3844: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Shadow bit her lip again and didn't answer her old friend. I hope we get there soon.

Ellis took the conversation in stride.


message 3845: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Kher grinned and said quietly "What's worse, you have to deal with Emmy when you get there."


message 3846: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "Thanks a lot." Shadow muttered unhappily as the car slowed.


message 3847: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Kher smirked "Anytime"


message 3848: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "Idiot."

The car stopped and Ellis got out,running into the building.


message 3849: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Kher stood and walked out. Motioning for Shadow to follow.


message 3850: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments She didn't want to but she was sore and tired and didn't feel like fighting the 'friggin idiots' that had brought her there. Shadow slid out and trailed behind Kherington.


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