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message 15851: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Salem flinched at a sudden onslaught of raw power.


message 15852: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Emmy bit her lip, silencing any sound that would have escaped as waves of it came at them. Each so much more powerful than the last.

((incandescense??))



message 15853: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((Gah. I thought I answered there. Thanks.))

All she could think was that she could not let her hands come off Emmy.


message 15854: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments ((anytime))

She was shaking, what she wanted more than anything was to take her hands off the cursed Rune. Then again, she knew it was much too late to turn back.


message 15855: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((xD))

All thoughts were erased from her mind for the time being and the flames soared higher, burning brighter. She didn't let go.


message 15856: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments ((:D I hope it stops spazzing...))

For the first, and hopefully last, time in her life the flames burned where they touched. Leaving a painful outline of the tattoos that marked her for this job. As horribly selfish as it was, Emmy was glad that Salem was with her.


message 15857: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((So do I.))

She bit her lip to stop a cry from passing.

Back in the real world, Salem's body trembled.


message 15858: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments ((I replied on Incandesence))

There couldn't be much of this left. There just couldn't, they had taken half at Salem's birthday. How much more? That was all that she was thinking,
How much more could they take?
How much longer? They all just swirled in her pain fogged head.


Josiah looked down at Salem. He pulled her closer, wishing he could help more. He looked over at Patrik, Josiah was sure his face mirrored Patrik's look.


message 15859: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((I know.))

She was hot to the touch. It was as if the flames were somehow there as well.

The same thought popped into Salem's mind and she contemplated it.


message 15860: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments ((I saw after I posted. ;) Just having a plan b in case technology decided to spazz again))

Josiah moved out from under her and layed her down.
"Patrik, wet a few towels."
"Already on it." he replied handing him one.
"Thanks." Josiah placed it on her, like a blanket and then took his spot back.

As if in answer the last energy peices coursed through them. Leaving them both burnt out and exahusted. Emmy's hands slid from the wall and down to her sides.


message 15861: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((Yep. :P))

Salem's hands disengaged from Emmy's back as she fell to her knees.


message 15862: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments ((I do love that roleplay... actually all of them are just too epic))

Emmy followed suit, resting her head on the wall untill she could manage to do otherwise.


message 15863: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((Too epic? Impossible!))

When she could speak again, all she said was, "Holy shit."


message 15864: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments ((I know right!? We have done the impossible!!!))

Emmy moved to face her,
"Exactly." she nodded slowly.
Her hands were still shaking slightly, like a soft vibration, barely noticeable.
"Thank you," she said to her best friend.



message 15865: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((*grin* It's crazy!))

"No problem," she said dryly, looking up. "That was...hot."


message 15866: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments ((*grins back* That's why we're the BEST!))

Emmy laughed
"Yeah, it always is with us."
Sarcasam. Even now.



message 15867: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((Indeed we are!))

Salem chuckled, her hand going to her chest. She winced, but a smile was soon back on her face. "Oh of course."


message 15868: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments ((:D The most epic role players ever. lol))

Somehow, Emmy was positive she would never know how, she managed to pull herself to her feet. Leaning against teh wall a little she held a hand to Salem
"I wouldn't do that..." Aloysia spoke softly
Emmy almost wanted to fall to the floor again
"Now you come."



message 15869: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((*hugs* Mhm! We ROCK!))

Salem glanced in the direction the sound had come from, her vision foggy and her chest aching and burning.


message 15870: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments ((*hugs back* Hells yes we do!!!))

Emmy found it was harder to concentrate on anything. Her body didn't want to hold her up any longer.
Aloysia stepped towards them
"You'll kill eachother if you try to get back."
"So we're stuck here?"
"Did I say that? Getting back requires power. Power that is this room's. You two can't control it yet. I'll send you home, but be careful. Both of you. It's going to take a long time to get to where you were before today." She sounded apologetic
"Mom, what does that mean?"



message 15871: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((*grins wickedly*)) ((only here to get this because I HAD to respond one more time here. :P))

Salem's body was deathly still.

"Wait, what?" she asked, feeling faint.


message 15872: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((...xD...))


message 15873: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments ((Hahah. okay. lol))
Aloysia just looked at her daughter, years of guilt was found there
"Mom. What do you mean?" Emmy repeated again, knowing that she had ignored Salem.
"You both wont be the same," Was all she said that time putting her hand on the girls shoulders
"I'm so very sorry."



message 15874: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((I love the drama here. And Aloysia, oddly.))

Salem couldn't even bring herself to tense under the woman's touch as she found Aloysia's words rang true. Too true.


message 15875: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments ((me too. She's getting more likeable))

Emmy just closed her eyes,
"Be careful," She said one last time and then sent them back.


It felt as if someone had slammed her back into her body. Every sense had been intensified, she gasped her back arching slightly. She could feel she was shaking again


message 15876: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((It's crazy, but not bad. *nod*))

Salem whimpered, which was very unlike herself, and she convulsed harshly.

Farrow was silent, watching the girls even as she watched the kids.


message 15877: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments ((Not bad at all))

Josiah put a hand on her face
"Salem."

Patrik put a cool hand on Emmy's neck, she shied away from it making the smallest exclamation of pain.
Both boys knew instantly that this was going to be so much worse than last time. So much worse


message 15878: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((Right.))

It felt as if his touch was searing her skin and yet she got a small comfort from having him there. Salem wasn't sure whether to cry or to tell him she loved him.


message 15879: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments ((:D)

Josiah left his hand there for a second, but her stroked her hair. Murmuring softly.

Patrik looked up at Farrow, as he sat with Emmy's head on his lap. He knew she hurt, there wasn't much he could do.
Emmy bit down on her lip, not stopping untill she tasted the blood.


message 15880: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "It's worse than I thought," Farrow whispered.

Salem's eyes opened slowly, painfully, and she looked up at Josiah.


message 15881: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Josiah heard her but kept his gaze on Salem.
"Hey love." he breathed

Patrik put a cool hand on Emmy's shoulder, she needed to stay within a reasonable temperature. He could already feel her heat through his clothes.
Emmy closed her eyes against it and wimpered as quietly as she possibly could.
"take your hand off of me. Patrik please.."


message 15882: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "Sneaks..." she breathed, shivering violently though her skin was still burning. "It's s-so c-cold in h-here.."


message 15883: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Josiah nodded
"Okay. I'll get you a few blankets okay? I'll be right back." He moved away from her.

"You're burning Emmy," he reasoned
"Please, you're making it hurt more," it took everything just to keep her voice normal
"I know. I'm sorry, just one more minute okay?"


message 15884: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Salem grabbed his hand, wincing but not letting go. "Don't go."


message 15885: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments He stopped and placed himself back under her.
"ok, I won't"

Emmy pulled away from him slightly
"It's okay love, I'm done." Patrik whispered
She rested her head on his lap and closed her eyes tightly her hands knotting in the blanket. He stroked her hair, running his fingers gently along her back


message 15886: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((I'm liking Landon and Kael.))

She curled into him, willing to face the pain just to have him close. "Thank-you," she murmured.


message 15887: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments ((Our vampires??))

Josiah pulled another blanket over her
"Your welcome."

Patrik looked back up at Farrow, questions in his eyes.
Emmy willed the darkness to come back, if only to escape the hell that she was in for a little while.


message 15888: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((Yep. I like bad guys. :P Usually.))

Farrow shook her head. "Not now, Patrik. Later."

Salem shivered and moaned quietly.


message 15889: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments ((Oh yes. everyone has a soft spot for them))

"Shh, I know love. I know. Just try to sleep." Josiah breathed

Patrik nodded once and returned his attention to Emmy
"It wasn't this bad last time..." She breathed against his stomach
"It'll get better," Patrik blindly promised


message 15890: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((:D))

Farrow winced at Patrik's careless assumption.


She closed her eyes, terrified to let go.


message 15891: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments ((haha))

Josiah squeezed her hand softly

Patrik shook his head, knowing that it wasn't going to
"Don't lie Patrik." Emmy almost laughed "You were never good at it."


message 15892: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Farrow almost smiled at how Emmy's attitude.

Salem held his hand tightly even as she began to drift.


message 15893: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Josiah kept running his fingers along the skin of her shoulder, murmuring softly.

Patrik smiled and kissed her hair
"Don't blame me for trying."
Emmy kissed the skin of his stomach
"No, I love you for it." she breathed as her body started shaking noticibly again. Everything hurt suddenly again, two fold. As if punishing her for letting it fade to the backround for a moment.
She cried out softly.


message 15894: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments She slept, but it was a troubled sleep and her brow was creased with worry and pain.


message 15895: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Josiah stayed up, running his hands through her hair talking softly.

Patrik placed his hand on her neck again
"Emmy, sleep." he told her gently
How could she say that she was trying, but it was hard to get the words out right.


message 15896: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Eventually she relaxed in his arms.


message 15897: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Josiah felt the difference and relaxed as well, sighing softly.

Answering her prayers the darkness reared up and took her again.
Patrik felt her body go slack, and he breathed. His eyes flicked to Farrow again.


message 15898: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Farrow sighed. "I don't know much...but..."


message 15899: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Josiah looked up at Farrow as well
"ANything is better than nothing."
Patrik was of the same mind
"Please."


message 15900: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments She groaned. "They're not the same anymore."


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